I've been watching/testing this for while. The scenes, renders and models are great.
So that is a plus.
Negative
1. dialogue, you need a lot more dialogue, to draw the viewer into the characters.
2. Renders shit load more. Third release should have around 750 scenes rendered. Some if done right can be reused.
Example. If the MC is doing the taking, during the talking. So lets say, Nicole. You can have animation (using renpy) that her face has movement (mouth and eye movement). If its done right, you can have some overlays from different renders to change clothing, lighting for the day, and location (background) for her body. It will save time in the long run.
You can have repeat sex scenes but as the story progresses, increase the scenes you can do. For example, Ary would change to her being awake and ready for evening BJ, that would change later to full night of sex (mixture and whole lot of renders).
The scenes should never be *click image*, one render scene, then animation, then one additional render to close scene. Update done. yuck!
The biggest thing it needs is story, then images/scenes that go along with said story.
if your limited Computer power, I have been working with Developer for over two years (paid) and I render about 400 scenes per month. I also have multiple developers that are newish that I render scenes (limited) about 100 scenes each per month. enough that helps beef up the rendered scenes and frees up their time to create the scenes. Thus their computer isn't bogged down rendering all the time, or doing one scene at time. which burns up a lot of time. When your creating scenes, its best, when your focused on what you want to do. Pump out several scenes for the story (could be in their room, beach, and etc...).
If you need help with English translation I can do that to.
Lastly If your slow, then I would to updates bi-monthly. So lets say continued story 10000 words dialogue and around 500 renders and animations (extra). So animations 30 renders per section of animation. For sex scene you can have 3 or 4 animations with lots of still scenes between them. So bi-monthly it would be around 800 renders (stills and animations). You have making of good story, the character morphs are awesome. Just need to implement some ideas that I said. People will be happy.
Xirbeus