VN Ren'Py Abandoned Haunted University [v0.1] [Axolotl Games]

[Prokopije]

I do not even know who is who at this point to be honest since I have not downloaded the game. Waiting for clarity on the monogamy path and more content.

I assume this girl is the sore point of contention for v0.1 fucking the roommate? Or at least I think this is the girl who fucks the roommate..?

No. "NTR" girl is not visible in OP pictures.

 

[PSYlevi]

I do not even know who is who at this point to be honest since I have not downloaded the game. Waiting for clarity on the monogamy path and more content.

I assume this girl is the sore point of contention for v0.1 fucking the roommate? Or at least I think this is the girl who fucks the roommate..?

Not this girl, this girl is a LI (with a bitch attidute, who had harem of simps in the school).

This girl who fucks roommate:

 

[wisesage]

Not this girl, this girl is a LI (with a bitch attidute, who had harem of simps in the school).

This girl who fucks roommate:
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They look like sisters to me lmao

 

[Clemency]

No. "NTR" girl is not visible in OP pictures.

Not this girl, this girl is a LI (with a bitch attidute, who had harem of simps in the school).

This girl who fucks roommate:
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Ah, I see, I see. Guess I did not miss out much. I really need to get on this game's discord. Based on what people are talking about, I thought these three were the LIs:



I assume two of these are though. The ones on the left and the right are cute.

 

[Prokopije]

Ah, I see, I see. Guess I did not miss out much. I really need to get on this game's discord. Based on what people are talking about, I thought these three were the LIs:

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I assume two of these are though. One on the left and the right are kinda cute.

It seems so, + add girl from your previous post, because you already can go on a date-ish dinner with her and it seems she'll be big time present in the story, so she's probably a main girl as well.

 

[PSYlevi]

Ah, I see, I see. Guess I did not miss out much. I really need to get on this game's discord. Based on what people are talking about, I thought these three were the LIs:

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I assume two of these are though. The ones on the left and the right are cute.

Only first one confirmed is a LI. We don't know for sure about others two.
We have only 3 confirmed LI out of 7, at this point. One you showed in previous post. Second one in this post. Third one with a blue hair, who we don't see much in the game rn.

 

[ryansFLYIN]

Confirmed LIs:

Spoiler: Dina

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Spoiler: Kimberly

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Spoiler: Sakura

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Potential side girls?

Spoiler: Other Characters

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This is just what is listed in the Album, so the Others is just an assumption. Mercedes and Heaven don't appear, just the girl the roommate fucks and the bartender so far. We also apparently haven't met the other 4 LI's.

The bartender I can get down with, but I'm not interested in my roommates scraps... he straight up calls her a hooker, and considering he is in a relationship with another girl and she knows it but still bangs him on the MC's bed (which the MC is way too chill about), that's really all we need to know about her.

 

[Wicks99]

Confirmed LIs:

Spoiler: Dina

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Spoiler: Kimberly

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Spoiler: Sakura

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This is just what is listed in the Album, so the Others is just an assumption. Mercedes and Heaven don't appear, just the girl the roommate fucks and the bartender so far. We also apparently haven't met the other 4 LI's.

The bartender I can get down with, but I'm not interested in my roommates scraps... he straight up calls her a hooker, and considering he is in a relationship with another girl and she knows it but still bangs him on the MC's bed (which the MC is way too chill about), that's really all we need to know about her.

Oh so there are 7 LIs. Then what's all the fuss over having only one LI and the rest as sides? Was it something the developer said specifically or just speculation from some players?

 

[Clemency]

Oh so there are 7 LIs. Then what's all the fuss over having only one LI and the rest as sides? Was it something the developer said specifically or just speculation from some players?

You can only pick one of the seven exclusively (and they will have sex with you exclusively) but he also said you can have a "harem" of side-characters who are in a more open relationship with other guys. What he means with that (monogamy + a "harem of side characters" or monogamy is the end goal but you can choose to not commit to any of the 7 and just be a fuckboy with the side characters?), he refuses to elaborate and his discord link is not working because it is not an invite link.

Here's his post:

Hello,
The game will have important choices that will impact the story and the relationships with the LI.
But for the moment, the choices have little impact. I'll wait until I've introduced each LI properly before I really start making big choices.

The game will have 7 LI. For the moment there's only Dina, Kimberly and Sakura.
All the other characters are secondary, and it will be possible to have relationships with them without consequences.
The LIs, on the other hand, are not part of the harem aspect.
As for the number of chapters, I'm thinking about ten. The best games are those that have an end, and don't drag on unnecessarily.

I apologize in advance for my bad English.

 

[Greebz]

Hello,
The game will have important choices that will impact the story and the relationships with the LI.
But for the moment, the choices have little impact. I'll wait until I've introduced each LI properly before I really start making big choices.

The game will have 7 LI. For the moment there's only Dina, Kimberly and Sakura.
All the other characters are secondary, and it will be possible to have relationships with them without consequences.
The LIs, on the other hand, are not part of the harem aspect.
As for the number of chapters, I'm thinking about ten. The best games are those that have an end, and don't drag on unnecessarily.

I apologize in advance for my bad English.

As important as breeding those bitches? Sorry! Do you plan on implementing pregnancy and breeding content though? Much love!

 

[kuraiken]

Yeah speculation of "ntr shit" cause some guys has been chocked to find one girl in bed with a guy (with one big obvious warning, this is not imposed) and other sides girls talking about banging others guys...
Also, speculation this is a 0.1 prologue version, first game, everything can change and mistakes happened. I think he close his discord because he don't want to take any insults, "ntr" and cheating is sensitive over here...

He closed his discord?
I wouldn't be surprised. There's people getting all upset here that I wouldn't talk to if you offered me a thousand bucks.

I think the only real mistake the dev made was not clearly explaining what kind of harem to expect at the start of the game, to send all the thin skinned incel kiddies packing so they don't clog up the thread and go elsewhere.

That's probably what a lot of game devs should be doing moving forward. Offer a disclaimer that makes clear who they don't pander to so those kiddies take their ceaseless whining elsewhere and don't get invested in a game that hurts their fragile masculinity.

 

[Naps-On-Dirt]

I haven't finished yet but from a technical standpoint, the writing is pretty good for a non-native speaker. The only issues I've seen so far are repeated incorrect pronouns (very common in games from devs whose native language is gendered, like French and Spanish) and the occasional butchered idiom. And some spelling errors. (Chapitre 2 coming soon???)

 

[Clemency]

You know what, she is usually not my type but I can fix her casual disregard for her father's labor law violations!



Also, it's early but I like my friend group already.

That's probably what a lot of game devs should be doing moving forward. Offer a disclaimer that makes clear who they don't pander to so those kiddies take their ceaseless whining elsewhere and don't get invested in a game that hurts their fragile masculinity.

Tides of Succession's dev has aced this part. Props to that guy.

 

[kuraiken]

You know what, she is usually not my type but I can fix her casual disregard for her father's labor law violations!

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Very optimistic. I noped my way out of that one. Hope she changes for the better later on, but I do require some level of acceptable personality.

Also, it's early but I like my friend group already.

That was a pretty positive surprise. A lot of games barely if ever put any male friends into a story, and if so, they're all some personalityless stereotype. Feels like there's a lot of potential for the type of friend group full of unique individuals here.

Tides of Succession's dev has aced this part. Props to that guy.

Huh. Never played that one, but looks promising. Guess I'll check it out, thanks.
But yeah, signaling to the audience what to expect and what not to expect is surprisingly important. Quality alone rarely lands, you need to signal to kind of people who'd like your story and warn away those who wouldn't.
Most of the negative reviews so far are just people who are not the audience for this game.

 

[Wicks99]

You can only pick one of the seven exclusively (and they will have sex with you exclusively) but he also said you can have a "harem" of side-characters who are in a more open relationship with other guys. What he means with that (monogamy + a "harem of side characters" or monogamy is the end goal but you can choose to not commit to any of the 7 and just be a fuckboy with the side characters?), he refuses to elaborate and his discord link is not working because it is not an invite link.

Here's his post:

What a strange approach... I've played harem or pick one LI games, but pick one LI with a harem of side girls is rare. I wonder how the game is going to be internally consistent going forward

 

[Wicks99]

He closed his discord?
I wouldn't be surprised. There's people getting all upset here that I wouldn't talk to if you offered me a thousand bucks.

I think the only real mistake the dev made was not clearly explaining what kind of harem to expect at the start of the game, to send all the thin skinned incel kiddies packing so they don't clog up the thread and go elsewhere.

That's probably what a lot of game devs should be doing moving forward. Offer a disclaimer that makes clear who they don't pander to so those kiddies take their ceaseless whining elsewhere and don't get invested in a game that hurts their fragile masculinity.

Yea, tat's why I often advocate developers to collect feedback in a more statistical manner. A lot of the screaming and shouting on forums and Discord are often just the works of a vocal minority.

 

[ryansFLYIN]

What a strange approach... I've played harem or pick one LI games, but pick one LI with a harem of side girls is rare. I wonder how the game is going to be internally consistent going forward

My guess is that he is going to have this like BaDIK - one of several LI's or a 'harem' of side whoresgirls.

 

[BTWZ1]

looks promising. I wish good luck to dev. and finally the MC has an original face and not a stock one from daz3d.

 

[kuraiken]

looks promising. I wish good luck to dev. and finally the MC has an original face and not a stock one from daz3d.

Yeah, the MC's face & hair isn't exactly my thing, but I prefer playing a unique looking protagonist with personality to all the default faces that stand around trying to look masculine with little emotion or facial expression and the personality of a refrigerator door.

That's one of the things that stands out to me: the MC, his boys, and the girls all have their own unique look & personality, instead of the same model in 5 different variants.

 

[LinkBox88]

Not bad. It's early so maybe it will round out but I found the depiction of the students to be a bit too stereotypical. It kind of made a lot the characters seem shallow or two-dimensional.

Like the frumpy girl has to be super meek and skittish, hot girl has to be vapid and a bully, jocks are idiot brutes. I guess that's a criticism I would have for most college games but this one didn't rise above it. Let's see more nuance when it comes to the characterization.