- Jan 25, 2022
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Alright, next batch:
1)
Misising comma after "nice".
2)
Missing comma after "See".
3)
The comma at the end should be a period.
4)
Missing comma after "thanks".
5)
Missing comma after "here" and "takes should be "take".
6)
Can't rememebr if I reported this one previously, so just in case: Missing comma after "Hello".
7)
"yuor" should be "your". Also I think "stank" should be "stink".
8)
Missing comma after "go". Also it might be better to make this two sentenses, with "I've had enough of you!" being the first one.
A few other things:
1)
The NPC here always faces down, even when approached from above. I assume this is because initially the NPC is on the ground and you have Direction Fix turned ON. You should make it so that the courier turns around to face Ali and Lily when talking to them after getting healed.
2)
Something seems to have gone wrong when making this part of the map. Notice how the rock formation in front of Ali is cut off, bottom part missing? Same with the one a little further to the right: bottom part missing.
3)
A minor oversight, I assume, but only the middle tile brings you back to the previous map. The left and right are passable, but do not bring you back
4)
I don't know if this is itended or not, but there is no Yes and No options for Selene's Chapter 4 quest. It is automatically accepted after checking it out, despite the text asking if you want to accept it. The other two side quests have the expected Yes and No options.
1)
![Typo1.png Typo1.png](https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/10/thumb/3047369_Typo1.png)
Misising comma after "nice".
2)
![Typo2.png Typo2.png](https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/10/thumb/3047370_Typo2.png)
Missing comma after "See".
3)
![Typo3.png Typo3.png](https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/10/thumb/3047371_Typo3.png)
The comma at the end should be a period.
4)
![Typo4.png Typo4.png](https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/10/thumb/3047372_Typo4.png)
Missing comma after "thanks".
5)
![Typo5 comma and typo.png Typo5 comma and typo.png](https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/10/thumb/3047373_Typo5_comma_and_typo.png)
Missing comma after "here" and "takes should be "take".
6)
![Typo6.png Typo6.png](https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/10/thumb/3047374_Typo6.png)
Can't rememebr if I reported this one previously, so just in case: Missing comma after "Hello".
7)
![Typo7.png Typo7.png](https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/10/thumb/3047375_Typo7.png)
"yuor" should be "your". Also I think "stank" should be "stink".
8)
![Typo8.png Typo8.png](https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/10/thumb/3047376_Typo8.png)
Missing comma after "go". Also it might be better to make this two sentenses, with "I've had enough of you!" being the first one.
A few other things:
1)
![Bug1.png Bug1.png](https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/10/thumb/3047378_Bug1.png)
The NPC here always faces down, even when approached from above. I assume this is because initially the NPC is on the ground and you have Direction Fix turned ON. You should make it so that the courier turns around to face Ali and Lily when talking to them after getting healed.
2)
![Bug2.png Bug2.png](https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/10/thumb/3047379_Bug2.png)
Something seems to have gone wrong when making this part of the map. Notice how the rock formation in front of Ali is cut off, bottom part missing? Same with the one a little further to the right: bottom part missing.
3)
![Bug3.png Bug3.png](https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/10/thumb/3047380_Bug3.png)
A minor oversight, I assume, but only the middle tile brings you back to the previous map. The left and right are passable, but do not bring you back
4)
![Bug4.png Bug4.png](https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/10/thumb/3047381_Bug4.png)
I don't know if this is itended or not, but there is no Yes and No options for Selene's Chapter 4 quest. It is automatically accepted after checking it out, despite the text asking if you want to accept it. The other two side quests have the expected Yes and No options.