You mean, cringiness.But it's all done with wholesomeness.[/ISPOILER]
I gave your game another shot, but holy fuck, you cannot go one fucking scene without using your cringe ass fucking humor. As I said before, it's amusing to a person who just discovered memes and think they're wildest shit ever. Tone it the fuck down.
Look at Goddesses' Whim. Humor is there, it's nothing special, but it's not in your face the whole fucking time and it's not done in a cringe way.