Oh, I didn't even think of that one. I can absolutely do that. It'll be optional though.
Great to hear! And yes, optional is probably best.
Anyway, next batch:
Minor thing, and a bit hard to see because the screen is blurry, but:
The Angry baloon should be showing on top of the commander, not on top of the soldier (that's during the cutscene when the commander asks if anyone wants to spar with Ali and Lily, during the Werewolf quest).
Typos:
1)
"ones" should be "one's"
2)
Misising comma after "awesome"
3)
"deals" should be "deal's"
4)
"be" should be "by" . Also, I tihnk "there's" should be "there have"
5)
I tihnk "near" should be "nearly".
6)
"see" should be "sees"
7)
"farmers" should be "farmer's"
8)
"couples" should be "couple's"
9)
Either "is taken" should be "has taken", or "taken down here" should be "taking you down here".
10)
"a the" - one word too many, probably remove the "a".
11)
"You're" should be "your".
12)
"be" should be "by"
13)
Missing comma after "girlfriend".
14)
Missing comma after "sup".
15)
"dogs" should be "dog's"
16)
"soldiers" should be "soldier's"
17)
"armies" should be "army's"
18) and 19)
"creatures" should be "creature's", since they are talking about a single one.
20)
"monsters" should be "moinster's", for the same reason as above.
21)
"heads" should be "head's"
22)
Misising comma after "Hello"
23)
"women" should be "woman" (since there is only one Lily)
24)
"Goddess'" should be "Goddesses"
25)
"They've" should be "They are" (or "They have been").
