VN - Ren'Py - Heart Problems [v0.8 Final] [Xenorav]

The overall premise of the game of course is not original, but it's not to bad. It does suffer from an overall feeling of being cheap.

Renders 5/10 : Average renders, the characters are ok, the environment is rather cheap though.

Story 4/10 : Suffers from context problems, as well as being unimaginative and bland. Changing the relation to the characters also causes problems, it is not properly thought out.

Animations 1/10 : Cheap and poor animated 2 second loops, along with no feeling of actually having realistic sex. Of course this is so common with these story/games. Since the story is bland and the animations cheap, this story/game is not memorable. More effort into improving both would change that.

Playability 8/10 : Since there is no grind in the game to earn things, the playabilty is high.

Content 5/10 : Chapters are not really short, nor are they long so for the amount of time it has been out there is an ok amount of content.


Overall : Although not likely, a redo of the whole thing with much better and imaginative story, As well as improving the animations. Would make this a better story/game.
As it is, it is not something that grabs the players attention or is memorable. One playthrough and there is no real desire for more.

It would be an interesting incest game if it weren't for the unbearable little girl who makes you want to play it anymore. As soon as you start chapter 3 you lose all interest.

It has good graphics, it's not about a sister/mother and it's about a cousin/aunt along with a friend and her mother which within non-logic is the most logical thing .

Simple plot & simple animation. But very focused on HOT main characters. Incest and NTR? amazing combination.
Also quite interesting character: Stephanie
She's pure, crazy, childish, slutty, and loli all together. I'd definitely play her route if developer adds more contents for her.

Damn it's good.This is amazing incest game like ICSTOR.
i like the story and the models are great..
I like kissing scene very erotic and fucking hot.
Renders are great.
The animation are good
All girls are desirable.
More power to Dev..

I played it till the end and I have to admit that the story plot is nice. The author made the younger secondary character really annoying, in my opinion hitting the target to get some variation. I’m also eager to see how the plot develops with the other co-protagonists. The renders of the girls are stunning!

Damn its good. There are many games with good renders and even better renders. But main parts of enjoyment - dialogues and plot. Yeah, they are still very amature but Im really can feel that chemistry. Im afraid only one thing - not beign able to live that long untill this game will be finished.

When I saw this I really had hearth-problems....


It has everything you will want from amazing Incest game!

• Hot mother and daughters
• Interesting dialogs, moments and some story
• Corruption and good pacing

But where this shines is.... Insanely beautiful models and Superb quality renders!!!

Wow, simply wow. This game is very hot, albeit still early in development. But it's so damn good and i can't wait to see the future.

The characters are really good looking. The game is definitely above average in the looks department. Some of the models look beautiful. Honestly the main girls are some of the most beautiful models i have ever seen.

The writing is generally high quality all throughout.

The situations and sexual content is really good. The buildup is really good. Even though there is little to no sexual situations with the main characters and right now it is buildup, it's still really good. I might usually be annoyed there is no sexual content yet with the main characters, but the buildup is so good, the characterization of the girls is so good, i can't wait for it to build up to the sexual content with them.

Edit: This was when i played an earlier version. Now i've played this version 0.7 and it's much better. It was already good, but now it's GREAT. Wow, it's so damn good.

Good game with an interesting story, this game has potential. I think the developer should pay more attention to this game . I am enjoying the story of this love triangle between the MC and the thirteen beautiful cats that live with him. I want to see how he will keep relationships hidden from each of the girls .

A great game!
The renders are great and the girls beautiful. At first I fell in love with the eldest cousin as she is just so beautiful, but the aunt and younger cousin are great as well.
The game has no sandbox element and so no grind, you go throug hthe story enjoying the events.
There are regular choices to make but i haven't been convinced with the results as it seems we pretty much go through the same stuff, at the exception of some naughty scenes that get skipped. But that also mean you don't have to worry too much, just choose whatever you want when a choice comes up without worrying hwo it would affect others girls.
Anyways, great game and can't wait to see more

There was no story, but you want to play the game somehow. The process is actually very slow, but the game does not bother you. Because scenes are always great sexually. I mean, the slow process is turning you on.

Renders 9/10 : As I said. Views are nice but not the best. Sex scenes of course include sex sounds and animations. This is a good thing.

Story 7/10 There was no story in this game. You play a normal incest game like the others. Don't set your expectations high for the story. But at least you should know that the game story makes sense. No bullshits.

Writing 10/10 I am fucking love the writting. Dev has written in simple language. You can easily understand. If your native language is not English like me, this game is for you.

Female characters: Each has a different personality. And they're all sexy. Especially my favorite is Stephine. Because Dev made him a real teenager.

I'm looking forward to see more of it.

A very decent game. It has potential to become a big one. Although it's kinda cliche, the dev knows how to stand out with the dialogue. Good models and good ASSets (maybe Mia and her mom wasn't that good models, but it's okay; variety is good). Well-written scenes, although the most memorables were Stephanie's ones for me.

Obviously, the game has flaws (PLOT TWIST: every game has) but it's a really good choice in general. It already outstands at its 0.3, can't wait to see how the game progresses in the future.

Good luck to the dev!

Overall the game isn't bad. The renders are good. The storyline is typical of an incest game but I like it. The characters you can romance with fit most of the people's fetishes. The only complaint is that whoever wrote the dialog for English need to proofread or hire someone to do so. Some of the dialogs are worded strangely.

(revisited the game after nearly 2 years, previous rating was 3 stars)

+Amelie
+Amelie's big juicy booty
+Amelie's smile
+Everything about Amelie
+animations (they get muuuuch better after chapter 5)
+nice renders (also get better)
+here and there good sound effects

-MC is still ugly as ever, he looks like a 10 year old in a body of 22 year old trenbolone enjoyer
- story (every chapter is exactly the same)
- music got slightly better, but its still really bad
-dialog (its bad, but you get used to itt)

To keep it a buck I still think this game is 3 stars in terms of overall quality, but I like Amelie too much, also the animations got much better, also there is so much booty in this game I have to give it 4 stars. Props to the dev, hes gotten better.

Even though its very early I have to give this game 5 star, all the characters looks beautiful, the milf got a bit exaggerated body proportions but it somehow compliments her motherly personality. My initial thought while playing this game was that all the girls in the game will be bimbo and dumb asf especially judging by their body definition but i was caught off guard by the awesome writing and pacing, each character feels real and believable i mean the sexual tension and all the build up is portrayed gracefully. I can only imagine what a masterpiece this game will turn out to be in a year or so.

Really nice renders and animation. Especially since the game is only a couple of hundred mb. The story is also pretty cool. Its pretty much the same as all others but i guess thats just my thing
Also music and sound are on point.

This best game and very unique ,renders secene are best quality , well written realistic story and good dialogue, game play is amazing it put you really in the drama family , yeah very the best five star good job !! i love aunt xoxo

v0.3

There are certain things in this game that i definitelly like. Character models is just one of them. Story is somewhat generic but interesting nevertheless. What i totally dislike is that this game seams to be choice based however as of v0.3 choices doesn't matter. Like there's unavoidable scene with Lauren (fat lady) and no matter what you chose in the end you always end up with her. I don't like the case where the game pretends to give you an option while in reality there's no option at all. For now i'm giving this game 3/5.

Damn i love the aunt and cousins. bombastic bodies and very sexual situations.
Everytime this game updates i immediately get excited
The aunt is so fucking sexy
The game is mostly touching and rubbing but with girls like these that is good enough. Can't wait for more.
Easily one of my favorite VNs

Review of v0.3
OVERALL HOTNESS/EROTICISM: 9.7/10

SOUND 8.5/10 - music adds to the experience without being distracting and fits the style/mood of the game. kinda like a relaxed cool jazz version of porn music. SFX are sexy and add to the experience also

ANIMATIONS 7.8/10 - they're decent and add to the experience, nothing distracting or especially bad

OUTFITS 8.5/10 - this is a nice detail and adds to the immersion. most of the fabric looks really good too except the yoga pants which doesn't look attractive and also looks poor render quality (maybe doing a solid colour and just doing a yoga pants texture would be better) and some of the tank tops on amelie have this common immersion break where the cloth meets inbetween her breasts and crash thru each other

DESIGNS 9/10 - designs of the girls are fantastic overall and very attractive. if you like really satisfyingly large breasts that look really good, the look is really nailed with the design of amelia. mia/lauren could be improved while still not outshine the main cast and fit their niche imo. they look more like they belong in a different game as is. think mia could be more attractive while still be alternative/punk-ish and lauren could also be more like a slightly chunkier sofia vergara or something too. the designs of the main cast are all fantastic. the biggest critique i'd have is the haircut on stephanie looks pretty bad, like an accident or like she got gum in her hair and had to chop it off abruptly. if she's going to have short hair, maybe at least more like natalie portman in that stripper role she did or something, like sleek/simple short hair but something that looks like it's an intentional haircut

OVERALL WRITING 8.8/10

-SCENE CONCEPTS/SETUP/STORY 9/10 really good, feels inspired and erotic, the direction seems really deliberate and how characters are moved in the story works well. the only critique i have here is while i seem to get why the content/character rotation is so frequent, it seems a touch too frequent even if it's the intention. i wouldn't mind some longer stretches of developing a particular character's progression for awhile. it doesn't have to be a complete direction shift in the game, just maybe an arc or two in the game where we stay with one character for a few scenes, like a chapter consisting of like 55% amelia, maybe with an interluding scene with kylee that'd be 5% of the chapter and then another 20% with kylee and last 20% with stephanie for an example.

-CHARACTERS 9.8/10 each character feels like she has a distinct identity and their character profiles add to the eroticism

-DIALOGUE 6.5/10 the substance of the dialogue itself is almost always really good but the details are sometimes lackluster. there's some typos and funny grammar sometimes. i'd also like to say there are so many other games where the MC is such a flaming douchebag or so ridiculously pornographic, it's actually either not good or breaks immersion. this game is far better than most in that regard but still sometimes has a moment here and there i think could be better like the kissing amelie scene where the MC says "i plan on doing it a lot more", i think would be better as something like "i like being close to you" responded with "i like it very much too", or the scene where the MC tells amelie she's sexy and she says "sexy?" and he responds with "yea that's what i said". it breaks immersion imo to say something that feels more like he's trying to court or seduce her like a regular date. instead i think something like "sexy? i'm too old for anyone to find me sexy" responded with "but you are" doesn't break immersion as much.

FINAL NOTES: this is really the ideal of how to do the erotic VN format. the bells and whistles of the music, SFX and animated content scenes really go a long way even though it's not nearly as CPU intensive to run or develop as a fully animated game like paralogue. an important point about this game, it feels inspired. it feels like some horny teenager's fantasy and even though it's a VN, it's really up there with Lust Epidemic in terms of it feeling inspired. kinda a slow burn but seems like it's paced okay. look forward to it picking up steam and future updates.