- Oct 2, 2023
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Ok! I've finally finished and played through my re-write of Chapter 1, hopefully the rar file is attached to this post for anybody to try if they feel like it! just unpack it to the root directory of the game (Heart Problems ofc) and hey presto!
This re-write essentially just fleshes out the dialogue more, hopefully giving a more entertaining and richer experience to the reader.
I added my own spin on each character "archetype" and tried to make them more enjoyable overall, the events of the game don't deviate very much from the original, but you'll find the dialogue has a lot more bones to it and I think you might find it refreshing if only because of the contrast between the original script.
Let me know what you guys think! Any feedback is much appreciated!
P.S This is just the re-write for Chapter 1, I may work on Chapter 2 if there's any interest to see it developed.
P.P.S You may want to backup your original script.rpy file in the "game" folder in Heart Problems installation directory, just in case!
**UPDATE**: As requested, I have further touched up Chapter 1's dialogue to (hopefully) make it more viable to modify Amelie's relationship to that of Mother / Son (as well as Davie being Dad/Father etc) and it not clashing in any meaningful way.
When I work on future Chapter dialogue rewrites I will continue this trend going forward, to make everybody's favourite "Not Mom".. more easily addressable as.. "Mom".
I realise there may be inconsistencies created by my alterations to Chapter 1 in relation to the later ones, but rest assured! I'm confident I can re-align the following Chapters to make all of it.. make sense? =)
Feel free to check out this Ch1 rewrite here Chapter 1 Re-Write and drop any feedback!
This re-write essentially just fleshes out the dialogue more, hopefully giving a more entertaining and richer experience to the reader.
I added my own spin on each character "archetype" and tried to make them more enjoyable overall, the events of the game don't deviate very much from the original, but you'll find the dialogue has a lot more bones to it and I think you might find it refreshing if only because of the contrast between the original script.
Let me know what you guys think! Any feedback is much appreciated!
P.S This is just the re-write for Chapter 1, I may work on Chapter 2 if there's any interest to see it developed.
P.P.S You may want to backup your original script.rpy file in the "game" folder in Heart Problems installation directory, just in case!
**UPDATE**: As requested, I have further touched up Chapter 1's dialogue to (hopefully) make it more viable to modify Amelie's relationship to that of Mother / Son (as well as Davie being Dad/Father etc) and it not clashing in any meaningful way.
When I work on future Chapter dialogue rewrites I will continue this trend going forward, to make everybody's favourite "Not Mom".. more easily addressable as.. "Mom".
I realise there may be inconsistencies created by my alterations to Chapter 1 in relation to the later ones, but rest assured! I'm confident I can re-align the following Chapters to make all of it.. make sense? =)
Feel free to check out this Ch1 rewrite here Chapter 1 Re-Write and drop any feedback!
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