RPGM Henteria Chronicles Ch. 3 : The Peacekeepers [Update 15] [N_taii]

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haywire_hero

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Why are you so angry? We're only having a discussion!

I think it's a shame to so eagerly discredit somebody's work as nothing more than a porn game. Sure, a lot of the stuff on this site is... Low effort to say the least. But every creator on this site has the chance to create art with their work. I mean, this developer has proven that he can write quite well and develop characters in a decent manner. Call me an idealist but I do believe that you can have a good story in an NTR RPGmaker game!

I'm not bothered by the pacing, just anxious and worried over some recent decisions the story has taken. That's all. And clearly I'm not alone as other people have been voicing similar concerns. I trust the developer, however. So I'll wait and see when the next update comes out.
I'm not angry. I just think it's silly to try and act like we're dealing with some other form of media.

Also, it's not a discrediting someones work by calling their porn game a porn game. These games are for jacking off. That's why the stories result in constant porn scenes. I really don't understand how or why you've chosen to ignore what these games are. If a developer releases a new update that has little or no sex scenes, people bitch. Because, we're on this site for fucking porn. You can dress it up however you like the reality doesn't change. Calling porn Art is a stretch. But, it still doesn't change that all the stories in every game on this site no matter the quality relies on plot conveniences, over serialized characters, and a litany of literal fucking scenes.

So, you first say you think the pacing is atrocious in one post and now you're saying your not bothered by the pacing. You really don't see how contradictory that is? If you think the pacing is atrocious then stop playing and wait for it to be finished. It's a simple fix to an issue. It'll flow better and I didn't bring it up the last time. But, it'd probably help that you stop waiting week to week(as you claim) for updates on a porn game that releases monthly.
 
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I'm not angry. I just think it's silly to try and act like we're dealing with some other form of media.

Also, it's not a discrediting someones work by calling their porn game a porn game. These games are for jacking off. That's why the stories result in constant porn scenes. I really don't understand how or why you've chosen to ignore what these games are. If a developer releases a new update that has little or no sex scenes, people bitch. Because, we're on this site for fucking porn. You can dress it up however you like the reality doesn't change. Calling porn Art is a stretch. But, it still doesn't change that all the stories in every game on this site no matter the quality relies on plot conveniences, over serialized characters, and a litany of literal fucking scenes.

So, you first say you think the pacing is atrocious in one post and now you're saying your not bothered by the pacing. You really don't see how contradictory that is? If you think the pacing is atrocious then stop playing and wait for it to be finished. It's a simple fix to an issue. It'll flow better and I didn't bring it up the last time. But, it'd probably help that you stop waiting week to week(as you claim) for updates on a porn game that releases monthly.
It's erotica and yes, the game is designed for masturbation, but you can still aspire to have a higher quality inside the game. A fetish like NTR relies so heavily on character development and proper pacing, after all. I'm sure we've all seen plenty of games that start off perfect but immediately rush and ruin the NTR.

I can think the pacing is poor and also not be bothered by it. They aren't mutually exclusive. At the end of the day I was just giving some insight and wasn't trying to piss you off or anything. No need to snap at me! The fact that you're so passionate about this proves my point I think in that it's not just porn. Who gets this angry over porn? :')
 
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It's erotica and yes, the game is designed for masturbation, but you can still aspire to have a higher quality inside the game. A fetish like NTR relies so heavily on character development and proper pacing, after all. I'm sure we've all seen plenty of games that start off perfect but immediately rush and ruin the NTR.

I can think the pacing is poor and also not be bothered by it. They aren't mutually exclusive. At the end of the day I was just giving some insight and wasn't trying to piss you off or anything. No need to snap at me! The fact that you're so passionate about this proves my point I think in that it's not just porn. Who gets this angry over porn? :')
Dude. If your really going to ignore what I say, what are we discussing? I literally told you I'm not angry, but you don't seem interested to acknowledge what I've just told you. If you've taken anything as anger that's on you. Don't push your narrative on me. Stop trying to be a victim.

On top of that, it doesn't matter what high quality of anything is added to the porn game it's still a porn game. That's specifically written around fetishes. Trying to pretend otherwise doesn't help your position. This isn't high art, it will always be just porn. Also, yeah it is a contradiction by calling pacing atrocious and then claiming it doesn't bother you.
 

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This isn't Scars of Summer where you can play a more active role in stopping the rivals.
Having played Scars of Summer exhaustively, this point leaves me a little confused. Do you mean in the sense of giving the player a choice to just not engage with any of the trigger events around the map so that they can pursue the happy ending without encountering NTR along the way? Because that is not at all what I was trying to get across. Again, I enjoy NTR and fully understand that this is a linear game up until the very end where it branches into different flavored endings, so when I talk about having Leto be more involved in the story, I don't mean that I want him to "get the upper hand" and actually prevent any of the corruption.

A fundamental part of telling a good story (and I mean good as in "entertaining", not masterful or award-worthy) is having the ability to create the illusion that things could go a different way. Coming at it from the opposite end of the spectrum... Imagine a more typical story where the good guy wins in the end. But if you make that too transparent, it completely deflates the drama when no one ever presents a threat to him. It becomes boring because the character never seems like they are truly in danger.

That is how the villains currently feel in this story to me, and it's not because I secretly hate NTR and want them to lose.
 
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Having played Scars of Summer exhaustively, this point leaves me a little confused. Do you mean in the sense of giving the player a choice to just not engage with any of the trigger events around the map so that they can pursue the happy ending without encountering NTR along the way? Because that is not at all what I was trying to get across. Again, I enjoy NTR and fully understand that this is a linear game up until the very end where it branches into different flavored endings, so when I talk about having Leto be more involved in the story, I don't mean that I want him to "get the upper hand" and actually prevent any of the corruption.

A fundamental part of telling a good story (and I mean good as in "entertaining", not masterful or award-worthy) is having the ability to create the illusion that things could go a different way. Coming at it from the opposite end of the spectrum... Imagine a more typical story where the good guy wins in the end. But if you make that too transparent, it completely deflates the drama when no one ever presents a threat to him. It becomes boring because the character never seems like they are truly in danger.

That is how the villains currently feel in this story to me, and it's not because I secretly hate NTR and want them to lose.
My point about Scars of Summer is that it gives the illusion of stopping the rivals. The MC is able to take a more active role in preventing or slowing down the rivals progression.

The Henteria series on the other hand isn't about the illusion of stopping rivals. But to see the inevitable play out. That is by design. NTR has a multitude of specific niches. This one in particular is about the obliviousness of the protagonists losing it all. The MC isn't going to find out until it's too late as the girls will have been fully stolen away. The drama of the story is the tragedy of the MC. Watching as the protagonist continues to unknowingly help those that are working against him.
Stories aren't forced to follow specific conventions. Like telenovelas can basically have a villian win with no real reprucussions until the final couple episodes. Game of Thrones is basically villian porn. They antagonists stay on top for the vast majority of the series, with really no challange from the protagonists. So, I really don't ascribe to that perspecitive that the villians have to be constantly challanged in any capacity for a story to be good.
 

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I suppose we just have wildly different expectations when it comes to stories, then. Not much point in continuing to argue ourselves in circles or me trying to nitpick about other examples, so I'll just leave it at that!
 

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I need everybody to stop whatever it is that they're doing and write down every single freeroam event that they know of that takes place in the shed right next to the Church ASAP, not just the ones with Haylen, ALL freeroam events.
Hopefully everybody is calm today and there won't be another wave of light-novel sized posts for a while so that my post can survive for the day at least.

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Btw i'm not trying to prove N_Taii wrong, i'm trying to prove MYSELF wrong.
 

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I need everybody to stop whatever it is that they're doing and write down every single freeroam event that they know of that takes place in the shed right next to the Church ASAP, not just the ones with Haylen, ALL freeroam events.
Hopefully everybody is calm today and there won't be another wave of light-novel sized posts for a while so that my post can survive for the day at least.

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Btw i'm not trying to prove N_Taii wrong, i'm trying to prove MYSELF wrong.

I mean, he just used it last update for Liliys past dream sequence stuff, so it's for sure not something he forgot about.
 

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I need everybody to stop whatever it is that they're doing and write down every single freeroam event that they know of that takes place in the shed right next to the Church ASAP, not just the ones with Haylen, ALL freeroam events.
Hopefully everybody is calm today and there won't be another wave of light-novel sized posts for a while so that my post can survive for the day at least.

context:
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Btw i'm not trying to prove N_Taii wrong, i'm trying to prove MYSELF wrong.
I just re-checked everything in the walkthrough and the game files, and there's indeed only one freeroam with her in the shed on Fridath morning. I might have mistaken another character/NPC's freeroam event and thought it involved Haylen. Well, next update's a good opportunity to add a new one in there^^
 

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I'm pretty sure theres at least 1 guard npc event in the shed
Yeah it's with Sgt.Alys, that and the one with Halyen that i mentioned, these are the only 2 freeroams that i know about, i was hoping that there was at least 1 other that i missed somehow but it seems that's all of them. :HideThePain:
 

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On top of that, it doesn't matter what high quality of anything is added to the porn game it's still a porn game. That's specifically written around fetishes. Trying to pretend otherwise doesn't help your position. This isn't high art, it will always be just porn. Also, yeah it is a contradiction by calling pacing atrocious and then claiming it doesn't bother you.
Hard disagree. In fact I think you are the one comparing porn-games to other games. You dragged this whole point about how porn games are "just" porn games and not comparable to other media into this debate.


What site do you think you're on? These are porn games. There isn't a single game on this platform that could qualify as good story-writing. Anyone that says otherwise is full of it. They're all following specific story conveniences to fit the fetishes within the cobbled together made up scenes. This is a Netorare story. Same as all the other games have specific fetish stories. If you're looking for something more than a fetish story, go to a library.
I am of the strong opinion that each form of media is art, that includes porn, especially so if it is drawn or written (if it was filmed then it would be in the realm of "performing arts"). But like I said, you are the one taking that statement of NTRprofessionalconsumer about the pacing and narrative and start the comparison by saying "this is just porn, dont pretend its another form of media". And then you back that point up by listing all of the natural constraints that the genre comes with, namely suspension of disbelief and an overfocus on sexual content. I think though what everyone else in here is doing is not compare the narrative of a porn game to other media, but rather rate it within it's own genre. Looking down upon a piece of work just because the primary goal is masturbation is stupid. Equally so, skill is required to strike the balance between making people exited, aroused, interested in the characters and world and to keep a proper pacing to let the narrative come to fruition. These are the kinds of (rare) games that you come for the "plot" but stay for the plot, and you play the game to the end and ideally you leave satisfied, maybe even come back every once in a while.

Anyway, all that stuff aside.

I agree with some here who say that Leto is too "uninvolved" (so far), especially considering I would say we are at least 50% through the game. My favorite subgenre of NTR is hidden cheating and corruption, so HC perfectly hits my spot. But I agree that the way the narrative is going so far, there is little (even indirect) antagonism between the "villains" and Leto. All of that can still come ofc, but the bread crumbs hopefully start falling soon, just to nudge him in the direction of "something is going on". I think it would be dissatisfying and way too simple to end this game on the conclusion of "and Leto never knew anything till the very end, the Duke has the Kingdom now, Ulrod has a high position and is with Cyanna, lots of people are suffering, bla, bla, bla.

I would see the best course this game can take and still keep an authentic NTR experience in a phyricc victory kind of ending, where Leto stops the plot that grips the Kingdom overall, but maybe looses the girls (or some of them depending on the specific ending you get).

Ofc we can also include a super-bad ending where basically everything falls to ruin, leto gets chased out the country or never realizes anything and is the hero under the duke and whatnot while rose gets screwed and he finds out years down the line, then a plot where its middle of the road, as well as a "happy end" or a "revenge" end, etc. etc. But that is unrealistic. Too much work, too much resources, too long a time it would take, and many more reasons why not.

Realistically, there could be one "bad end" and a "mixed end" and a "bittersweet end". I see bad end territory in either everything going to shit or at least him loosing the girl(s) for good. Mixed ending would mean a trade-off, and imo the best-feeling end actually. We do have the NTR fix of "loss of S.O." while maybe getting some kind of victory like saving the country. Imo this is the most likely thing to happen at the current trajectory of the story, and also the one that makes the most sense "Leto the hero, but he will never have his girl". "bittersweet" or "revenge" would involve either Leto finding a solace (finds out, saves his girl, forgives her OR gets another girl in the end, arrives at a point he is satisfied OR actually gets revenge down the line).

The problem for all of these is "how do we get there in an organic way in the time left till the finale?". How do we make Leto realize what is going on with the schemes behind the scenes? Cause as much as NTR is about powerlessness, we have built up this whole story with Leto as the hero who defies that. Despite being CLUELESS, he actually proves in every situation that whatever challenge gets thrown at him he grows with it. People continously expect him to fail or at least underestimate how good he does his job, and he continously surprises him. How would that not suggest that down the line in the narrative, he at least would save the Kingdom, even if he looses the girls ? (Edit: Wouldn't it make it even SWEETER of an experience to have Leto be such a capable guy and manage to do so much but then experience powerlessness in the face of his love life?)

Another core problem connected to this that some people seem to have with the current plot is, and I think I partially agree with that: Aside from Rose (which imo is also the hottest story because of that and because of countless other reasons), all of the girls, including Cyanna, are not directly romantic with Leto, Leto should not feel any problem or hurt (beyond feeling sorry for them to change in a negative way) from them starting something with other partners. Which - while it is still NTR in a broad sense - does definitely exist on the fringes of NTR.

sorry, this post is a bit rambly and while I feel my paragraphs themselves are coherent I feel the order in which I put them might be a bit mixed up. I hope you can still see a throughline in what Im saying. Im a bit tired today :HideThePain:
 
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Hard disagree. In fact I think you are the one comparing porn-games to other games. You dragged this whole point about how porn games are "just" porn games and not comparable to other media into this debate.
You hard disagree against reality? Does a porn game transcend and become something new. So that it can no longer ever be called a porn game? We're all adults or should be, and it's silly to try pretending these are something different.

This is a pornographic site. We're in the game section of that site. So, this among others are porn games. It's really not complicated.


I am of the strong opinion that each form of media is art, that includes porn, especially so if it is drawn or written (if it was filmed then it would be in the realm of "performing arts"). But like I said, you are the one taking that statement of NTRprofessionalconsumer about the pacing and narrative and start the comparison by saying "this is just porn, dont pretend its another form of media". And then you back that point up by listing all of the natural constraints that the genre comes with, namely suspension of disbelief and an overfocus on sexual content. I think though what everyone else in here is doing is not compare the narrative of a porn game to other media, but rather rate it within it's own genre. Looking down upon a piece of work just because the primary goal is masturbation is stupid. Equally so, skill is required to strike the balance between making people exited, aroused, interested in the characters and world and to keep a proper pacing to let the narrative come to fruition. These are the kinds of (rare) games that you come for the "plot" but stay for the plot, and you play the game to the end and ideally you leave satisfied, maybe even come back every once in a while.
Great. Have that opinion. Still doesn't change the reality that it's still porn.
The others I responded to had also drawn parallels to other forms of media. I don't know where you're getting this notion that the conversations were limited to the genre of porn. It was about story telling. But, even within it's own genre it doesn't change my point. It's still just porn. That's not looking down at anything, it's calling it what it is. This attempt of trying to put it on a pedestal doesn't change the truth. It can be the highest quality porno. It's still a porno. Because that's it's genre.

But for the games, it'll be stretch to call them art. When within it's genre, they're obligated to have a sex scene per chapter. That's being forced to do something rather than doing it for artistic purposes. If the developers had real artistic freedom to tell their stories, they'd be able to go several chapters with absolutely no sex scenes without push back. Hell, they should be able to have only the most necessary scenes have sex within the story. Even if that meant having two sex scenes within the games lifetime. But, that's not the case. No matter how you try to look at it, the developers of the games have to meet a quota. And, if you think forced quotas is art, well..we'll just have to disagree on that.

Anyway, all that stuff aside.

I agree with some here who say that Leto is too "uninvolved" (so far), especially considering I would say we are at least 50% through the game. My favorite subgenre of NTR is hidden cheating and corruption, so HC perfectly hits my spot. But I agree that the way the narrative is going so far, there is little (even indirect) antagonism between the "villains" and Leto. All of that can still come ofc, but the bread crumbs hopefully start falling soon, just to nudge him in the direction of "something is going on". I think it would be dissatisfying and way too simple to end this game on the conclusion of "and Leto never knew anything till the very end, the Duke has the Kingdom now, Ulrod has a high position and is with Cyanna, lots of people are suffering, bla, bla, bla.

I would see the best course this game can take and still keep an authentic NTR experience in a phyricc victory kind of ending, where Leto stops the plot that grips the Kingdom overall, but maybe looses the girls (or some of them depending on the specific ending you get).

Ofc we can also include a super-bad ending where basically everything falls to ruin, leto gets chased out the country or never realizes anything and is the hero under the duke and whatnot while rose gets screwed and he finds out years down the line, then a plot where its middle of the road, as well as a "happy end" or a "revenge" end, etc. etc. But that is unrealistic. Too much work, too much resources, too long a time it would take, and many more reasons why not.

Realistically, there could be one "bad end" and a "mixed end" and a "bittersweet end". I see bad end territory in either everything going to shit or at least him loosing the girl(s) for good. Mixed ending would mean a trade-off, and imo the best-feeling end actually. We do have the NTR fix of "loss of S.O." while maybe getting some kind of victory like saving the country. Imo this is the most likely thing to happen at the current trajectory of the story, and also the one that makes the most sense "Leto the hero, but he will never have his girl". "bittersweet" or "revenge" would involve either Leto finding a solace (finds out, saves his girl, forgives her OR gets another girl in the end, arrives at a point he is satisfied OR actually gets revenge down the line).

The problem for all of these is "how do we get there in an organic way in the time left till the finale?". How do we make Leto realize what is going on with the schemes behind the scenes? Cause as much as NTR is about powerlessness, we have built up this whole story with Leto as the hero who defies that. Despite being CLUELESS, he actually proves in every situation that whatever challenge gets thrown at him he grows with it. People continously expect him to fail or at least underestimate how good he does his job, and he continously surprises him. How would that not suggest that down the line in the narrative, he at least would save the Kingdom, even if he looses the girls ? (Edit: Wouldn't it make it even SWEETER of an experience to have Leto be such a capable guy and manage to do so much but then experience powerlessness in the face of his love life?)

Another core problem connected to this that some people seem to have with the current plot is, and I think I partially agree with that: Aside from Rose (which imo is also the hottest story because of that and because of countless other reasons), all of the girls, including Cyanna, are not directly romantic with Leto, Leto should not feel any problem or hurt (beyond feeling sorry for them to change in a negative way) from them starting something with other partners. Which - while it is still NTR in a broad sense - does definitely exist on the fringes of NTR.

sorry, this post is a bit rambly and while I feel my paragraphs themselves are coherent I feel the order in which I put them might be a bit mixed up. I hope you can still see a throughline in what Im saying. Im a bit tired today :HideThePain:
It's obvious Leto will find out what's happening. All the protagonists so far have found out. It goes without saying. But, it's still an NTR story so the corruption of the girls will require them to been stolen away. And seeing as Leto's competence is a factor he'd have to find out after they've been stolen. That's the part that'll be too late for him. The world will be fine and some form of balance will be restored. Which is why those villagers were introduced. It was a exposition dump of the larger problem on their island. One that will evetually be resolved. Which will include some form of mystical rebalancing.
 
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You hard disagree against reality? Does a porn game transcend and become something new. So that it can no longer ever be called a porn game? We're all adults or should be, and it's silly to try pretending these are something different.

This is a pornographic site. We're in the game section of that site. So, this among others are porn games. It's really not complicated.

The others I responded to had also drawn parallels to other forms of media. I don't know where you're getting this notion that the conversations were limited to the genre of porn. It was about story telling. But, even within it's own genre it doesn't change my point. It's still just porn. That's not looking down at anything, it's calling it what it is. This attempt of trying to put it on a pedestal doesn't change the truth. It can be the highest quality porno. It's still a porno. Because that's it's genre.

But for the games, it'll be stretch to call them art. When within it's genre, they're obligated to have a sex scene per chapter. That's being forced to do something rather than doing it for artistic purposes. If the developers had real artistic freedom to tell their stories, they'd be able to go several chapters with absolutely no sex scenes without push back. Hell, they should be able to have only the most necessary scenes have sex within the story. Even if that meant having two sex scenes within the games lifetime. But, that's not the case. No matter how you try to look at it, the developers of the games have to meet a quota. And, if you think forced quotas is art, well..we'll just have to disagree on that.
Any form of human expression and creativity is art. A rule-34 piece of some popular anime girl is art. An erotic smut book like Fifty Shades of Grey is art. People make sculptures of vaginas and penises. There are erotic performance shows in some countries where people have sex on stage. And RPGMaker games are...

You guessed it. Art. Art doesn't need to be high quality- Look at the thousands of shitty reality TV shows made over the years, or the god-awful movies that release and undersell. Just because it's bad, or because it's lewd, or because it depicts certain themes heavily does not reduce it from art.

The creator of this game is not forced to do anything. They choose to include sex scenes. Sure, it's financially motivated... But the Marvel Cinematic Universe is also financially motivated based on viewer response. So are weekly mangas, who if they are not popular enough get axed or cancelled. Unfortunately we live in a world where artists are not free to write the stories they wish- That does not mean their works are not art. And honestly? I find it incredibly disrespectful for you to suggest that the countless hours of hard work put into these games- The music, the art (pixel and drawn), the animations, the writing- That not even a single element of it is enough to constitute art, let alone combined... Simply because it has girls getting fucked.

Maybe the creator of this game WANTS sex scenes. Like you keep saying... It is, after all, a pornographic. If the author suddenly released a chapter with no sex scenes, does that make the game legitimate art in your eyes? Your logic is highly flawed, as it nullifies 99% of the artwork created in modern day.

Hell, you realise how much artwork in the past was commissioned or made on request from someone else? The Ceiling of the Sistine Chapel was a 'forced quota'.
 
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