RPGM Completed Henteria Chronicles: Chapter 1 [Up.6 Fix 2] [N_taii]

[N_taii]

Uhh, this is nice, if it is possible, can there be a third ending which is... Non-NTR but the girls keep cheating with someone? Personally, and for NTR perspective, I really love it when the MC thinks he fixed everything but behind his back, everything is the same just a petition more than a suggestion though, so sorry about that!

Hmmm, I'd rather not make any promises I'm not sure I'll be able to hold. I actually already have three ending planned (canon ending, NTR ending, Non-NTR ending), and I'm not sure I'll be able to make yet another one. I'll keep what you said in the back of my mind though, and I'll see what can be done later. I hope you understand.
Thank you for your comment!

 

[pester]

Nice game, I generally liked the bit of grinding in the game; it wasn't too much and helped build a bit of anticipation for when the next scene happens for me. The large maps were a problem (especially in the manor) but the boots made them tolerable, would have been more annoying if I didn't have the boots and had to hold shift to get anywhere in a reasonable amount of time. Just a thought but, is this one of your first rpgm games? Large maps are a common problem with new makers and I'm just curious if this is one of those times. Either way keep it up I'll be waiting for the next update.

 

[N_taii]

Nice game, I generally liked the bit of grinding in the game; it wasn't too much and helped build a bit of anticipation for when the next scene happens for me. The large maps were a problem (especially in the manor) but the boots made them tolerable, would have been more annoying if I didn't have the boots and had to hold shift to get anywhere in a reasonable amount of time. Just a thought but, is this one of your first rpgm games? Large maps are a common problem with new makers and I'm just curious if this is one of those times. Either way keep it up I'll be waiting for the next update.

Yes, this is indeed my first RPGM game. I think the problem isn't the size, but that they are empty. I didn't have an exact plan on how all the scenes were going to happen, so I set up something that would give me a bigger margin of manoeuvre. Beginner's mistake. So I'm now working on mechanics that'd help reducing this, the boots were one of those^^

 

[zebucetiva]

I finally played your game and I have to say it was one of the best games in RPGM for a demo. I really like the plot and characters. The pixel scenes are not too good as NTRPG but it was delightful anyway. You definitely are in the right way.
A suggestion: You should create some minor scenes, as a example: Mc wake up and see one of the demons leaving sister's room and when MC walks in he just see cum on the floor. It doesn't necessarily have to be like this, but these little clues of something that happened before are very hot.
Keep going with your hard work and sorry for my bad english.

 

[N_taii]

I finally played your game and I have to say it was one of the best games in RPGM for a demo. I really like the plot and characters. The pixel scenes are not too good as NTRPG but it was delightful anyway. You definitely are in the right way.
A suggestion: You should create some minor scenes, as a example: Mc wake up and see one of the demons leaving sister's room and when MC walks in he just see cum on the floor. It doesn't necessarily have to be like this, but these little clues of something that happened before are very hot.
Keep going with your hard work and sorry for my bad english.

Thank you for your comment and you suggestion!
I'm aware that one of the biggest strength of the NTRPG genre is "suggestion", meaning that we aren't presented with everything but only with sparse clues that make thing obvious without showing them, just like you pointed out. I'm going to use that as well, only not in the beginning, or not as much, because I need to set up the plot and the flow of NTR first then use clues here and there further in the story so people aren't too lost or don't feel like they've missed something.

 

[Charamiwao]

Aside from the maps being too big I really enjoyed that first taste, reall promising. The Lady going into that room with the demon while the servants were hanging out in front of the room is the kind of stuff that I loved, good job on that.

In a way I feel like you were even too generous with the sex scenes, probably because it's a demo, because the dream sequence where you hear the girls behind a lock door are insanely hot to me but the actual sex scenes afterwards kind of messed with the build up a little bit. Too much too fast kind of thing.

 

[N_taii]

Aside from the maps being too big I really enjoyed that first taste, reall promising. The Lady going into that room with the demon while the servants were hanging out in front of the room is the kind of stuff that I loved, good job on that.

In a way I feel like you were even too generous with the sex scenes, probably because it's a demo, because the dream sequence where you hear the girls behind a lock door are insanely hot to me but the actual sex scenes afterwards kind of messed with the build up a little bit. Too much too fast kind of thing.

I hear you, and I also knew it was rushed in this of kind of NTRPG settings. The thing is I'm basically a no-name game developer with nothing but a demo, so I had to "stuff" everything I would show later in game so people knew what to expect. I tried to make it a dream sequence so it wouldn't impact the development of the story later and I could go at a slower pace.

 

[Ion.TemUS]

If I may give some small feedback. Im not sure if I like the whole "Im gonna show you the end before the game begins" thing.
One of the main things drawing me to NTR is the secret corruption element. You know, seeing the MC has no idea but still getting subtle hints from the game in the beginning. A lot of NTR games have this element where the viewer sees the scenes of the FMC but the MC is not aware, but there are hints in the world (dialogue, environment, sounds, things being different, female characters wearing other clothes) that could tip them off, but the MC doesnt know. Thats kind of the appeal to me.

Revealing it to the MC right away kind of takes that away from me if you understand what I mean.

 

[N_taii]

If I may give some small feedback. Im not sure if I like the whole "Im gonna show you the end before the game begins" thing.
One of the main things drawing me to NTR is the secret corruption element. You know, seeing the MC has no idea but still getting subtle hints from the game in the beginning. A lot of NTR games have this element where the viewer sees the scenes of the FMC but the MC is not aware, but there are hints in the world (dialogue, environment, sounds, things being different, female characters wearing other clothes) that could tip them off, but the MC doesnt know. Thats kind of the appeal to me.

Revealing it to the MC right away kind of takes that away from me if you understand what I mean.

Well, refer to my above post where I wrote a partial answer to your comment.
Besides, if the dream sequences shows what might happen (but not exactly, as this doesn't mean this is exactly what will happen during the ending), it does not necessarily means the MC remembers any of it. Just like most dream, maybe he just has a vague idea of what he dreamt about? Which means that after the demo we start a processus of corruption that more or less follows your idea, a clueless MC and hints around.

 

[archedio]

Uh, I kinda stuck in the infinite loop where the lady going out from that room with the demon while the servants were hanging out in front of the room.
Is it a bug?

 

[N_taii]

Uh, I kinda stuck in the infinite loop where the lady going out from that room with the demon while the servants were hanging out in front of the room.
Is it a bug?

That is definitely a bug, as I don't remember implementing any infinite loops to get player stuck in my game^^ I heard some people reporting the same kind of bug when they were trying to skip the text. Is it what you did too?

 

[Ion.TemUS]

Well, refer to my above post where I wrote a partial answer to your comment.
Besides, if the dream sequences shows what might happen (but not exactly, as this doesn't mean this is exactly what will happen during the ending), it does not necessarily means the MC remembers any of it. Just like most dream, maybe he just has a vague idea of what he dreamt about? Which means that after the demo we start a processus of corruption that more or less follows your idea, a clueless MC and hints around.

Sounds good my man.
The demo plays okay, although tbh. the gameplay is a bit long without any significant scenes. But I understand why. I know this is a demo and just there to show "this is the gameplay and how it works" and "this is what you can expect from the routes and the general direction they go in". I understand that.

Keep up the good work ^^

One of the things I noticed, if I might give you some advice, is that one of the MAIN things people like/dislike about (esp. patreon funded) adult indie games depends on the frequency and quantity of the content. Generally if you play a demo or early version people get kind of an idea what quality they can expect from the game, but they have no idea yet how regular updates will be, how reliable and on time they are, how much content (quantitiy) is in each update, and how often the devleoper communicates with their patrons and non-patrons about whats going on with development and how the plans and progress are going. So that level of trust and reliability is definitely one of the top deciding factors for me to invest or not invest into a developer. I often just give 1$, since Im a poor ol student with barely any money, but remember, if just 100 - 200 people support you with 1$ its gonna be up to 200 bucks, and thats already something. So yeah, every supporter helps in the end. And communication is the key.

Good luck with your game man

 

[N_taii]

Sounds good my man.
The demo plays okay, although tbh. the gameplay is a bit long without any significant scenes. But I understand why. I know this is a demo and just there to show "this is the gameplay and how it works" and "this is what you can expect from the routes and the general direction they go in". I understand that.

Keep up the good work ^^

One of the things I noticed, if I might give you some advice, is that one of the MAIN things people like/dislike about (esp. patreon funded) adult indie games depends on the frequency and quantity of the content. Generally if you play a demo or early version people get kind of an idea what quality they can expect from the game, but they have no idea yet how regular updates will be, how reliable and on time they are, how much content (quantitiy) is in each update, and how often the devleoper communicates with their patrons and non-patrons about whats going on with development and how the plans and progress are going. So that level of trust and reliability is definitely one of the top deciding factors for me to invest or not invest into a developer. I often just give 1$, since Im a poor ol student with barely any money, but remember, if just 100 - 200 people support you with 1$ its gonna be up to 200 bucks, and thats already something. So yeah, every supporter helps in the end. And communication is the key.

Good luck with your game man

It's funny you're saying that now because a few hours before you made this post I added a 1$ pledge opportunity to my patron page and gave an update about the progresses I made on the game^^
But thanks for your advice, I'll definitely keep them in mind

 

[archedio]

That is definitely a bug, as I don't remember implementing any infinite loops to get player stuck in my game^^ I heard some people reporting the same kind of bug when they were trying to skip the text. Is it what you did too?

Yeah...
Well I just need to wait for the bug is fixed to play it again, or wait for the next update. My last save is too far back that I'm too lazy to repeat all of it
Is there a schedule of when the next update will come out?

 

[N_taii]

Yeah...
Well I just need to wait for the bug is fixed to play it again, or wait for the next update. My last save is too far back that I'm too lazy to repeat all of it
Is there a schedule of when the next update will come out?

I try to give myself around a month between each updates, so it'll probably come out around the 10th of December. Btw, I know someone uploaded save files of the game on this thread, if you're not willing to wait until the next uodate^^

 

[bmul]

Starting I want to state that in general I am not the biggest fun of NTR in the classical concept. Where many feel aroused from the jelousy I usually end up siding with the cucker and finding pleasure there. Basically I prefer netori. Having read multiple of the comments and going through the dev notes I have a few questions: is the tag impregnation going to be suggested, an ending or a thing that can be "interacted with". Meaning something that leads to an ending. Are you going to dwell in the fat bastards realm? Will there be a "remminacence room" with hints like in NTRPG in the main game? Mostly the replay is important for me as saving and loading would require too many saves and searching for the scene I was looking for.
Whatever the case for the above may be this seems extremly promising and I hope to see it floorish instead of it being abandonned. I wish you luck on your creation both in inspiration and in compentation. Cheers.

 

[N_taii]

Starting I want to state that in general I am not the biggest fun of NTR in the classical concept. Where many feel aroused from the jelousy I usually end up siding with the cucker and finding pleasure there. Basically I prefer netori. Having read multiple of the comments and going through the dev notes I have a few questions: is the tag impregnation going to be suggested, an ending or a thing that can be "interacted with". Meaning something that leads to an ending. Are you going to dwell in the fat bastards realm? Will there be a "remminacence room" with hints like in NTRPG in the main game? Mostly the replay is important for me as saving and loading would require too many saves and searching for the scene I was looking for.
Whatever the case for the above may be this seems extremly promising and I hope to see it floorish instead of it being abandonned. I wish you luck on your creation both in inspiration and in compentation. Cheers.

First of all, thank you for your comment and your words of encouragement, that means a lot
I'll answer your questions as concisely as I can: the impregnation fetish will be either suggested or shown in one of the ending. I'll have to think about how I want to implement it and what could fit best with the flow of the story. Do I want an ending that passes within a short lap of time, or do I want a "x times later" kind of ending? I'll think about it as I progress with the game.

I'm not sure what you mean by "dwelling in the fat bastard realm". Will the antagonist stay a "bad guy" throughout the game, is what you wanna say? If so, then the answer is more or less yes. He will have a bit of background of his past relationship with the main girl and his motivations, but that's about it. I'd rather stay simple with him.

By "remminacence room", do you mean "reminiscence room"? I do not mean to be insulting, I'm just not aware of the word you're using there. If reminiscence room, then probably, but I'll have to see how many people want it first. I'll probably have a poll about that on my patreon page, but it's high likely I'll take some time to implement it at the end.
There will be hints, yes, as I'm in the middle of implementing a board in the MC's room that will tell you exactly where each girl is depending on the time you're consulting the board. There'll also be hints as to whether there's a H event going on with them or not. Adding to that Ixy that'll help you out with hints on how to progress the plot, it should be a lot easier to advance through the story without missing anything than it was during the demo version.
I hope I answered your questions !

 

[kugjfhgbjkbjkhb]

I enjoyed the demo. I think you might be on to something great here. My only suggestion is that Nestia seems a little underdeveloped as a character. I get that we're supposed to feel a certain way toward her because she's the big sister, but the relationship between her and Casio seems a bit... light in story content.

One of NTRPG2's greatest strengths was the whole slow building romance with Filia before Ragnas or whatever arrived. I think that sort of character intimacy and connection to the protagonist is essential in telling an effective NTR story.

 

[zexer14]

im not sure if anyone has said this before but that hint fairy near the pond should bee one of the characters that gets fucked by the demon guys.

i can say that i really enjoyed the demo and would love to see what the rest of the game has to offer. i see a lot of potential in both you and the game your making.

 

[zexer14]

also does anyone have any info on

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this patreon. from what i can tell the game that is there is called ntrpg skybride and is made by someone different than the person that made ntrpg and the sequel.