VN Ren'Py Abandoned Here After [Ch. 1 v0.1] [Agastopia]

[BarbarrossaNA]

Short, sweet and gives us enough to show the DEV has potential. Decent Renders and writing but I'm not sure this 'demo' is long enough to ring the Patreon Bell a lot. Bookmarked because hey, I like Bikes in the mix and want to see more. Here's to speedy updates and a long run!

 

[JC07]

Sounds interesting, the Tags are okay, with the exception of two, sleep sex and blackmail. But if it's totally optional it might work for me.

Good luck with your Agastopia project

 

[Agastopia]

Sounds interesting, the Tags are okay, with the exception of two, sleep sex and blackmail. But if it's totally optional it might work for me.

Good luck with your Agastopia project

I know that many games uses the tag "Blackmail" in a negative manner, but believe it or not, you can also use it as not a " total creep factor" for something good. But obviously the tags i have provided for the future updates may change though.

Thanks for your support!

 

[Agastopia]

Short, sweet and gives us enough to show the DEV has potential. Decent Renders and writing but I'm not sure this 'demo' is long enough to ring the Patreon Bell a lot. Bookmarked because hey, I like Bikes in the mix and want to see more. Here's to speedy updates and a long run!

Thank you for your kind words! I totally understand what you mean, i'll try and make the future updates longer and better.

 

[JC07]

I know that many games uses the tag "Blackmail" in a negative manner, but believe it or not, you can also use it as not a " total creep factor" for something good. But obviously the tags i have provided for the future updates may change though.

Thanks for your support!

Yes, of course many things like blackmail can be used for other purposes, is that we (people who play adult games) are already traumatized that all the bullying is for sexual purposes. Usually when the MC is blackmailed it's for him to hand something from the girls to some son of a bitch, when the MC is doing the blackmail, it's forcing the girls to do something against their will, and it's usually something sexual for him. Which kind of destroys all romance.

But you're right, it can be used in other ways. They are just fears of someone who is already traumatized by it.

 

[Aristos]

I just started using Daz3D and Renpy about a week ago, so i'm still new to it, but i'm learning everyday!

So... 1 min demo or what?

Anyway, those preview renders look awesome. If you have been using Renpy for 1 week, congratulations.

 

[DrakoGhoul]

Looks good so I'll try this out. I hear it's very short for the first release but that's fine. Also i saw the list of future tags and i like majority if not all of them so I'm definitely going to enjoy this even more in the future.

 

[Boehser Onkel]

well
this was .... short

looks good , but there is nothing what points to the storycontent now
(oh and bro-mance -- yeah everyone loves a bro-mance ... )

at the beginning i was "wtf - looks like "Lady in Blue""

so il be waiting for more content to build a opinion atleast ..

gl with your game Agastopia

 

[RattledSam]

very short for first release. You should have been worked abit.
you rushed

 

[Ara-sH]

What kind of incest ?

 

[Amahl Farouk]

there needs to be cheating

cheating! Make is so number 1.

 

[punisher2099]

No harem planned huh..Bummer.

 

[Mauser45]

Haven't played this game yet, but given the premise...how long before he moves back in with his mum and sister does it take before he's doing them both?

 

[Avaron1974]

Just curious on a couple of things.

1, Is the MC supposed to be a douche?

I ask because calling a random girl "dog face" makes him look like one.

2. How optional are the future tags?

Not a fan of blackmail or sleep rape.

 

[Look-see]

The guy is on his imaginary NTR war. Don't indulge it lol. 'Oh, this guy who isn't an NTR hater is asking for future tags? Must be some sneaky attempt to ask for NTR.'

So the game seems like it will be creepy perv vs family. I actually like this trope if, and only if, the MC is self aware that he is a borderline/overt rapist lol. None of that "innocent" sleep molestation crap plz.

im not fond of NTR i'll admit but i have no problem with it in a game as long as its avoidable. as for the sleep sex well...time will tell.

 

[Look-see]

Yes, of course many things like blackmail can be used for other purposes, is that we (people who play adult games) are already traumatized that all the bullying is for sexual purposes. Usually when the MC is blackmailed it's for him to hand something from the girls to some son of a bitch, when the MC is doing the blackmail, it's forcing the girls to do something against their will, and it's usually something sexual for him. Which kind of destroys all romance.

But you're right, it can be used in other ways. They are just fears of someone who is already traumatized by it.

i'm pretty sure the reason for that is because the tags are used to show what kind of sexual content is in the game. so if Blackmail is in the tags it would make sense that its used to get sex for whoever the blackmailer is.

but if blackmail was used to threaten someone for money and not sex im not sure if the tag would get added.

 

[Cigzag]

It is pretty short but the renders look pretty good and the MC is a grown man and not a teenage midget so that's always good. The "friend" looks really cute and so does "dog face" but the plot is kind of bare bones right now even for a 0.1 so I'm hoping there is something happening eventually in the story.

Yeah, a grown man who likes to call random girls ''dog face'' as he buzzes past them on his motorcycle. That's totally what grown men do. A huge step up from the teenage midgets we have here, indeed.

 

[memonto_mori]

we've been deceived!!

 

[Knoxy427]

The renders so far are decent. I get the MC is supposed to be some kind of bad boy but the whole 'Dogface' thing was unprovoked just making him seem like a dick. The "..." is a bit annoying, a few mistypes and weirdness with the script but all in all I think the story has a lot of potential, I understand the starting was supposed to be a culmination of everything that's going to happen within the next 4 months of game story, but the little taste we see isn't as thought provoking as it could be but it's still good. I'd love to see where this story goes in the future. Great job so far for a newbie

 

[rKnight]

That moment when you realize there's a 50 dollar bill on the ground.