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Sera timeskip design - draft
any actual critiques other than "looks like shit" will actually help them here. its a draft
Ren'Py Hero Party Must Fall [v0.5.0 Bugfix 2] [Nitrolith]
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Sera timeskip design - draft
any actual critiques other than "looks like shit" will actually help them here. its a draft
she looks great besides the color of her clothes, I personally think blue as a main color is not that fitting for darker skins. and specially that tone, not saturated enough to blend with the skin and not vivid enough to contrast with it. for example the blue in her sash is great as a single piece. but the bra and skirt. could use a tone shift, also the cheetah pattern but that is just a minor personal taste thing. otherwise 9/10 desing.
also, is she african or indian? if so I would like to see more curly hair types.
- May 11, 2023
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Personally I don't even think that's her. I wouldn't have recognised her without the eye detail. Maybe I'm wrong but skin looks darker and obviously the black hair looks weird when it should be blue. Face looks straight up different. The body is completely different too, that might have logic because she has stopped being a warrior or because of the curse but it adds to the pile of things that make this design look like something radically different.
Basically it feels like you took Sera from us and replaced her with someone who shares the same quirk.
And it might be a stretch but it almost feels like Nitro murdered her whole vibe to turn her into Elena 2.0. I personally think it would be ass if he rewired her personality to express how Mars changed her, it would be like if all the build up was for nothing since in the end we just don't see the character we loved anymore.
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Sera's hair is black, it's blue because of magic. That's not a final design anyway
Lavinia should come offer to femdom Erin, and then those events will happen at midday, I think? After you make Cecille to date Erin a couple of times from her training (not sex) menu. There's also an event where Lavinia dresses Erin up as Erica
- May 11, 2023
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Eh, in her kid design she has blue hair. The other dude from her tribe has blueish hair. I see no reason to strip that away from her? It's part of her charm. I could understand it for Erin because of his mother but I just don't see why would you destroy Sera's hair.
She looks like a dumb bimbo, not herself. I get that she is supposed to look at peace, but I think her facial features should be a little more sharper
Is the dungeoneering minigame still a WIP? I asked this a while ago, but got no response!
Edit: Also the light blue on black skin looks good to me, light and dark make good contrasts.
Edit: Also the light blue on black skin looks good to me, light and dark make good contrasts.
You can just skip all minigames since they're not that important, also most of them are WIP still
Thanks! I'm asking because I intend to replay through the game again at some point (Haven't played since the Eris' mum content was new), but I don't want to if the beginning isn't fleshed out.
The dungeoneering bit with the idea that the hero becomes steadily ignored in favour of the protagonist is pretty sexy to me. I'll just continue to wait for a bigger update.
- Oct 3, 2023
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I know its a draft and it will most likely be improved , its just if i didn't look at the eyes color i wouldn't have realized this is Sera, personally i like her blue hair , and her serious expressions , that made her character more unique . Like someone already stated , i also understand that she is at "peace" now and probably "happy" but maybe there is a way to show that while still retaining her serious expressions and blue hair?! To me she looks younger than her previous design . Someone also already stated that the clothes don't really suit this character well and i have to agree with that , idk if its the color or the design but just doesn't feel like Sera to me ( if that was the idea well it is accomplished , if it wasn't that the idea well this is my opinion) . If the artist wants to keep the design faithful to their ideas , who am i to tell them to don't do it? Still i don't enjoy her new design for the reasons stated above.
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The drawing and coloring is great. Nitro has improved a lot as an artist. My feelings regarding this are - this is great art but not a great Sera. Getting a softer body because she abandons the fighter role is nice, but her face looks way less sharp and her hair not being blue is a bit eeh. What bothers me the most is the face. Reminds me more of Elena than it does of Sera
For me, being able to control/ dominate such a strong woman with a toned body was half the erotic part of Sera. If she gives up her role and becomes flabby like Cecille, what are their differences? We already have a cow, we don't need to lose the tiger and gain another cow.
I've reigned my expectations a little bit regarding this game as it isn't really going where I would like it to go but that is totally okay! I know for sure that I will buy it instantly if it comes to steam and play each new version as soon as possible.
That's not Sera, that's Gwyn (side character knight). Sera is reserved and stoic, while Gwyn is more of a stereotypical strong woman
- Feb 4, 2020
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I think that of course Sera looks really hot here, but there are some criticisms I have with this design.
To me personally the biggest criticism is the face, that does not look like Sera at all, there is something about the face that just does not look like her at all. The hair also appeared to change but to me that doesn't really matters but I can see why people don't like it and it would be confusing for someone to play the game and then out of nowhere her hair is different.
Another criticism is her body, this is not a criticism from me but I can see how some people might not like it. When it comes to the story her body changing actually makes sense, she had the body that she had for the purpose to fight and protect Erin but now that Mars offers her a peaceful life it makes sense that she will loose some of her muscularity even if that's why people ended up liking Sera. Her boobs changing also could have happens because of the course but who knows.
My final criticism is why does she looks like Elena 2.0. I saw somebody bring this up and I agree, now this COULD be because of Sera's personality and if I remember right, characters in the story said that she could be a good mom (if I'm wrong please tell me) and now her body is starting to show that, it could also be the course, but again this is not the same Sera that people ended up liking.
I GET IT the point is she changed but I think that what people would expect is more like a personality change instead of a full body change were you cant even tell who she is, by the way there is also a possibility that I cant tell who she is because of the new art style.
Outside of that this looks good, I still think she looks hot and maybe there is a explanation for the big change, I wouldn't mind this being the final design good job Nitrolith keep working hard and thank you for all your hard work.