JLP603

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Will we ever learn why sera is able to know so much? sometimes knowing things and details as if she was there in our room?
 

yewfrefsdfa

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Nov 21, 2021
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I'll be real I came here to get my knickers off, but stayed because of how fuck ass depressing existence is for our main man Mars.

I really hope he can break off from being a pawn. Its so depressing every time he mentions it. I know its just text, but every time he says it.

Its like gaw damn dude, how do you not blow your brains out realize how fucked everything is?


tldr, porn good, story better, me like.


I really hope this isn't abandoned.
 

KlutzKlutz

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May 16, 2022
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Hi !

I don't comment much here but I really wanted to thank you for making that game.
The story's amazing and it's easy to feel a lot of emotions with how well written the whole game is.
The characters really feels alive and Mars is a really interesting main character, be it for his personality or his background.
I'm really curious about all the lore and I can't wait to discover more !

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I also like the artstyle, it's unique in a good way. Plus I like the design of the characters (I wish we saw a bit more of Mars' design but the last updates were better on that aspect and I appreciate it, thanks)
Maybe some of the minigames could be polished a bit more in some ways but it's still fun to play them imo.
The minigames aren't the core gameplay so it isn't as important as in other games anyway.

The only thing that feels a bit odd for me (I know someone already talked about here) is that I feel like Elena's corruption was a bit weird.
Too fast yeah but knowing how you wanted to give another kind of corruption (especially to make her different from the main heroines) it makes and I get it.
But still it was also ... I don't know, it's hard to say but it still feels out of character and the 0 to 100 right away didn't help imo.

I even thought you would make it so that she wouldn't get corrupted and Mars would have needed to reach a compromise with her in order to get his way.

Anyway, good luck with the development of this game and thanks again.
 

Kinky Bully

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This is one of the Best Games!
There is quite some grind which isn't half-bad since it's sex grind. But I really love this one.
 
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28_booba

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Jan 2, 2021
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Amazing game. I'm a big lurker here, but couldn't avoid wanting to post my thoughts on this creation.

I don't have enough words to describe how sucked in I was to the point where I played it overnight without skipping a single scene or minigame, afraid I'd miss out on something, just wanting to see how the heroines would fall even further, and it sure delivered.

I believe it to be a masterpiece in the works, but there's definitely some things I'd like to point out after playing through version 3.0(I'll try the new 3.6 one today).

1. Dungeon Mini-game

Very early on the hero mentions the heroines lacking performance in the dungeon, and eventually Cecille also confronts the hero about not doing that great in the past few days, but it's very hard to notice with the current version being mostly text prompts with the number of demons killed each turn.

I think having a kill count for each floor and being able to clearly see who's at the bottom and top would be great, besides opening the opportunity to have the hero lash out at the heroines placed at the very bottom and decrease their affection, which was another negative for me, as seeing the unwavering 100 affection/love status towards the hero for both heroines made me doubt my progress with them a few times.

2. Curse Breaking

The first curse breaking mechanic also could have had a better explanation, as I was afraid of filling the bar at first, wondering if had a bug and didn't unlock the Goddess shop, or if I should have focused on raising affection more, as I ended up filling the bar while there were still post-training scenes available.

I saved expecting a bad ending after breaking the curse, but the game just kept going, so I got the idea and went back to watch the post-training scenes afterwards, but that still felt a bit awkward and broke a bit of the pacing, which felt better during the second curse progress, as the post-training events happened regardless of the curse bar being full or not.

3. Morning Groping Mini-game

I don't know if there's already plans for this one, but here's my suggestions.

Have Cecille corruption stages affect her current pose and options available, so at first she's sitting neatly with legs closed and Mars is only able to caress her thighs, butt, breasts and lips, but can be refused with her free hand as well.

She can have different moaning intensities and also tell Mars to stop, with the latter greatly raising the hero's attention, making him look back for a while until Cecille reasures him everything is alright.

As the corruption progresses, Mars can order her to open her legs and shows her breasts, allowing fingering, sucking nipples, kissing and etc, which will contribute more noise and raise the hero's attention further, but might be manageable with some special item or skill upgrade from the demon mother or Cecille smooth talk.

For the last corruption stage it would be nice to have Cecille inviting Mars to play with her, like teasing her own nipples, milking her own breasts, having her tongue out asking for a kiss, groping Mars crotch and giving him a sneaky handjob, pissing outdoors right next to the hero and other unimaginable acts she'd never think of doing before being corrupted.

4. Milking Mini-game

This one is pretty good and fits right into my preferences, but like my suggestions above, I would love to have more content to the scenes, like Cecille moaning or painful groans, making cow noises as her corruption progresses, having an orgasm midway, biting her lips to try and hide it or blatantly putting her tongue out making a sloppy face, and so on.

Being fucked from behind while milked and getting bred, then even having a swollen pregnant stomach hanging down as her breasts get squeezed would be an awecome addition as well.

As for her milk itself, it would be nice to see it having a noticeable effect on Mars, be it increasing his stamina during sex scenes, his strength in the dungeon, or more points to be exchnaged at the hero fragment shop.

5. Pregnancy

I know it's just planned content for now, but as it's my main fetish, I'd like to offer my opinion on what most people with the same preferences might be expecting, considering it won't just be a pregnancy CG ending.

- having a scene with an egg being fertilized
- having a fertilized egg shown implanted in the womb during X-ray
- having multiple pregnancy stages with bigger stomachs each time
- a detailed fetus growth according to the belly size
- birth

So far, the greatest game with the impregnation/pregnancy fetish implementation is Violated Heroine, which I base the above standards on, and unfortunately nothing has ever come close to the detailed system in that game imo.

I'm not expecting the focus of this game to be on pregnancy, but just following the first three points would be good enough to warrant a pregnancy tag, as most games with pregnancy and x-ray nowadays will follow one of three paths:
-exclude x-ray during pregnancy
-include x-ray but show only inflated womb exterior
-show x-ray but with a normal womb, completely disregarding the pregnancy element

As long as it's not the third one, you are good, but if the plan is just to go for a pregnancy ending I won't blame you, as adding pregnant sprites to most if not all training scenes would be a lot of work.

Still on this topic, regarding the story itself, it would be interesting to see what kind of effect the curse has on pregnancy, like giving Mars the option to choose what his child is going to be, from a pure human, to a half-demon like him, or a pure demon.

I'd even go one step further and put the choice in the hands of the heroines, with some mechanic that getting a creampie from Mars or drinking his semen will push the baby towards the demonic bloodline as it's fed mana, so the heroines can do their best and abstain from sex during pregnancy to keep their baby as a pure human or fall into depravity and accept a demon's child in exchange for pleasure.

6. Conclusion

Regardless of my feedback, you have already created a great game, with an engaging story and very polished art and animations, so just keep doing your thing and creating the game you want to make.

I for one am amazed at what can be done with Ren'py after experiencing this game, and feel more and more interested in having a go at it just to put a big focus on my favorite fetishes.

I can enjoy NTR if it's done well, but if I were to make my own game with the same characters I would go on the path of the busty priestess pampering the hero's dick and having babymaking sex every night with his short, endless premature ejaculation penis, until he completely ran out of energy in order to ensure pregnancy and leave as many hero descendants as possible, breastfeeding him overnight so he can recover energy to face the dungeon the next morning.

Sera would be an imposing older sister character for ejaculation endurance training, as the hero wants to make girls orgasm as well instead of only having sex to get everyone pregnant, and Mars would be the suspicious older brother teaching the hero bad things like blowjobs, anal sex, titfucks and whatnot, which doesn't follow the righteous path of babymaking, all while allowing him to play with a homunculus with a body that feels better than any human woman but badmouths him for wasting all his precious semen dumping it inside a doll that can't get pregnant.

Regardless of my own delusions, you have already produced something worth remembering and following alongside its development, so I honestly wish you the best, with even more success and popularity as the game moves forward towards completion. Cheers!
 

28_booba

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Jan 2, 2021
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Just finished playing through 3.6 and found Elena to be a great addition, and can't wait for how Cecille will act with a new rival to divide Mars with when they are back.

The only real lacking point for me was there wasn't enough mommy/pampering moments, like seeing Mars waking up in Elena's lap pillow having his hair caressed, having her sing a lullaby to put him to sleep when he's woken up from a nightmare of the past, and other similar events that would make his reluctance to breaking her more apparent, as he can truly feel her pure affection and desire to help to a scoundrel like him through those acts.

As for her demonization, if the author is still seeking ideas on how to bring the story towards that route besides the anal parasite, the first thing that came to mind was the demon mother/goddess asking Mars to borrow Elena's body to enjoy the outside world.

She can explain how she has possessed a fair share of people already, be it humans or demons, but they'd usually end up going insane in no time and killing themselves, commiting a heinous crime or other disturbing outcomes, but considering how she's the previous Saint, she can probably handle her possisstion better than a normal human.

With this, the more the demon mother possesses Elena's body, the further her body and mind gets corrupted and shaped in the form resembling the demon mother's figure, with an option to change hair color to pink or keep it natural and hide/show horns like Lavinia to fit her appearance to our preference.
 
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nitrolith

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Thanks for all the feedback everybody, greatly appreciated!
I'll try to takes notes and work on points that need improvement.

Just finished playing through 3.6 and found Elena to be a great addition, and can't wait for how Cecille will act with a new rival to divide Mars with when they are back.

The only real lacking point for me was there wasn't enough mommy/pampering moments, like seeing Mars waking up in Elena's lap pillow having his hair caressed, having her sing a lullaby to put him to sleep when he's woken up from a nightmare of the past, and other similar events that would make his reluctance to breaking her more apparent, as he can truly feel her pure affection and desire to help to a scoundrel like him through those acts.
Yeah, I'm saving the pampering scenes for later. I think they'll be more effective then. Elena is a heroine I created mostly to focus on scenes with humiliation and bullying. So I want in the future for her content to have some vanilla pampering scenes with Mars, some public humiliation scenes to lower her standing/reputation with people, appeasing Mars to protect her son and obviously progression of her pregnancy. I might add a status screen for her to do that.
 
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Stuck in Cecille's second curse stage. Pleasure maxed and curse level at 0% affection capped at 13. No idea what to do in order to trigger the curse break event. (Queen's dates events are done if that matters)
 

Dadidares

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a scene where erin is training concentrated and cecile sees it and greets them from afar while from behind mars suddenly attacks and continues the scene with groping and a little sex
 
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Cecilles second curse break is not tied to the minigame. Just keep playing through the story and skipping days
Still nothing triggering. MC did mention that he will make the hero watch, but not sure when that will happen if it was supposed to either. Skipped days, did the training event multiple times, talked to everyone at different times, went to the dungeon.. nothing worked. If someone has a save at the second curse break event or close and can share, please do.
 

nitrolith

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Still nothing triggering. MC did mention that he will make the hero watch, but not sure when that will happen if it was supposed to either. Skipped days, did the training event multiple times, talked to everyone at different times, went to the dungeon.. nothing worked. If someone has a save at the second curse break event or close and can share, please do.
This error can happen when the trigger to the next event gets lost due to taking too many in-game days.
To fix it, you can open up the console and put this command:

sum_event_bag_prio = "p_sum_1_sp_2"

After that, train at night normally and the next post-training scene should trigger and let you continue the story.
 
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This error can happen when the trigger to the next event gets lost due to taking too many in-game days.
To fix it, you can open up the console and put this command:

sum_event_bag_prio = "p_sum_1_sp_2"

After that, train at night normally and the next post-training scene should trigger and let you continue the story.
That fixed it, thank you!
 
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pepplez

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Oh my, I was wondering why no one else has the same problem. So it's because of too many in game days? Markiplier112233 describes the same problem I had. That's why I posted that it's boring to repeat the same scenes all the time. Thank you for pointing this out.
 
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