VN Ren'Py Hero [v0.1 The awakening] [A Mob]

[Incognito^]

The game is not well written, based on what's there, so the excuse of "I swear its for the story guys, Im not a cuck because its for the story! REEEEEE" doesn't work since what little story there is stinks. Also, just because its for the story doesn't mean it needs to be shown on screen. As for "Its not NTR if the MC doesn't know her yet." That's just a cope that cuck devs come up with to try to convince people of something they know isn't true based purely on an insignificant technicality. Even if it isn't technically netorare, it may as well be because it is in the same spirit as netorare. Guys who are not cucks don't want to see their LIs getting railed by someone other than the MC. Ergo, the only reason to put that in your game is to appeal to cucks. So you're making a "totally not netorare game" which doesn't appeal to anyone but cucks. Good luck with that, genius.

ok story is not good and is not there ok, not all need to like what i say for sure (I will try my best make it more good)

but saying cuck devs dude hear me, Did i said you play as my character or did I say you choose and made a character?

so if you play as my character then how you getting cucked like you don't know the female until you see from his perspective?

and If you play as him I clearly said 'mc is a guy who likes to fuck married woman' then he is the one cucking other men that means you cucking people not you getting cucked?

what you saying is entirely opposite dude.

so you saying you don't like to cuck someone or you just thinking mc likes to have threesome with other man involved,

if you think mc shares woman, then I'm happy to say this to you no he won't he likes to take all people wives?


If you say it is like you don't like to cuck anyone then the game is not for you

but if you think mc is getting cucked then you're entirely wrong because as i said mc likes to fuck married woman not to share married woman


I hope this helps follow me on patreon(I'm not saying you to pay me there is a follow button in patreon), for more updates

I don't even understand like where this werid angle came like I clearly said In about mc likes to fuck married but still people saying he getting cucked? how?

about appeal to cucks? My sweet brother. I don't even put any audience in my mind I just had this idea and i'm writing it but main genre I took is harem not to appeal cucks or netotare fans o any orgy loving fans

Totally not a ntr story thing let's say, HOW??? this is appealing to cucks dude mc fucks married woman the whole idea of cuck is they need to see like villan fapping to mc fucking his wife but I clearly said that is not even a thing in my story.

About story thing: i didn't explained it well that is reason people think I pressing cucking agenda (remaining everying they just coping)

When I said mc fucked married woman he cucks villans a tyrant, To show how insane nasty mf is this tyrant I'm showing those snippets like he don't care who ever they are even if she is his wife he fucks (mess or torture) with her until he is satified those scenes and everything is show he deserves to be cucked that is what I mean it is for stroy I'm not trying to push any agenda

If you say or think he just trying to change the narrative now I actually wrote most of the story way back before i pusblish the Visual novel you can find it

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you see date and all and decide whether i lying or not and also go to side heading and select Doubt and read that paragraph you will know mc is a badass not cuck who likes to see other people (you can see when that document created in detail tab guys please if you think it is a VN for cucks not it is VN for milf lovers )

LAST I didn't even put these scens in game so I gave a alternative if you don't want to see those snippets just toggle that in setting you won't see them bro even i don't have urge to make full blown aniamtion for a thing mc is not in I kept on saying that from the start.

 

[Giolan]

The scene toggle, the last gambit of the I am not cuck bro I swear. Also dev stop being so emotive with troll from a porn game pirate site

 

[Incognito^]

The scene toggle, the last gambit of the I am not cuck bro I swear. Also dev stop being so emotive with troll from a porn game pirate site

dude you didn't read full and saying this and that what I'm not a cuck bro I swear read full and decide

ok and also this webiste is a good starting point for new devs like me if I appeal to bigger audience here So they will come to my patreon and see more and also as some troll can fuck my whole project if I didn't clarify and also read full before comment saying some stuff

I clearly said everything but still I'm not a cuck bro I swear talk about you a troll yourself

 

[johnmnf692]

ok story is not good and is not there ok, not all need to like what i say for sure (I will try my best make it more good)

but saying cuck devs dude hear me, Did i said you play as my character or did I say you choose and made a character?

so if you play as my character then how you getting cucked like you don't know the female until you see from his perspective?

and If you play as him I clearly said 'mc is a guy who likes to fuck married woman' then he is the one cucking other men that means you cucking people not you getting cucked?

what you saying is entirely opposite dude.

so you saying you don't like to cuck someone or you just thinking mc likes to have threesome with other man involved,

if you think mc shares woman, then I'm happy to say this to you no he won't he likes to take all people wives?


If you say it is like you don't like to cuck anyone then the game is not for you

but if you think mc is getting cucked then you're entirely wrong because as i said mc likes to fuck married woman not to share married woman


I hope this helps follow me on patreon(I'm not saying you to pay me there is a follow button in patreon), for more updates

I don't even understand like where this werid angle came like I clearly said In about mc likes to fuck married but still people saying he getting cucked? how?

about appeal to cucks? My sweet brother. I don't even put any audience in my mind I just had this idea and i'm writing it but main genre I took is harem not to appeal cucks or netotare fans o any orgy loving fans

Totally not a ntr story thing let's say, HOW??? this is appealing to cucks dude mc fucks married woman the whole idea of cuck is they need to see like villan fapping to mc fucking his wife but I clearly said that is not even a thing in my story.

About story thing: i didn't explained it well that is reason people think I pressing cucking agenda (remaining everying they just coping)

When I said mc fucked married woman he cucks villans a tyrant, To show how insane nasty mf is this tyrant I'm showing those snippets like he don't care who ever they are even if she is his wife he fucks (mess or torture) with her until he is satified those scenes and everything is show he deserves to be cucked that is what I mean it is for stroy I'm not trying to push any agenda

If you say or think he just trying to change the narrative now I actually wrote most of the story way back before i pusblish the Visual novel you can find it

You must be registered to see the links

you see date and all and decide whether i lying or not and also go to side heading and select Doubt and read that paragraph you will know mc is a badass not cuck who likes to see other people (you can see when that document created in detail tab guys please if you think it is a VN for cucks not it is VN for milf lovers )

LAST I didn't even put these scens in game so I gave a alternative if you don't want to see those snippets just toggle that in setting you won't see them bro even i don't have urge to make full blown aniamtion for a thing mc is not in I kept on saying that from the start.

Unfathomable levels of copium.

Let me spell this out for you, really simply. Someone who is not a cuck, does not want to see the LI(s) being fucked by someone other than the MC. ONLY cucks want that. Therefore, if you put scenes of the Li(s) getting fucked by men other than the MC, non-cucks will not like it. The only players who will like that are cucks. It really is that simple.

As for this petty distinction between the player and the MC, which you so desperately want to push; it's irrelevant. It's also an extremely common cope used by cucks and cuck devs. The player experiences the story from the point of view of the main character, whether or not you want people to self-insert doesn't matter. This is a porn game, porn is useless to a lot of people if they don't self-insert. Especially when that porn is supposed to be in the form of a game, which is an inherently immersive medium. However, even if we say that no one will self-insert, what you are doing is making a bunch of scenes which will only appeal to people who like the actions of the villains, because people who don't like those things will not enjoy those scenes. So now the only people who like your game are cucks and rape fetishists. Congratulations, you played yourself.

Literally just ask yourself this question: Would you have liked to see your wife get fucked by someone else before you got with her? Guys who are not cucks answer "no" to this question, guys who are cucks answer "yes".

Note that there is also a big difference to stealing a woman from her husband and watching her get fucked by him first, those two things are very different.

 

[grim019]

but saying cuck devs dude hear me, Did i said you play as my character or did I say you choose and made a character?

so if you play as my character then how you getting cucked like you don't know the female until you see from his perspective?

If we are playing the character we should only know what the character does. If we get more info then the character we are not playing the character.

 

[Incognito^]

Unfathomable levels of copium.

Let me spell this out for you, really simply. Someone who is not a cuck, does not want to see the LI(s) being fucked by someone other than the MC. ONLY cucks want that. Therefore, if you put scenes of the Li(s) getting fucked by men other than the MC, non-cucks will not like it. The only players who will like that are cucks. It really is that simple.

As for this petty distinction between the player and the MC, which you so desperately want to push; it's irrelevant. It's also an extremely common cope used by cucks and cuck devs. The player experiences the story from the point of view of the main character, whether or not you want people to self-insert doesn't matter. This is a porn game, porn is useless to a lot of people if they don't self-insert. Especially when that porn is supposed to be in the form of a game, which is an inherently immersive medium. However, even if we say that no one will self-insert, what you are doing is making a bunch of scenes which will only appeal to people who like the actions of the villains, because people who don't like those things will not enjoy those scenes. So now the only people who like your game are cucks and rape fetishists. Congratulations, you played yourself.

Literally just ask yourself this question: Would you have liked to see your wife get fucked by someone else before you got with her? Guys who are not cucks answer "no" to this question, guys who are cucks answer "yes".

Note that there is also a big difference to stealing a woman from her husband and watching her get fucked by him first, those two things are very different.

A real question is a random milf your wife dude the thought you had like I kept saying just snippet do you know what a snippet mean just a pic if you don't want to just hit that in setting you won't see that pic

a guy who says my works for rapists and Cucks let me tell you then is game of thrones also for rapists and is berserk also for rapist

dude I'm not saying my work is as good as that, but I want to make my work good and interesting

and also I'm saying those little pics elevate the story futher is gives us some stakes why that tyrant deserves the pusinshment.

it is waste of time for you and me if I need to explain even further

if you think those stories are for cucks and rapists I'm sorry dude my game is not for you

atleast talk with some common sense


mc here saving a milf from a tyrant is for rapists and cucks

my vn is definitely not for you Please don't spoil the comment section with your views

and dude you promoting a game that has slave, exhibition etc., but my story is wrong for you (I really talking to entirely different audience here he likes salves but i can't give story some stakes with a pic of what is going through ok)

 

[Incognito^]

If we are playing the character we should only know what the character does. If we get more info then the character we are not playing the character.

Interesting perspective

So you saying a female needs have character but can't be shown those scenes that is what you implying?

for that i said you have toggle in settings just turn on you won't see those pics

as i'm saying dude there won't be any animations for those scene just a pic to tell what fuck she went through with that tyrant

even if you don't want that just hit toggle you won't see those and still understand story

i hope this helps

 

[grim019]

Interesting perspective

So you saying a female needs have character but can't be shown those scenes that is what you implying?

for that i said you have toggle in settings just turn on you won't see those pics

as i'm saying dude there won't be any animations for those scene just a pic to tell what fuck she went through with that tyrant

even if you don't want that just hit toggle you won't see those and still understand story

i hope this helps

It's not about animation or pics. If a player knows things the MC doesn't they can't really be the character. As that knowledge will cause the player to feel different than the character is supposed to. It will also affect any choices the player makes.

 

[Incognito^]

It's not about animation or pics. If a player knows things the MC doesn't they can't really be the character. As that knowledge will cause the player to feel different than the character is supposed to. It will also affect any choices the player makes.

good so you saying a sex scene can make you guys fell uneasy ok (valid point.)
please reply

i really want to know

I will show 2 pics of this woman getting torture no sex but I imply he fucked her with a black screen is it also wrong? (this is what I'm planning from the start but add pov sex pic, if pov sex pic is more i will remove that)

 

[grim019]

good so you saying a sex scene can make you guys fell uneasy ok (valid point.)
please reply

i really want to know

I will show 2 pics of this woman getting torture no sex but I imply he fucked her with a black screen is it also wrong? (this is what I'm planning from the start but add pov sex pic)

I personally would not mention the torture or sex until the character meets the woman and have her tell the MC about being tortured. When she is telling the MC about the torture you can show pics there of the torture. I would say it is fine to imply that the sex happened. If she as supposed to have been raped by the guy she could just say it wasn't enough for him to torture me he even raped me or something along those lines. I don't think it's necessary to show pics of the sex or rape depending on how you're going about that.

 

[Incognito^]

I personally would not mention the torture or sex until the character meets the woman and have her tell the MC about being tortured. When she is telling the MC about the torture you can show pics there of the torture. I would say it is fine to imply that the sex happened. If she as supposed to have been raped by the guy she could just say it wasn't enough for him to torture me he even raped me or something along those lines. I don't think it's necessary to show pics of the sex or rape depending on how you're going about that.

So you saying it a matter of timing and when it needed (good point)
and also as i see the whole conversation calling me cuck cuck not trying to say what they want, I decided way before I talked to you, I will stick to imply sex and show torture to say what she went through

well if you're interested in this one wait for next version and decide do i deserve to get your support or not

i hope this reply is good for FAXE10%

 

[grim019]

So you saying it a matter of timing and when it needed (good point)
and also as i see the whole conversation calling me cuck cuck not trying to say what they want, I decided way before I talked to you, I will stick to imply sex and show torture to say what she went through

well if you're interested in this one wait for next version and decide do i deserve to get your support or not

i hope this reply is good for FAXE10%

Yeah things got a bit heated with the discussion. I am willing to give the next version a try.

 

[Faxe10%]

i hope this reply is good for FAXE10%

Nope, but gl for your game.

 

[johnmnf692]

A real question is a random milf your wife dude the thought you had like I kept saying just snippet do you know what a snippet mean just a pic if you don't want to just hit that in setting you won't see that pic

a guy who says my works for rapists and Cucks let me tell you then is game of thrones also for rapists and is berserk also for rapist

dude I'm not saying my work is as good as that, but I want to make my work good and interesting

and also I'm saying those little pics elevate the story futher is gives us some stakes why that tyrant deserves the pusinshment.

it is waste of time for you and me if I need to explain even further

if you think those stories are for cucks and rapists I'm sorry dude my game is not for you

atleast talk with some common sense


mc here saving a milf from a tyrant is for rapists and cucks

my vn is definitely not for you Please don't spoil the comment section with your views

and dude you promoting a game that has slave, exhibition etc., but my story is wrong for you (I really talking to entirely different audience here he likes salves but i can't give story some stakes with a pic of what is going through ok)

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Games of Thrones and Berserk aren't porn. So this comparison immediately falls apart. Berserk is also infinitely better written than anything you could ever even dream of coming up with. Your MC(s) will never be as deep and/or philosophical as Guts is. Your villain(s) will never be on the level of Griffith. And your LIs/heroines will never be on the Level of Casca (or Farnese or Schierke). Additionally, even Kentaro Miura said that he went overboard on the sexual violence depicted in Berserk.

Now, let me explain something to you about Cosy Cafe, since you decided to try to talk shit about one of the best H-games ever made. Did you notice how it doesn't have the rape tag? That's because there's no non-consensual content in it. Cosy Cafe is a ROMANCE HAREM game with LIGHT BDSM elements. There are no actual slaves, there is only consensual slave-play. There are also 0 scenes of the LIs being intimate with anyone other than the MC and yet the MC is still able to steal girls away from one of the antagonists because said antagonist wants to be with them. So the game is even able to do Netori better than you, despite not focusing on it.

 

[Incognito^]

Games of Thrones and Berserk aren't porn.

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Spoiler: Comparing my mc to guts dude I clearly said my work is not great as those two I want to make work great like them what you here comparing both mcs by the Guts is great

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So the game is even able to do Netori better than you, despite not focusing on it.

Dude but they have sex scenes and gore i'm talking

and also about netori how you know i can't do better than them i didn't even implemented it
about cosy cafe did i talk or i said you promoting a game that has slave tag and Exhibition (which is technically fcking your own love interest on streets etc.,)

just as I said you just a troll wants to ruin someone else work for fun

i also said My work is not as better as berserk or game of thrones you just a guy trying to troll people with your own bias

talk about a insane levels of copium he had, They can do netroi but not me and also i didn't even put them in game I just said I want make netori, this guy came at full speed saying it is wrong now he is ok when it comes to other work

Guys is A troll trying to push down a work before it even has another version

please play the game and think yourself

as I said my game is not for you definitely not for you JOHNMNF you saying netori is good in other one but not here what

For the all guys who giving me smiling emoji and liking this dude comment, dude read this guy saying he is ok with netori but not in my game which is not even implemented

AS said wait for v0.2 and decide don't listen to this trolls who just fucks someone work on there bias I don't even know him but he came at me at full speed like WTF

Spoiler: me just coping

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and also bro promting another game eternum that has prostitution tag

I'm not trying to defame you everyone have there own fetishes i'm just saying you ok with game has prositution but trying to mock my game which is not even released netroi related content in my game who is coping here definitely not me

and also sorry to uploader For making this whole comment section a joke please Upload my games here IF you like them please

 

[johnmnf692]

Dude but they have sex scenes and gore i'm talking

and also about netori how you know i can't do better than them i didn't even implemented it
about cosy cafe did i talk or i said you promoting a game that has slave tag and Exhibition (which is technically fcking your own love interest on streets etc.,)

just as I said you just a troll wants to ruin someone else work for fun

i also said My work is not as better as berserk or game of thrones you just a guy trying to troll people with your own bias

talk about a insane levels of copium he had, They can do netroi but not me and also i didn't even put them in game I just said I want make netori, this guy came at full speed saying it is wrong now he is ok when it comes to other work

Guys is A troll trying to push down a work before it even has another version

please play the game and think yourself

as I said my game is not for you definitely not for you JOHNMNF you saying netori is good in other one but not here what

For the all guys who giving me smiling emoji and liking this dude comment, dude read this guy saying he is ok with netori but not in my game which is not even implemented

AS said wait for v0.2 and decide don't listen to this trolls who just fucks someone work on there bias I don't even know him but he came at me at full speed like WTF

Spoiler: me just coping

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and also bro promting another game eternum that has prostitution tag

I'm not trying to defame you everyone have there own fetishes i'm just saying you ok with game has prositution but trying to mock my game which is not even released netroi related content in my game who is coping here definitely not me

and also sorry to uploader For making this whole comment section a joke please Upload my games here IF you like them please

I never said netori was wrong or bad. There's nothing wrong with netori, although it can be handled poorly just like anything else. What I said was that showing LIs being fucked by men other than the MC is a choice which will only please cucks. Which is accurate. You are the one who has repeatedly said that you are going to put those scenes in the game.

The netori in Cosy Cafe is because one of the antagonists (Brian) WANTS to fuck some of the LIs, not because he's already done it and certainly not because he's done it on screen. Those LIs are virgins, Brian hasn't even so much as kissed them, because they never wanted anything to do with him in the first place.

Eternum has the prostitution tag because there's a side character early in the game that the MC can have sex with, who is a prostitute. Eternum is a romance harem game, the only man in the game who is intimate with any of the LIs is the MC. Do you think I don't know what content is in two of my favorite AVNs of all time? Do you think I would promote games with cuck shit in them if I despise that kind of thing?

All you do is read tags and don't even bother understanding why they're there. I played your game, which literally says that there will be NTR, and I read your posts here which say that there will be scenes with the LIs getting railed by other dudes. I'm sorry, but if you don't want people to think this is a cuck game, you probably shouldn't tell everyone that you're going to put a bunch of cuck adjacent content into it.

 

[Incognito^]

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All you do is read tags and don't even bother understanding why they're there. I played your game, which literally says that there will be NTR, and I read your posts here which say that there will be scenes with the LIs getting railed by other dudes. I'm sorry, but if you don't want people to think this is a cuck game, you probably shouldn't tell everyone that you're going to put a bunch of cuck adjacent content into it.

Atleast you talked with some brain really. you gave your opinion.

and also i can say the same thing about you like I just said I want to add i didn't even add you just came at me and also you saying mc willingly have sex with prostitute in one of those VNS how it is different, other than me saying I might show a pic and they not

whatever you said your opnion and it is kind of aligns with what grim asked I will think carefully and go further with the story

 

[Tenchip3d0]

OK
So you saying mc who doesn't know the female until now is getting cucked just because you saw a few clips ok I will rmmeber that

I haven't even mentioned cuck yet. You're just making up your own mind.

 

[Incognito^]

I haven't even mentioned cuck yet. You're just making up your own mind.
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Wrong reply to the wrong person

As you see The whole comment section is filled with cuck I think I replied to you by mistake
Still

Copium part I don't need it because I'm trying to write a story not Sandbox that solely focus on Male domination

still I will make scenes as better as possible So i won't offend more people


if you have anything to say feel free to say

 

[MrBenny]

Hmm...the king kind of look's like the Canadian comedian/actor...Mike Myers.



Also, some have issues with the scene with the king fucking a girl with a number of other girls unconscious around the pool. I found the scene was OK... I saw it as it didn't happening to any of the potential love interests, just some unknown maids or slaves. (I just clicked on the cum choice right away, then the scene was over. The now king looks like a minute man. )

And, from what I saw of this fantasy title/story, it look's very interesting. Though, reading the dev's comment at the ending, that this story will have NTR content... (sigh) Well it will depend on what type of that highly controversial tag, will be present, and how it will be handled?

If it's going to only be MC steal's the girl away Netori, which is highly favored out of most of the kink groups. Then this is very cool...where MC will be thief. . But if this title is also going to include the other two NTR kink's, then it's not going to be received very well (mainly) among the harem, and non-NTR crowd's. (I also avoid most title's with unavoidable, skippable cuck, or sharing / swinging content.

From what I saw I'm interested in reading more, to see how the will play out. Will it be a hero who journey's through the country side meeting and collecting pussy? (At least I hope there will be such a path, or close to one. I'm a huge fan of the magic/superhero MC's, that are not written as passive idiots who get cucked by other dude's, or predatory lesbians.

Regards.