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zedascove

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Amazing artwork and plot development. Literally left me with blue balls.

I didn't even know I needed a "Hey Arnold" parody but now I can't wait for the next update.

Keep up the good work!
 
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zedascove

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Jul 13, 2018
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Just an advice for the developers. If you're trying to portray a character as innocent, don't make her slutty all of sudden, it really breaks all suspension of disbelief.

I really liked the direction you were taking with Lila, with the grandpa telling double meaning jokes and trying to convince her to "sell kisses", and her reacting naive and clueless, it was really hot. Please keep her development in a somewhat realistic pace, don't make her porn queen overnight. And by that I don't mean "cockblocking" the player, just making her react in a more realistic tone at first - this way you can even reuse renders/animations and make small changes later, expanding the content without having to spend too much time.
 
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tonyboy12

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Jun 11, 2018
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Just an advice for the developers. If you're trying to portray a character as innocent, don't make her slutty all of sudden, it really breaks all suspension of disbelief.

I really liked the direction you were taking with Lila, with the grandpa telling double meaning jokes and trying to convince her to "sell kisses", and her reacting naive and clueless, it was really hot. Please keep her development in a somewhat realistic pace, don't make her porn queen overnight. And by that I don't mean "cockblocking" the player, just making her react in a more realistic tone at first - this way you can even reuse renders/animations and make small changes later, expanding the content without having to spend too much time.


THIS^^^^

ALL OF THIS

That's the only issue I had with this, is how she came off as innocent one moment, and suddenly she turned into a seasoned adult film actress with no sense of reality to it. My suggestion is make it SLIGHTLY more gradual, with maybe her perversion scale to the progress number, opening up to new acts and dialogue the further you "corrupt" her, while making other girls (i.e. Olga, Helga, Rhonda, Pheobe, etc) easier or harder to get depending on their personality
 
4.60 star(s) 8 Votes