So... naturally when I first saw this I thought 'Yeah, Race of Life vibes'. And there is some, but there is certainly potential here.
Story so far is kinda of run of the mill, try to get yourself back on your feet while getting burned, do shady shit, get into trouble, etc. Not really original, but its not entirely bad. Certainly depending on how things play out, and how well the writing is, it may turn out to be a diamond in the rough.
I would say the one really good thing this has going for it is the animations, which are smooth as hell and really well done. That said however, in terms of the gals... Well... they could use some touching up. The MC oddly makes me think of a young Ray Liotta.
Overall though, there is definate potential and certainly promise for the story and game. Clean up some of the text, keep building upon the story and such, maybe a little touch up with some of the gals, and this could end up being a gem, so long as the dev team stays with it and doesn't abandon it simply because they aren't getting enough backing or such.