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BFGhost

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What exact analysis/graph are You talking about?
Well, I've brought this one down on myself, haven't I? Now I just have present an applicable graph theory analysis method to prove that I wasn't just saying smart words with a smart face without a slightest idea of what I am talking about (which was partly true :rolleyes:).
Anyways... several hours of online research later...
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thevampirate

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ok anyone know what there is after storehouse? and any follow up to the newspaper? i cant find the monocle and cant seem to find out where the V card is used. i already started the quest on the airship and got guy to testify. lastly is C update after D because C seems to be the new one despite D being released 2 weeks ago.
 
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Looks great from screenshots (i'll play when there is more content) but I'm curious how the corruption will be structured. You say you can choose between "remain pure or fall into lustful wanton" but will you be able to get h-scenes without her acting like a slut? Sexual favours/blackmail/non-con kind of scenes as opposed to her just being horny.

I like playing "pure" characters but I don't personally see the point in playing pure if there isn't any h-scenes for that playstyle.
 

Idontplay

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ok anyone know what there is after storehouse? and any follow up to the newspaper? i cant find the monocle and cant seem to find out where the V card is used. i already started the quest on the airship and got guy to testify. lastly is C update after D because C seems to be the new one despite D being released 2 weeks ago.
The Monocle isn't yet implemented and in the dialogues is explained that you will can use the v-card in a next update.
 
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vazkombarov

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So I have encountered one bug in the 'new dungeon'. When guy asks you to look for the sensors, I cant find none in the robot, which is in gang's place. I am not able to interact with it. I assume this is due to the fact that I entered the place before meeting the guy who needs them. And I guess it was a bug that I got there in the first place, since it supposed to be under electrical pressure.
Anyway, I don't really want to replay the whole thing because of it tbh. And this comes to developer's request to review this dungeon.

I really don't want to undermine your hard work on this but I found dungeon a bit too tedious. In my opinion, these sort of things should be in less sizes. I spent around 30-60 minutes just to get to the guy who was supposed to give you the quest for sensors and stuff. I don't understand the reason behind these long corridors, so I was missing him all the time while going from one place to another without any kind of purpose, plus my mood would go down and I would have to wait for its recover. You planned 3 or 4 floors and on the first floor there are still some more places that you want to add I assume. And if they are going to be structured in same fashion and it will take the same amount of time to build all of this... well its not good(

I really enjoyed mini riddles in the sewers with 'judges'. They were not tedious and pretty enjoyable as they went alongside with the story. If you make a dungeon, I'd prefer to have them more linear in terms of structure but more 'contentwise' in terms of story.

So in general, this dungeon is a good thing but for limited amount of people. I'd prefer you made it less in size because I did a lot of walking :D. Whereas I'd prefer more story.

Btw having 'placeholders' in a bar mini game is not funny at this point. Just add some text man, there is not need to wait for the pictures or sketches. I see you as a perfectionist as you try to create those complex combat mechanics, animations etc. but still...

Because of this the main thing suffers in development - story. I mean female journalist in steampunk setting going undercover into brothel to explore its secrets... That's what I personally expect from your game hahaha.

Oh and one more thing, there are some minor inconsistencies in sort of 'corruption path'. Adelina allows men touching her in the bar, but at the same time she does not drink alcohol. I think there should be some more incentives rather than just tips for her to allow some drunks touch a woman that came from high society. Maybe do not allow flirting for few nights, but add a scene where someone touches her, she becomes super angry, kicks the man. However, bar owner tells her to chill if she wants to continue to work here etc. I guess you get my point.

In the end, this is your game and your vision. So listen to your heart! I'm just a consumer :)
 
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Enlightnd

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If you start, shower at your place, don't opt to put clothes on and go to talk to the person waiting for you downstairs, then don't get dressed after that either, you end up naked at the ministry, naked on the zeppelin and naked at the place the game actually starts.

And all clothes you can put on will be your jacket, corset and hat.


Nobody, including the FC reacts to being completely naked.
 

PeterSnayde

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ok anyone know what there is after storehouse? and any follow up to the newspaper? i cant find the monocle and cant seem to find out where the V card is used. i already started the quest on the airship and got guy to testify. lastly is C update after D because C seems to be the new one despite D being released 2 weeks ago.
Visit gunsmith, go to court with him. after that work at newspaper 3-5 times.
v5 was released 2 weeks ago. I'm just updating post with link once I release patched version.

Looks great from screenshots (i'll play when there is more content) but I'm curious how the corruption will be structured. You say you can choose between "remain pure or fall into lustful wanton" but will you be able to get h-scenes without her acting like a slut? Sexual favours/blackmail/non-con kind of scenes as opposed to her just being horny.

I like playing "pure" characters but I don't personally see the point in playing pure if there isn't any h-scenes for that playstyle.
It won't be linear. I don't want to make simple scale like from sluttinnes. the corruption is not equal to slut level in my project. It can help to develop some part of character sexuality, but it's not directly responsible for it. Pure relationship will be in this game same as not pure. I don't plan to make a degraded things like we can observe in a lot of other JRPG's.
I'm still collecting data to see where to move project for next release.
 
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Developer, don't work on story yet, work on bugs dude, there are still many bugs from clothing system to simple firing tutorial. Also the corruption part in the pub is so quick, she was already ready for showing her panties, letting people touch her ass, like that just took me away. This game has a lot of potential and these things are ruining the experience.
 
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Idontplay

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Also the corruption part in the pub is so quick, she was already ready for showing her panties, letting people touch her ass, like that just took me away.
I was just thinking if suggest to slow that part: Adelina seems too eager to let the guests touch her. But I didn't dare because he should have rewrite all the code of that part.
 

PeterSnayde

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Well, I've brought this one down on myself, haven't I? Now I just have present an applicable graph theory analysis method to prove that I wasn't just saying smart words with a smart face without a slightest idea of what I am talking about (which was partly true :rolleyes:).
Anyways... several hours of online research later...
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When I started to make this mini-game I had very lot suggestions like how many rows or other elements, how to make stealth (I tried to move "World of porncraft" to MV once, so I have understanding how to work with stealth/detection plugins)... about how many lines I should make, how movement will be and else. At beginning You and enemy moved at same and there was no hiding spots at all, and enemy deteted You by just being in same line, but it was game in lottery (will he move on separate line or not), then, after dozen of tries and changes - this mini-game got it's final look.
Before make it - read a lot articles about planning such things. It was kinda exhausting, but result was worth, I guess.

So I have encountered one bug in the 'new dungeon'. When guy asks you to look for the sensors, I cant find none in the robot, which is in gang's place. I am not able to interact with it. I assume this is due to the fact that I entered the place before meeting the guy who needs them. And I guess it was a bug that I got there in the first place, since it supposed to be under electrical pressure.
Anyway, I don't really want to replay the whole thing because of it tbh. And this comes to developer's request to review this dungeon.

I really don't want to undermine your hard work on this but I found dungeon a bit too tedious. In my opinion, these sort of things should be in less sizes. I spent around 30-60 minutes just to get to the guy who was supposed to give you the quest for sensors and stuff. I don't understand the reason behind these long corridors, so I was missing him all the time while going from one place to another without any kind of purpose, plus my mood would go down and I would have to wait for its recover. You planned 3 or 4 floors and on the first floor there are still some more places that you want to add I assume. And if they are going to be structured in same fashion and it will take the same amount of time to build all of this... well its not good(

I really enjoyed mini riddles in the sewers with 'judges'. They were not tedious and pretty enjoyable as they went alongside with the story. If you make a dungeon, I'd prefer to have them more linear in terms of structure but more 'contentwise' in terms of story.

So in general, this dungeon is a good thing but for limited amount of people. I'd prefer you made it less in size because I did a lot of walking :D. Whereas I'd prefer more story.

Btw having 'placeholders' in a bar mini game is not funny at this point. Just add some text man, there is not need to wait for the pictures or sketches. I see you as a perfectionist as you try to create those complex combat mechanics, animations etc. but still...

Because of this the main thing suffers in development - story. I mean female journalist in steampunk setting going undercover into brothel to explore its secrets... That's what I personally expect from your game hahaha.

Oh and one more thing, there are some minor inconsistencies in sort of 'corruption path'. Adelina allows men touching her in the bar, but at the same time she does not drink alcohol. I think there should be some more incentives rather than just tips for her to allow some drunks touch a woman that came from high society. Maybe do not allow flirting for few nights, but add a scene where someone touches her, she becomes super angry, kicks the man. However, bar owner tells her to chill if she wants to continue to work here etc. I guess you get my point.

In the end, this is your game and your vision. So listen to your heart! I'm just a consumer :)
1. The is no such bugs. Optical sensor has chance of dropping when You search that place. Dungeon has more than 1 way to finish whatever is there. You can not talk to that guy at all, and disable those cables on your own.)

2. Dungeon will be even bigger. And more interesting. About content - There will be more content. I just want to have more time to work on it.

3. The whole bar content will be reworked soon since role-play system will require different set of reactions. "Some text" - don't sound good, and won't look good. That's why I'm hiring writer, who can make good and enjoyable scenes.

4. With my budget(less than 400$/month) I'm trying hard to make good content. But my team can't work for free on this project (except me - I'm main volunteer and priest of "free work"-religion in my team)). To make good visual - we need or more time to accumulate funds, or more money to skip "accumulation" phase.
The fact, that we forced to use "placeholders" - make me very-very upset, before v5 release I worked tirelessly on game, slept 5 hours/day, and was constantly upset about how something was not ready in time, or about how I forced to cut some content because something went wrong. In the end I was burned-out that wasn't able even to sleep at all and thought, that I'll get something like heart attack. Last week I got calmer, and developed few ideas how to make things good for all, who interested in my project, and perhaps it will lead to increase of financial support, but I'll write about it later, when raw ideas will be get for of working concept.

If you start, shower at your place, don't opt to put clothes on and go to talk to the person waiting for you downstairs, then don't get dressed after that either, you end up naked at the ministry, naked on the zeppelin and naked at the place the game actually starts.
And all clothes you can put on will be your jacket, corset and hat.
Nobody, including the FC reacts to being completely naked.
It's still unfinished part. Probably will work as it should from next version.

Developer, don't work on story yet, work on bugs dude, there are still many bugs from clothing system to simple firing tutorial. Also the corruption part in the pub is so quick, she was already ready for showing her panties, letting people touch her ass, like that just took me away. This game has a lot of potential and these things are ruining the experience.
What exact bug are You talking about?

I was just thinking if suggest to slow that part: Adelina seems too eager to let the guests touch her. But I didn't dare because he should have rewrite all the code of that part.
Please wait for roleplay system and pub rework.
 

Kenzin20

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Im getting width null or something whenever i start the game. That error keeps me from not playing the game. How do i fix this?
 

Kenzin20

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What is next after warehouse stealing briefcase mission? Where do i go? I got waitress work and publish work as well and im stuck dunno where to go
 

Ignazzio

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I truly love direction this game goes. Technically it still requires a lot of time to make everything work but it surely looks unique as it is. Gameplay is creative and stands out although I'd give up bigger dungeons for a while and focused on a character development, implementing corruption system and whatnot. I suppose some small quests like go here do that could add a lot of life to the city as well. Generally I can't wait for next versions as it is one of those games that really require some time to start shining. Keep it up
 
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PeterSnayde

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Im getting width null or something whenever i start the game. That error keeps me from not playing the game. How do i fix this?
It's bug with RPG Maker. I saw bugs like that in other games too. Just restart game.

What is next after warehouse stealing briefcase mission? Where do i go? I got waitress work and publish work as well and im stuck dunno where to go
Few pages a go there was explanation. Please read it.
 

PeterSnayde

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I truly love direction this game goes. Technically it still requires a lot of time to make everything work but it surely looks unique as it is. Gameplay is creative and stands out although I'd give up bigger dungeons for a while and focused on a character development, implementing corruption system and whatnot. I suppose some small quests like go here do that could add a lot of life to the city as well. Generally I can't wait for next versions as it is one of those games that really require some time to start shining. Keep it up
This will be our main focus for next update.
 
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chaien5a

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Does wearing less clothes affects the gameplay or how the npc behave to the MC?
Also keep it up , good game bro!
 

Idontplay

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I would report two minor bugs and a curiosity.
The first bug (image 1) at a certain point, when Adelyna goes to the court, we can read the guard's question and the Ryse's answer in the same dialogue box.
The second one (image 2): is it possible move the image of the scenario above the dialogue box? I don't remember if someone had already talked about this bug or if he had talked about the bug in which Adelina's image hides the image of the scenario.
The curiosity (image 3): am I seeing a nipple with a piercing under that shirt?
:love:

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chaien5a

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Can someone help me with the warehouse no6 quest? i dont know what to do , i turned off the light , took the heater things off i guess ( the 2 things) , and now i don't know where to go
 
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