Well i have exploring a good part of the game and i have some things to say.
First this game have potential, if you can work with another person, you will advance more often, and patreon support would be better, but yes i know it's difficult
The art are good. The protagonist is one of the most beautiful of all the games in this website, and Hellena is good too, more, more we need more character's art !!!!!!!
Perhaps make less png if they have no reaction, it's frustrant for the player, i think a too much desert city is better than a city full of non speeking png's
In the begining i was very lost because. If you don't go to the newspaper , you can do nothing, and the location of the newspaper is isolated and with none panel ! So it's very easy to miss it ! Perhaps Adelina need an internal dialogue in begining of day two for remind the player than he need to go to the newspaper, perhaps with detail of were you can find it.
Scores for the writting article mini game are a really good idea, but the score does not appear, wee only have a blurred indication: acceptable, good and perhaps excellent (I didn't manage to get it), it's sad, clear score would be more encouraging
In combat the third shooting option does not appear wee only have normal shot and quick shot, i don't understand why some time you can cover, and sometimes don't, when first cover is take away i tried to move backward for take the second cover but the option never appear....
I know ypu have to be 1 step behind for cover, but that don't work for me, even your sprite sometime you cover behind the cases, sometime you cover inside the case, sometimes forward the case...
We can't find a crowbar in shop so i don't know were you can find it.
I think that regain mood is too slow, but i'm not sure for now
Perhaps restrain the direction too, we have fight, donjeon, enigma, gestion of crew, writing articles, pub mini game etc... and that's cool, diversity of gameplay and thing to do is good. But for the begining focus on one type of gameplay and the story and develop the other thing in the futur. You will attract more player and patreon this way i think
In beginning when you deal with the street's punks, if you choose lie and do nothing, you have a choice off like or not the gropping, well even if you choose dislike , teh first sentence change but not the others: and it's finish with "trying to hide her true emotions and pretending that she was terrified". And you can masturbate at the though in shwoer. It's a small detail i know. But i think it's a bit sad and dumb to let the player decide iif she like it or not but well she like it otherwise and the choice don't really count
Well that's all ! We don't have many things in this game so far, but the potential is here, a great game to discover
Where is the warehouse ?
Bug with the stealth minigame, loot is random here and because of this you can don't loot the requered third sensor ... And if you go another time you can't loot previous loot point's so your stuck
Sorry for the approximate english, not my birth language