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the scene where she's scared of a spider and MC runs in the room while Emma is naked
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MC will become a father figure... to Charlotte's grandkids...
But what will happen with Lucy if the MC does prefer Charlotte? What will she do when she loses another man to her sister?
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She would seek for a bar to get drunk, go in Steve's, get along with that "no-filter crazy but funny pervert" and live a beautiful and nasty life
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Sorry for a little bit off topic
But
6pak2go what do you think, perfect song for us Charlotte simps?
No worries it's a Ballad, and not some harder Music i am normally listen to.
But
6pak2go what do you think, perfect song for us Charlotte simps?
No worries it's a Ballad, and not some harder Music i am normally listen to.
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You, my dear pervert, make me so proud!
I think this story is off to a good start. I tend to enjoy these where the story itself can work without necessarily having to have a fap scene every few clicks. I am looking forward to seeing if it becomes a head slapping "saw that coming" moment or something really unexpected actually happens.
- May 27, 2020
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Great song! Thanks for the recommendation.Sorry for a little bit off topic
But
6pak2go what do you think, perfect song for us Charlotte simps?
No worries it's a Ballad, and not some harder Music i am normally listen to.
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Good post overall. I tend to agree with a lot of it. Even the section about Emma. But how do you have the developer change the bits about Emma's designer career. Do 15-year-olds really do such projects in high school? It's not just her doing those competitions. It's the entire class.
You might need to do something about Zak too. At least the movies he appears in. 15-year-old pool boy and surfer heartthrob? Maybe, but it's a stretch.
So I don't think it's quite so simple as changing Emma's age and school. Even I could do that with a couple of mass replaces to the scripts.
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Love will help her a lot
, but we need to wait a pretty long time, because, if Charlie changed her behavior to the MC in a moment, plot will became awful. (It concerns to all 4 love interests in the game). The MC should built relationship of trust with all Lloyds' ladies and then we can count on some friendship and then we can expect love interest from one of the lady. It's a long shot path.I feel the same. Well, there you are, great minds think alike
(No offence, I'm trying to laugh a bit). In fact, it was clearly logical conclusion to make. I'm glad to see someone, who took my point of view.I disagree with you, and I didn't catch who was saying that "decent guy" could heal? You may call me naive, but time and love heals our life wounds. I give an example from my life: my aunt get married in 80's, her husband was like a wolf in sheepskin - kind and friendly on public and abuser in home, added to that he was an alcoholic. My aunt forgive him so many times, she even lose a count how many. She forgive his adulteries, (jeez, she even knew all the names of his sluts), he betrayed her many times and all of this continued until his death. I asked a lot of questions to my aunt and the last one was: if there's a opportunity to have a relationship with a man after so many years of loneliness, will you be with him or probably start a new family?" She answered that maybe she will try again to be woman in love, but she needs to fall in love so hard like some kind of magic need to show up, because she looks at men through x-rays glasses and play with her is a really bad idea - she sees right through them at once. My aunt doesn't disappoint in men, she believes in love and doesn't compare her bloody husband with all men on Earth.
"I believe in love, it's all we got...
...Without love I wouldn't believe,
I couldn't believe in you,
And I wouldn't believe in me
Without love"
Elton John sang it perfectly what I'm gonna saying right now. And these words, even if they're a boring cliché in art or in life being, but love gives us a strength, hope, faith, self-confidence in what we're doing. And I believe that Charlotte will have an appointment to psychiatrist again, because she will want to deal with her own old problem, but she needs to trust to the MC, fall in love with the MC. Why she should change something in her life, everything looks good to her, but the MC will show her that is not. Then she will have hesitation in her behavior towards the MC and she will suffer because of it - her mind tell her to stop, her heart tell her to try, her reflexes tell her to run away... Because she has been building the ice-castle so many years, decades, that it will be impossible to ruin that castle at once. It's predictable to go to psychiatrist, because she needs a clear second opinion, she needs answers, help to rebalance her priorities of life. Charlotte is a tough woman, but in that case emotions will overwhelm her.
Having a team of bodyguards is quite logical, but, unfortunately, plot won't work in that way, and it will be a real hardcore for dev to deal with it. Even Jed Mercurio write analogical event that David save Julia and storms Pascoe house by himself (he got a team in the other car, but doesn't ask them for a help), and that twist of plot help to bring close together Julia and David (David is only one, who cares about her, he was there with her in the car, he's a hero, who save her life).
I believe too
My thoughts exactly! Dev has been already hinted to us that the MC had moved in correct direction (a gift with photos of Charlottes' children) Own children means all to their mothers. But Charlie needs a frank talk, she needs a clear point of view. She needs to know about bullying to Emma.
Well, she needs to have that man to lose
. In fact, if there's a possibility to make a love triangle, Charlotte will leave the MC and the MC like Geralt in the Witcher 3 ended up with nothing at all, BUT dev has been already said there's no harem in this game, so maybe HillsideVN will tease these type of gamers and then spoiled their intentions (I'm a pure evil )
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They are perfect for each other tbh, Bonnie and Clyde (Hillside Edition)She would seek for a bar to get drunk, go in Steve's, get along with that "no-filter crazy but funny pervert" and live a beautiful and nasty life
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- May 9, 2019
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Well, I don't know what DB has in mind for the future, so the current proposition might not work, but maybe some things like this?
First, there is not need for Zak to be 15 too. You can make him 17, being in his last year of high school. It would work right? 17 YO popular guy banging everything that moves in high school, our dear Emma also in love with the guy. (just writing that sentence makes me angry, little piece of shit)
About Emma's career, it could be something that she is pursuing while in high school. In fact, in can allow for potential problems, where she is starting to take less care about her grades in other subjects by focusing too much on her designer's studies. After all, I don't think it would be that surprising for her to study that besides high school.
Oh yes. I had written first "for literary point of view" it would make sense when I wanted for "non literary point of view" precisely as it would make the interaction harder.
You could also go the hard way, make it that way in the story and make the danger escalate to the point in which Charlotte ends up accepting to have MC protecting Emma, maybe after the other bodyguard gets very badly injured.
None taken hahaI feel the same. Well, there you are, great minds think alike
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I hope we'll see escalation in the future updates - the plot needs a constant development, but rates should increased step by step. The next update may remain the same level of narration, but it should level ups after. We don't know anything about bad boys band (Charlottes' rapers and Zac and his friends), we need wait to see their intentions (only Emma in danger or the whole Lloyd family?). And after that the MC will make a decision how to protect ladies (
maybe they go out of town to the lovely little house, where they can get to know each other - it would be perfect holiday ).In my opinion, an extra bodyguard should be in the beginning of the story, include him/her now, whiteout knowing the case of danger, it's not appropriate. Maybe afterwards, when the MC choose his lady, an extra one will be needed
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Well, as I said it hiring only a female bodyguard in the beginning when it looked like a simple stalking case would have made more sense, until the police solved it quickly, instead of having a terrifying man inside the house. But that would do for a harder story.I hope we'll see escalation in the future updates - the plot needs a constant development, but rates should increased step by step. The next update may remain the same level of narration, but it should level ups after. We don't know anything about bad boys band (Charlottes' rapers and Zac and his friends), we need wait to see their intentions (only Emma in danger or the whole Lloyd family?). And after that the MC will make a decision how to protect ladies (
In my opinion, an extra bodyguard should be in the beginning of the story, include him/her now, whiteout knowing the case of danger, it's not appropriate. Maybe afterwards, when the MC choose his lady, an extra one will be needed
Still, now that the level of danger have increased you can have MC decide to include another bodyguard to protect at all times both daughters, specially once this Johno asshole becomes known to MC.
We will see what happens. I seriously want to kill all those motherfuckers. Like be a caring and super lovely figure for Emma, giving her hugs and ticking her all the time, everything to make her smile, while secretly making every one of those asshole suffer and slowly disappear. That piece of shit Zak can only hurt my baby. And whoever is stalking her needs to understand that nobody has a very unnatural obsession with my cutie but me!
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This. I want to white knight the whole family, don't need another bodyguard to help - it's our job to protect them & protect them we will!
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I can only express my sentiment with this image
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After missing my last release date I said that I would no longer set a date for future releases. I'm still aiming to release new updates on roughly the same schedule, every 8 weeks, but they will now be released when they are ready.
I'll post a weekly development update for $5+ patrons to let you know what I've been doing and how things are progressing.
And a sincere thank you to everyone that left messages of support when I was struggling recently. I wouldn't have made it without you.
Thanks,
DB
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The first week after release I take a few days break from development and spend time on other things.
Typically this involves:
- listening to feedback about the latest release, fixing typos, etc.
- catching up with any other work that I have neglected, such as Patreon rewards
- tidying my physical and digital workspaces
- backing everything up [I keep two backups - one on an internal HD and another on an external HD]
In the first week of developing v0.9 I have completed the story and written approximately 10% of the first draft of the dialogue. I also bought two new outfits for Charlotte (see below). We should get to see her wear at least one of them in v0.9.
In the next update I should have the first images rendered and will be able to show you some previews.
Thanks,
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Where is a God of the Wind when you need one!