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Haven't seen you here the last months in the hillside chat. Nice that you are back.Me too
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I have been practicing my
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Thanks for your work on a great story. Take your time and do it right.View attachment 1648284
I wanted to let you know that v0.11 will be released sometime in March.
I'm sorry it's been another long development, but there are dramatic, pivotal events happening in this update and I couldn't make it any shorter.
After this release I will return to slightly smaller more frequent updates.
Thanks,
DB
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Charlotte relaxes with a drink.
The MC has something he wants to give to Emma.
Emma runs to her room
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Let's face it, Zak is your typical college MC, comes of as the good guy but really just wants to smash. I can name a few VNs with a Zak as the MC lol.
But yeah honestly I'm getting sick of Emma's stupidity, she's 18 I honestly don't know why she's as niave as a 12 year old, and not that I want anything to happen to her but I think the only way she'll get a wakeup call is if Zak does manage to do something because MC won't always be there to protect her, she needs to stop being a love sick puppy and that won't happen unless she she's Zaks true colors.
But I agree, Nobody gives a fuck about the Zak/Emma story when there's a way more intresting and important story at play, but who knows maybe Zak might be part of the bigger picture in the end.
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Emma acts like a 12 year old because she was probably written as a school student and then made a "college" student because of patreon and the illegality of the whole thing. As sheltered as she is, surely no 18 year old college goer in 21st century who lives in Hollywood of all places acts like her. I can understand being shy and overtly self conscious. But in the 1st chapter iirc she was watching that poolboy movie or whatever and didn't understand why she felt "weird" down there. Maybe it was written a little differently but this was the point. Like seriously? You want me to believe that an 18 year old woman doesn't know what it means to be turned on? Her and the mc have like a grand total of 2 brain cells.
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I agree, I love this VN honestly I think it's different from most VNs I've played, and the MC is a real man instead of a horndog who's in his 30s but acts like a kid who've never seen tits before, I also like the main story with Charlotte but seriously the whole Emma situation is stupid, either she's a retard or as you said she was meant to be written as a much younger girl but no way does a normal 18 year old act like her. Aside from the fact that she didn't know what that "weird feeling" was lol, there's also the way she acts toward her mom, i Cringed at the one scene where she runs to hug her mom when she got back from work, like what 18 year acts like that, maybe some people find that cute or whatever but I think it's rather alarming.
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DB, dude. You gotta stop makin' her cry, because I ain't that sure I'm gonna forgive you anymore
.Enough said.
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Well, as Lucifer already pointed out the Author had to change a couple of things because of Patreon rules ( = you can't portray minors involved with sex and adult themes).
As I pointed out a couple of times Emma is 14 turning to 15 and she's attending 2nd year high school, in fact.
Then Zak's scene should be removed. If they're in school with Zak and her friend back then, there's a problem there I recon.
I mean, Zak and her friend "could" be 18, but it'd be a rather big stretch.
If she is that young, it stands to reason that her schoolmates are around the same age, so you know, there could be more than one problem and thing to be changed here.
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If I am collecting all the points correctly, the screenshot you see when you try to exit the game will be in this update, Charlotte is wearing the same dress that she met Zak in, Emma calls her mum Charlotte crying while she's in the car with MC I don't know what will happen next but I hope it doesn't hurt Emma in any way
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You know what a high school is, don't you?
There are first year students who are 14 and last year students who are 18 (19-20 too, if they failed a couple of times) in it.
The girls who are bullying her and Zak's pals are older years (most likely last year) students, of course.
Sometimes I feel I should stop posting. It isn't worthwhile, most times.
I'm not arguing that, but, it might be stretching it in my opinion
Just my opinion mind you, if Patreon's ok with it, there really isn't a big debate about it.I'm just disappointed that she is that young, which means we won't get to see fuck all after all. I actually thought she was over 18, just dumb as a brick and over sheltered.
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You just told us Zak is child molestor. A child rapist. A bully. A stalker. A girl trafficker.
This game got so much better with all a y all unsustained insinuations.I'm not arguing that, but, it might be stretching it in my opinion
I'm just disappointed that she is that young, which means we won't get to see fuck all after all. I actually thought she was over 18, just dumb as a brick and over sheltered.
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Patreon doesn't agree, dude. That's why The Author MUST tell us Emma is 18 and she's attending college.I'm not arguing that, but, it might be stretching it in my opinion
I'm just disappointed that she is that young, which means we won't get to see fuck all after all. I actually thought she was over 18, just dumb as a brick and over sheltered.
As I've already written: I should stop posting. It isn't worthwhile, most times.
Well, to me she is definitely older than 14. Her body (at least what we' ve seen so far) looks way more like 18. Yes, mentally she may not be as advanced as most at that age, but I know 20+ girls who are even more sheltered and acting more like a 12 year old sometimes. And when they then finally meet their adored celebrity too...