VN Ren'Py Hillside [v0.15 First Half] [DarkBlue]

[BeingADikDik]

Hopefully we get the NTR and Multiple Protagonist tags soon, so that when Zak cucks MC and takes him out of the story the player can take control of Zak and finally get some action.

 

[Deleted member 2755092]

That said, the stalker remains at large, and while the player may have more leads on who that is and how Zak is involved, the character (MC) does not. Until the stalker is ID'd, MC has to suspect everyone in Emma's circle of peers.

Simply put, if Emma is to be alone with anyone unsupervised, MC needs to be there.

Agreed, unless Charlotte gives the ok for a date, which is quite likely what is going to happen seeing the screenshots shared not long ago.

At the end of the Day, the MC should express his concern if Emma goes to a date alone with Zak, but if the employer (Charlotte) says it's ok, that's it. I believe we had that happen to a lesser extent already, where Charlotte told the MC to do an action he was against.

Assuming it goes along those lines, or that the MC keeps an eye out, if Emma gives the ok, he'd have no grounds to stop it from happening if it looked like a normal teenage date, which if Zak is not entirely stupid, would be what happens. I mean even to a bodyguard, Emma giving herself to the man she adores, is hardly a suspicious action regarding his job.

At this point, while some bounds are formed, he's not yet the father figure, or involved with the mother either.
As such, while he can object on security grounds to some things, he's got nothing to say regarding how they deal with their private life or with their lovers outside of the security concerns he should mention.

All things considered for a bodyguard, he's probably overstepped his job more than once already, but, being a VN, we'll ignore those

 

[Bendover885]

Agreed, unless Charlotte gives the ok for a date, which is quite likely what is going to happen seeing the screenshots shared not long ago.

At the end of the Day, the MC should express his concern if Emma goes to a date alone with Zak, but if the employer (Charlotte) says it's ok, that's it. I believe we had that happen to a lesser extent already, where Charlotte told the MC to do an action he was against.

Assuming it goes along those lines, or that the MC keeps an eye out, if Emma gives the ok, he'd have no grounds to stop it from happening if it looked like a normal teenage date, which if Zak is not entirely stupid, would be what happens. I mean even to a bodyguard, Emma giving herself to the man she adores, is hardly a suspicious action regarding his job.

At this point, while some bounds are formed, he's not yet the father figure, or involved with the mother either.
As such, while he can object on security grounds to some things, he's got nothing to say regarding how they deal with their private life or with their lovers outside of the security concerns he should mention.

All things considered for a bodyguard, he's probably overstepped his job more than once already, but, being a VN, we'll ignore those

True enough about the boundries talk. The game would be boring if MC did a 'just do the job' routine, even if it weren't an adult VN.

 

[Deleted member 2755092]

True enough about the boundries talk. The game would be boring if MC did a 'just do the job' routine, even if it weren't an adult VN.

The only way I could see it working, would be if the MC was Charlotte's bodyguard for quite a while already, and they've been dating... and then eventually, became the step father or something along those lines.

Considering how quickly things happened, and the very short time he's been around, outside of his job he's got no business medling with their personal lives. Hell, not that long ago, Charlotte nearly fired him, and only came to begin trusting him recently. He's quite literally, below a new boyfriend stage at this point

 

[Bendover885]

Hopefully we get the NTR and Multiple Protagonist tags soon, so that when Zak cucks MC and takes him out of the story the player can take control of Zak and finally get some action.

I'm sorry, but you've thrown off the Emperor's groove.

*Throws BeingADikDik out the window.*

 

[Turki 10]

Hopefully we get the NTR and Multiple Protagonist tags soon, so that when Zak cucks MC and takes him out of the story the player can take control of Zak and finally get some action.

 

[UncleFredo]

So let us boil this down a bit.
Charlotte has been around superstars her entire career. She is in fact a supermodel. She's seen too much and heard it all. Zack has NO CHANCE getting to her. He has nothing to offer that she hasn't turned down before and she's not going to be taken in by his bullshit.

Emma is certainly naive but there is also NO WAY the MC is going to let anyone take advantage of her. After all Zack could be her stalker. Not going to happen. Period. The only question is how much free reign is the MC going to allow Emma before he steps in. My guess is that she'll get bruised, but he'll be there to "adjust" Zack's behavior long before she's actually harmed. That is, after all, his job.

Most of the action around Zack, assuming he's not the stalker, is random noise. Apparently there are threats to Susie, Emma, and Charlotte. Those are the story threads that matter. Those are the threats that the MC has to neutralize. Hopefully the next update will start to clear away the smoke and we'll get insight into those threats.

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

His job is to protect them, not protect the daughter's cherry from the man she desperately want to pop her cherry.
Since when does a bodyguard stops what in essence would be a couple, from having sex?
I'm not arguing Zak's an asshole, but, protecting a young girl's cherry from the one she's wet about non stop, is not part of the job's description

I agree with those who say it's inhuman to want something bad to happen to Emma but I also agree with this, MC was hired to keep her safe from the stalker not to protect her innocence, now if its rape then yes that's where MC steps in but in this case Emma is so desperate to be with Zak she'd probably spread her lil legs in a heartbeat for him, that of course is not MCs problem. So if Zak does get his way with her(which obviously he won't, I highly doubt dev would let anything like that happen to Charlotte or Emma or any of the LIs without giving us as the MC an option to prevent it from happening) but in the instance where he does get his way and she was willing then that has buggerall to do with the MC and one can't say he failed as a bodyguard.

 

[Deleted member 2755092]

I agree with those who say it's inhuman to want something bad to happen to Emma but I also agree with this, MC was hired to keep her safe from the stalker not to protect her innocence, now if its rape then yes that's where MC steps in but in this case Emma is so desperate to be with Zak she'd probably spread her lil legs in a heartbeat for him, that of course is not MCs problem. So if Zak does get his way with her(which obviously he won't, I highly doubt dev would let anything like that happen to Charlotte or Emma or any of the LIs without giving us as the MC an option to prevent it from happening) but in the instance where he does get his way and she was willing then that has buggerall to do with the MC and one can't say he failed as a bodyguard.

*likes*
Sorry, I've reached my quota of reaction on the site apparently... didn't know there was such a thing, but yesterday was a busy day on several threads

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

he's not yet the father figure, or involved with the mother either.
As such, while he can object on security grounds to some things, he's got nothing to say regarding how they deal with their private life

Facts, however let's not deny that MC stopping Zak from getting his way with Emma will instantly get him brownie points with Charlotte lol.

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

*likes*
Sorry, I've reached my quota of reaction on the site apparently... didn't know there was such a thing, but yesterday was a busy day on several threads

Wtf

 

[Andrew39]

So let us boil this down a bit.
Charlotte has been around superstars her entire career. She is in fact a supermodel. She's seen too much and heard it all. Zack has NO CHANCE getting to her. He has nothing to offer that she hasn't turned down before and she's not going to be taken in by his bullshit.

Emma is certainly naive but there is also NO WAY the MC is going to let anyone take advantage of her. After all Zack could be her stalker. Not going to happen. Period. The only question is how much free reign is the MC going to allow Emma before he steps in. My guess is that she'll get bruised, but he'll be there to "adjust" Zack's behavior long before she's actually harmed. That is, after all, his job.

Most of the action around Zack, assuming he's not the stalker, is random noise. Apparently there are threats to Susie, Emma, and Charlotte. Those are the story threads that matter. Those are the threats that the MC has to neutralize. Hopefully the next update will start to clear away the smoke and we'll get insight into those threats.

So let us boil this down a bit.
You taking having a wank WAY too seriously...

 

[Deleted member 2755092]

Facts, however let's not deny that MC stopping Zak from getting his way with Emma will instantly get him brownie points with Charlotte lol.

Arguable.
It entirely depends on the situation, and what Charlotte told him before the date.

Let's assume the writer goes for the "worse outcome": Zak arrives, meets Charlotte, somehow silver tongues her (she is after all now, a lot less on guard with men, especially if the MC is around and she feel safe).
Now, assuming the mother ends up "liking Zak", which she would have no reasons not to at this time, as neither her or the MC knows what a fuckhead he is. She'd had to go on whatever happens during her meeting him.

Now, the date happens, MC was told to either keep an eye out for protection, or not to follow them by Charlotte. Zak is invited by Emma in her bedroom, she spreads her legs and pussy lips, and he pops her cherry...

Alternatively, since as far as we can tell, he's more interested in Charlotte, he'll give her plenty of TLC and "love", without popping her cherry or doing anything indecent, to get closer to Charlotte (which in all respect, would be a lot smarter to do.)

At which point would the MC have anything to do or say in this?
Zak's good at getting women to let him fuck him, can't blame him for that ^_^

 

[Deleted member 2755092]

Wtf

I'm not even kidding Woke up at 7am today, checked the forum, did one reaction, and then this lol.

 

[Canto Forte]

MC knows Zak is a drug rapist and he knows from his peers.
He knows Zak is no sweet talker, he just takes the girls who idolize him.
Girls come to him, he never got anyone by pursuing her.
His game is that which charly knows all too well - the rapist kind.

 

[Deleted member 2755092]

MC knows Zak is a drug rapist and he knows from his peers.
He knows Zak is no sweet talker, he just takes the girls who idolize him.
Girls come to him, he never got anyone by pursuing her.
His game is that which charly knows all too well - the rapist kind.

If the mc knows that, he should have already told Charlotte about it. If he hasn't there's a big fail on his part there, since that would put Zak very high on the suspect list.

 

[LuciferPrometheus]

If the mc knows that, he should have already told Charlotte about it. If he hasn't there's a big fail on his part there, since that would put Zak very high on the suspect list.

The mc isn't the brightest bulb. He let that paparazzo walk based on just his word that he'd delete the pics lol. Didn't even think to question him on who the stalker was even though the paparazzo knew. Literally brainlet

 

[Deleted member 2755092]

The mc isn't the brightest bulb. He let that paparazzo walk based on just his word that he'd delete the pics lol. Didn't even think to question him on who the stalker was even though the paparazzo knew. Literally brainlet

In all fairness, paparazzis are an integral part of a star's life.

Not condoning how they do their business, but they're usually only a threat to one's reputation, hence, aside from keeping them at a certain distance, not really part of his bodyguard's duty either.
Also, the story does need to happen and move forward, we do need to allow some leniency here and there

 

[Canto Forte]

A bodyguard stops the incoming assault.
This game is not the avengers end game part 2,
only after thanos literally killed your family, gamer!

A bodyguard is not a vigilante or a hero like magik mike to stop ongoing crimes,
MC needs to improvise and prevent the action, not what he did all throughout - damage control.

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

Arguable.
It entirely depends on the situation, and what Charlotte told him before the date.

Let's assume the writer goes for the "worse outcome": Zak arrives, meets Charlotte, somehow silver tongues her (she is after all now, a lot less on guard with men, especially if the MC is around and she feel safe).
Now, assuming the mother ends up "liking Zak", which she would have no reasons not to at this time, as neither her or the MC knows what a fuckhead he is. She'd had to go on whatever happens during her meeting him.

Now, the date happens, MC was told to either keep an eye out for protection, or not to follow them by Charlotte. Zak is invited by Emma in her bedroom, she spreads her legs and pussy lips, and he pops her cherry...

Alternatively, since as far as we can tell, he's more interested in Charlotte, he'll give her plenty of TLC and "love", without popping her cherry or doing anything indecent, to get closer to Charlotte (which in all respect, would be a lot smarter to do.)

At which point would the MC have anything to do or say in this?
Zak's good at getting women to let him fuck him, can't blame him for that ^_^

Zak is famous, he's not a Casanova, the only reason why girls want him is because he's a movie star, that instantly makes him the most wanted guy at school...however Charlotte is not a niave teen girl who'd fall for shit like that, honestly it would make no sense for her to be fine with Emma dating Zak even if he comes off as the greatest guy to walk the planet. Yes MC made her more comfortable but really tho she's only more comfortable with him not with men in general and her being okay with an actor dating her daughter after everything she's been through would be odd. Even if he comes of as a sweet guy, I mean MC was nice to her since day 1 but she hated him so for her to just start trusting every guy just because she trusts MC is a bit stupid and Charlotte is not stupid. But of course judging by the preview she seems fine with him which makes no sense given the fact that Charlotte hates men, just because shes starting to warm up to MC doesn't mean she'd automatically trust any other guy especially an actor, I mean Char is surrounded by actors and agents and she knows how scummy some of em are.