Ren'Py Holiday Island [v0.4.5.1] [darkhound1]

[rowx87]

Also, don't take this the wrong way. The dialogue could use some polish. It seems like it might have been translated from another language. The word choice feels a bit off. Clunky? There's obviously the occasional typo. That's going to happen anywhere. But something about the dialogue just seemed weird.

 

[rowx87]

I am playing 0.3.1.1 but honestly I don't remember if I got it from the forum or the Patreon. I'll download the one from the Patreon and copy my local saves over.

 

[Bantry]

Also, don't take this the wrong way. The dialogue could use some polish. It seems like it might have been translated from another language. The word choice feels a bit off. Clunky? There's obviously the occasional typo. That's going to happen anywhere. But something about the dialogue just seemed weird.

You need to provide an example of what you are talking about. The word 'choice' is used more than once during the game and in more than one appointment/event/scene.

 

[rowx87]

You need to provide an example of what you are talking about. The word 'choice' is used more than once during the game and in more than one appointment/event/scene.

Word choice, as in the words the person writing the dialogue chose to use.

 

[ZenGarden]

You need to provide an example of what you are talking about. The word 'choice' is used more than once during the game and in more than one appointment/event/scene.

Well, here's one example -



I didn't fast forward through the opening this time, and found a few things like this.

I've been making annotated shots like this, this play-through, but I don't want to flood the thread with them.

 

[Bantry]

Well, here's one example -

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I didn't fast forward through the opening this time, and found a few things like this.

I've been making annotated shots like this, this play-through, but I don't want to flood the thread with them.

Grammatical errors will be missed. Compile them and then save everything to a zip file and upload to a free hoster site and send Darkhound the link.

 

[rowx87]

Yeah I'll keep a closer eye out for what I mean and get examples.

 

[junior366]

Pretty sure English isn't Darkhound's first language, I believe he is German, but his game makes a WHOLE lot more sense grammatically than some games I have seen,

 

[rowx87]

Pretty sure English isn't Darkhound's first language, I believe he is German, but his game makes a WHOLE lot more sense grammatically than some games I have seen,

Right. That's kind of what I was talking about. It's not incomprehensible at all. It's just a bit strange. I'm definitely not trying to be overly critical. My wife's first language isn't English either so I can get that some mannerisms and colloquialisms can be hard to pick up or translate.

 

[johndowblahblah]

I wonder when Aly get vaginal penetration sex scene

 

[darkhound1]

Grammatical errors will be missed. Compile them and then save everything to a zip file and upload to a free hoster site and send Darkhound the link.

It's not a grammatical error. It's like a typo. The brain is faster than the hand and some words are simply left out so that the result is not a complete sentence and/or doesn't make sense.
It's not necessary to provide "corrections" for things like that. Send me a screenshot or the text (exactly as it is) and I will fix it.
Write 300k words and try to not have hundreds of mistakes like that. It's impossible without spending a lot of additional time and having several editors. I read/play every scene at least once after writing it, but pretty sure there are still a lot of errors with it's, its, missing letters etc.

 

[norb82]

#fanart

Alice preparing for the nightbar in the wardrobe. The hardest moment for a woman, "what should I wear? " But before deciding it, having some "myself time"






"I am so fuckin sexy"

 

[RHead]

I'm having an issue now where (for example) if I have an appointment at the pool like the Wet t-shirt contest, if I'm at the pool early, it will trigger immediately and will repeat every time time advances, so every 30 minutes so long as I'm still at the pool.

Yeah, have the same. It goes for any appointment anywhere really (wet t-shird/butt contests, gym workouts etc)

Edit: Reading back, I have the 0.3.1.1 PC version downloaded from the link here.

 

[rowx87]

Yeah, have the same. It goes for any appointment anywhere really (wet t-shird/butt contests, gym workouts etc)

Edit: Reading back, I have the 0.3.1.1 PC version downloaded from the link here.

Yeah I went to the Patreon, downloaded 0.3.1.0 and the 0.3.1.1 update, copied my \game\saves file over. It -seems- to work at the moment. I haven't had that issue again (yet).

I was thinking yesterday about story suggestions, so I'll type them out while I'm thinking about them.

Spoiler: Snu snu

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Spoiler: I volunteer as tribute!

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Spoiler: Once more, with gusto

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Spoiler: Sexual Healing

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Spoiler: Glamazon

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[junior366]

Yeah I went to the Patreon, downloaded 0.3.1.0 and the 0.3.1.1 update, copied my \game\saves file over. It -seems- to work at the moment. I haven't had that issue again (yet).

I was thinking yesterday about story suggestions, so I'll type them out while I'm thinking about them.

Spoiler: Snu snu

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I like the way you think!!!!

 

[rowx87]

I like the way you think!!!!

I updated Glamazon a bit. More specifics. lol

 

[AlecVentrue]

Can anyone help?
The Game begun, but as soon i was at the Reception i could not see Alice, only saw black, when i left the Reception some kind of transparent Alpha Background appeared and Alice was a Dwarf, like a tiny Woman?
How to fix this?
Tysm

 

[scannatore]

Can anyone help?
The Game begun, but as soon i was at the Reception i could not see Alice, only saw black, when i left the Reception some kind of transparent Alpha Background appeared and Alice was a Dwarf, like a tiny Woman?
How to fix this?
Tysm

Sadly you're late.
Yesterday i waited the full moon, and made a sacrifice to the Boob Goddess. Drink a lot of beer.
Now the game works well.
You can wait the next one, ignore the issue or wait for 0.3.2
Or simply drink more beer.

 

[AlecVentrue]

Ha ha your so funny, can you do more than mock others?

 

[junior366]

Can anyone help?
The Game begun, but as soon i was at the Reception i could not see Alice, only saw black, when i left the Reception some kind of transparent Alpha Background appeared and Alice was a Dwarf, like a tiny Woman?
How to fix this?
Tysm

Sounds like you need to install the 3.1.1 update from darkhound1 's Patreon.