- Thread starter Medievalover
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Potential for an 8/10.
I feel like you've done the opposite of most creators, you've learnt how to animate before you can tell a story.
You already have the ideas for at least 10 incredible scenes in this 10 minute playthrough, if you develop a backstory and universe to set these scenes I think you're on your way to making a visual novel that would become an instant classic. Obviously on release it might be better to set custom relationships and stuff to avoid getting shot down.
The male character is a bit scuffed at the moment but I imagine that if you are planning to dig deeper into this project you will make the model more immersive.
Female model and posing is excellent, you clearly know your stuff in this area so no further comments on that.
Key take away would be to build the story environment, and slowly increase the tension between the two characters. Obviously this release is more of a demo so it is story lacking, but I really believe that there is huge potential if you decide to make this a full project complete with a story.
I feel like you've done the opposite of most creators, you've learnt how to animate before you can tell a story.
You already have the ideas for at least 10 incredible scenes in this 10 minute playthrough, if you develop a backstory and universe to set these scenes I think you're on your way to making a visual novel that would become an instant classic. Obviously on release it might be better to set custom relationships and stuff to avoid getting shot down.
The male character is a bit scuffed at the moment but I imagine that if you are planning to dig deeper into this project you will make the model more immersive.
Female model and posing is excellent, you clearly know your stuff in this area so no further comments on that.
Key take away would be to build the story environment, and slowly increase the tension between the two characters. Obviously this release is more of a demo so it is story lacking, but I really believe that there is huge potential if you decide to make this a full project complete with a story.
Excellent job Snowstorm!!! I thought that you made a fun little story. Best of luck I look forward to further adventures!
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Russian translation, if anyone needs it
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Then dont download it!!!!!!This is way to sick!!!! this is NOT OK!!! report game plz
All of u shoud know the differnts between right and wrong! this game is so wrong in all ways!! sorry... but this was NOT satyfing me!!!!!
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That's exactly because of such comments on many 18+ sites, moralphages are bannedThis is way to sick!!!! this is NOT OK!!! report game plz
All of u shoud know the differnts between right and wrong! this game is so wrong in all ways!! sorry... but this was NOT satyfing me!!!!!
What did you expect, anyway? Games don't have tags for nothing. And here you can clearly see the loli tag and incest + for the most incomprehensible, there is a short description
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This is way to sick!!!! this is NOT OK!!! report game plz
All of u shoud know the differnts between right and wrong! this game is so wrong in all ways!! sorry... but this was NOT satyfing me!!!!!
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Love your game. really HOT. but could use some different choices and animations. All in all, It was fun. Plan on making any more?
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Lol, do you just download every game you find without checking tags?This is way to sick!!!! this is NOT OK!!! report game plz
All of u shoud know the differnts between right and wrong! this game is so wrong in all ways!! sorry... but this was NOT satyfing me!!!!!
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At the end of the game, it says that the game was short.where there any other versions of this game .. kinda a short game if not
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go away, f95zone is full of this. dont download and dont commentThis is way to sick!!!! this is NOT OK!!! report game plz
All of u shoud know the differnts between right and wrong! this game is so wrong in all ways!! sorry... but this was NOT satyfing me!!!!!
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This is way to sick!!!! this is NOT OK!!! report game plz
All of u shoud know the differnts between right and wrong! this game is so wrong in all ways!! sorry... but this was NOT satyfing me!!!!!
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yeah act like your without sin .... see yeah in hellThis is way to sick!!!! this is NOT OK!!! report game plz
All of u shoud know the differnts between right and wrong! this game is so wrong in all ways!! sorry... but this was NOT satyfing me!!!!!
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Your name says it all, drone. Report yourself! None of us men need to live by your "right and wrong". Only drones like you.This is way to sick!!!! this is NOT OK!!! report game plz
All of u shoud know the differnts between right and wrong! this game is so wrong in all ways!! sorry... but this was NOT satyfing me!!!!!
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