- Thread starter smite2001
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It would be easy to cross-contaminate the two, yeah. Don't let it discourage you, though. I think your characters are interesting and already showing some depth. Laying the cards out this quickly means you can focus on them and not the usual sneaking around tropes too. I like the kinky tone and hope that continues.
Oh, also. You can actually pose your models and make good expressions. That's way more important than render resolution.
- Dec 10, 2017
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I'm playing around with some ideas, but I can't really get behind male role switching personally. Even when a girl says she is a switch, she is usually just a brat who likes topping from the bottom and rile the dom up, not a true submissive. I can see the MC take a passive role in some encounters and let the girl do her thing, but he won't submit to let's say a spanking and get off on it. It would be out of character, even as an optional choice.
Regarding choices, there won't be game changers. I am a big fan of Akabur's Witch Trainer when it comes to gameplay, so expect something among those lines. You will get the chance to flavor the events to your liking, or avoid a specific fringe fetish, but there won't be distinct routes for a character that change them fundamentally. According to my current plan at least.
One example would be this: you facefuck a girl, that's a given. But you have the choice to go slow in between to let her get used to it, or to do it so hard that you make her throw up eventually.
- Jan 24, 2018
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Early days but it has potential to be amazing. Nina being extremely cute hardcore sub and her mother giving you go ahead to take advantage of that is hot as fuck. Aunts promise to let mc do whatever he wants to her if he cooperates is also a huge turn on. She says she is a little bit of sadistic domme but I hope most scenes with her and mc will be either neutral or maledom stuff.
On a less optimistic note I hope the whole corrupting male protagonist theme wont manifest in him cockblocking himself with doubt. And I hope game wont have too much scenes where main character spanks, punishes etc a girl but dont actually get off himself. Saw quite a lot of those in games with similar themes and its a bit frustrating.
Dont worry about similarity with Bad Memories. The only similar thing between your games is design of one character and its no big deal since your games are very different otherwise. Nina is too cute to change her anyway, please no.
On a less optimistic note I hope the whole corrupting male protagonist theme wont manifest in him cockblocking himself with doubt. And I hope game wont have too much scenes where main character spanks, punishes etc a girl but dont actually get off himself. Saw quite a lot of those in games with similar themes and its a bit frustrating.
Dont worry about similarity with Bad Memories. The only similar thing between your games is design of one character and its no big deal since your games are very different otherwise. Nina is too cute to change her anyway, please no.
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If that's true, please remove the female domination tag. Thanks. Or at least add the lesbian tag. It bugs me that not even using the tag filters can you be sure that the content you are looking for is actually the content of a game. Based on this comment of yours the game is decidedly maledom with some light female on female domination involved. 100% not for me.
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- Dec 10, 2017
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I get what you are saying, but I have two counter-points to that.
First of all, I am in the same dilemma, I love girl on girl domination, but it is not always lesbian. So I have to crawl through tons of 'garbage' F/m domination when searching for my kind of femdom porn. Probably worse than the other way around. People looking for lesbian games would have more of a reason to complain if I added that tag than you have right now.
Just as there are male doms and sadists who dominate other males just for the rush without there being any gay sex, or even gay feelings on either side (thats not my thing though, unfortunately).
The other point being that while the MC is not going around subbing himself anytime soon, he already texted his friend Josh, and I have a scene planned involving that guy, one that definitely counts as F/M femdom. Without going into spoiler territory, I'm sure everyone will like it, I don't even think I'll make it avoidable.
its a bit to short to form a real opinion but i like the MC corruption twist and the potential femdom content, the young girl should however be a a few years older if you ask me, especially if you plan to have more then spankings with her.. will be a bit to weird otherwise
- Dec 16, 2019
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Well, thanks for your response. I hope you'll find your target "audience". In my case I love "garbage F/m domination" the most. I may stick around for later developments. As for the tags, its bad indeed, maybe the best method would be to make two rows: 1. main tags 2. secondary tags. In this case the maledom (I hate it with a passion) should be in the main tags and femdom in the secondary tags or another solution is to make it clear in the game's description what is the game focused on, such as: the game consists mainly on the MC being in charge.
Edit: also another problem, the young girl is too young, I mean she really looks like a child!
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Maybe the simplest solution would be to add "submale" and "subfemale" tags. Then you could search for "femdom + submale", "femdom + subfemale", "maledom + subfemale" or "maledom + submale" to find the right stuff for you. And you could still omit those extra tags and search only for femdom or maledom like before.
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Don't worry about any of the points you brought up. And I have no intention of artificially delaying sexual content. Plus the MC is just as fucked up as the girls, he just hasn't realized it yet. Having observed him as a child/young teen and being close friends with his parents, Ayleen knows him better than he knows himself.
I wasn't shitting on your kink by the way. I used the word garbage to describe my own experience when looking for femdom porn. I get being repulsed by kinks. I hate lovey-dovey mom-son sex with the same passion you experience. When I see a teen boy sucking on his mom's tit vomit shoots into my mouth, and that kind of stuff is seemingly everywhere and unavoidable really.
Regarding the age, yeah, I was going for an 18 year old who has to show her ID everywhere well into her early twenties (to prove she is 18+). Kinda mid-teen-ish looking. But not childish looking, maybe I overdid it. It's probably more her "cuteness" though. Cute girls/women of any age tend to have childish features.
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I enjoyed it. Not to be a pain but will there be any watersports in it? With the game thing, just want to mention that there are a lot of similar games like universities/schools that have similar stories and then there's home/life type VNs literally all over the internet. I don't see you hurting anything with where this game may go. Just my 2 cents. To start it off though with the f2f spanking was great.
Here we go again with drawings and age....
THis fakenonexisting cartoon is 15 , no its 19 no it's 1234y old .... ffs
THis fakenonexisting cartoon is 15 , no its 19 no it's 1234y old .... ffs
- Mar 1, 2020
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They tend to be very strict on the matter. If you don't want/don't know how (I know you're new at this) to make a patch, I'd suggest suscribestar over patreon.
- Mar 1, 2020
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Dude no! Seeing that hairstyle was the thing that got my attention and made me click here.
Promising start! Sort of wish there were a few choices for the MC, but I understand it's the intro. I was a bit worried like some of the above posts that you were going to make the MC a reluctant pussy that has constant internal thoughts with conflicting moral values. The towel over the head at the end was not a good call, he should have been rubbing his hands together, anxious to make his fantasies a reality.
The building blocks for a male dom are already established with the brief history of the MC, and the fucked up parents of his should be an indication of little to no moral hang ups. Just one request from me would be to try letting the player choose if there is to be female/male domination, sort of a big turn off if that's planned for the MC. As long as the player can chose their kink, and how cruel/nice he is about doing it, I'll be happy to donate to your patreon.
The building blocks for a male dom are already established with the brief history of the MC, and the fucked up parents of his should be an indication of little to no moral hang ups. Just one request from me would be to try letting the player choose if there is to be female/male domination, sort of a big turn off if that's planned for the MC. As long as the player can chose their kink, and how cruel/nice he is about doing it, I'll be happy to donate to your patreon.