VN Ren'Py Abandoned Hosting the Quarterback [Ch. 1-9] [kirsESS]

[muttdoggy]

Warning..
I'll keep an eye on this thread. If there's any crying about NTR after being clearly very warned about it, I'll just delete the post. I don't have to tell you why. You already know why. It's called fetish shaming. How would you like it if I shamed many of you for being hopeless virgins?? Same thing applies.
Maybe when I'm in a better mood, I'll see what needs to be deleted...

 

[kang kun]

Okay I read through the whole thing. It was okay. I am not trying to be toxic but you need to work on your writing. I feel like your beautiful renders are wasted on such shabby writing, The renders were beautiful. They were more than decent, sometimes really brilliant. But man, you need to revise the passage. Most of the times it is too fast paced. Spend more time on describing your relationship with your family and the bully so that readers can immerse themselves in the novel and build emotional relationship to make the cuckolding more heartbreaking. It would be good to show how much the narrator loves and is attatched to his girlfriend and family and how devastated he is when he realizes that they are huge sluts. Also, it would be much more natural if you fix the perspective error. The narrator is speaking in first person terms and it is kind of wierd when he describes the scenes he was not there to see and has no knowledge of. Other than that , it was good. The settings were original and believable, motives were there (unlike many other craps that call themselves "adult kinetic novels") and scenses themselves were HOT.

 

[jackwhite6]

If I understand you correctly, this boils down to you telling me, I shouldn't be trying to limit access to specific kinks based on my own moral objection to it?
And I must say, I do not disagree with you on that.
All I wanted was to point out the fact that this kinetic novel does contain content that some people will find morally offensive.

That applies to like 95% of the games on here lol.

 

[Steve Carter]

Is it wrong to shame a developer for reinforcing negative stereotypes? BBC NTR is usually both misogynistic and racist, propagating extremely low opinions of women and black people... This game pretty much boils down to "women are sluts for big dicks and black guys are assholes, feel sorry for the poor white male protag"

How come attacking devs for negative stereotypes only comes up when it is a dev creating an NTR game? You never hear about people having an issue with misogamy on incest or harem game threads.

 

[Avaron1974]

Is it wrong to shame a developer for reinforcing negative stereotypes? BBC NTR is usually both misogynistic and racist, propagating extremely low opinions of women and black people... This game pretty much boils down to "women are sluts for big dicks and black guys are assholes, feel sorry for the poor white male protag"

Let's ask a woman's point of view on whether she finds this misogynistic.

Hi, I am a woman ... no .... also tumblr is that way ->

Stop bringing that shit to adult sites with porn, we don't want it, that can stay with the crazies and their safe space bollocks and the insane lesbians.

Only nice lesbians are here ... like me ... i'm fucking lovely. Not Thea knows.

Serious talk though ... no, just no.

 

[joe316]

So this will be the most unpopular game on here. Will piss off those that hate interracial and NTR.

 

[Mack Truck]

Hey everyone, been seeing some stuff..just a few things we wanted to clarify :


1)

This is one of the many ongoing stories that we work on from time to time. We do not spend all of our time creating this one particular story and none of our stories contain player choice, because that would mean dedicating our time to only a few projects which is not our goal at the moment. Not all of our stories feature black+white pairings...we do other interracial stuff as well.



2)

At no point in our stories do we use any kind of racial slurs, we don't even know how that came up. There are gals out there who have a thing for X ethnicity or race...just like there are guys out there who have a thing for X ethnicity or race. If you feel like interracial porn is inherently racist, then we cannot help you.



3)

We're a small group that is just getting started with rendering. (As indicated by our dev notes and Patreon goals) We welcome suggestions and feedback, but we do not need you to roast us. We are well aware of the shortcomings that exist in our work. Additionally, not everyone who's just getting into rendering has access to the best machines out there. We do all of our rendering on a single GTX 1060 6GB at the moment.



4)

We don't feel particularly inclined to post anything else here based on what we've seen, neither do we intend to check this thread in the near future. If you have any questions or want to find out more about our work, we urge you to check out our website where we post story intros and teasers every month for free. Our Patreon page also contains a lot of the information that you might be looking for.




We hope this addresses everything. Thanks for taking the time to check out our work.

So the Dev's get bent out of shape when they post their own work here looking for FREE advertising, then get bent out of shape when folks hate the LACK of story

 

[muttdoggy]

Just here to point out that some of the most popular games here have NTR, some have interracial. For example, SummerTime Saga has interracial. The Tyrant has both NTR and interracial. So does Acting Lessons. I could go on..
Edited. The point is that kink-shaming really doesn't bear fruit here. Everyone's got their own fetish. So. Stop it. If you have criticism, point out exactly what it is. If you're upset that it's kinetic, well too bad. It's pointed out in the tags that it's kinetic so there's really no point there. However, if the flow of the story felt off to you and you stated specifically that you felt jarred or the pacing felt rushed or wrong, those are VALID criticisms.
Saying you don't like kinetic, ntr or interracial (when it's tagged as so) does no favors to anyone. Like I said above, if it's about the translation, story, flow, renders, programming, those are all valid. But don't come in here and criticize over things that are clearly labelled. It makes you look small and petty.
Remember. Valid criticisms are welcome.
Edit 2- fixed spelling errors. Tired doggo.

 

[BaasB]

Just here to point out that some of the most popular games here have NTR, some have interracial. For example, SummerTime Saga has interracial. The Tyrant has both NTR and interracial. So does Acting Lessons. I could go on..
Edited. The point is that kink-shaming really doesn't bear fruit here. Everyone's got their own fetish. So. Stop it. If you have criticism, point out exactly what it is. If you're upset that it's kinetic, well too bad. It's pointed out in the tags that it's kinetic so there's really no point there. However, if the flow of the story felt off to you and you stated specifically that you felt jarred or the pacing felt rushed or wrong, those are VALID criticisms.
Saying you don't like kinetic, ntr or interraial (when it's tagged as so) does no favors to anyone. Like I said above, if it's about the translation, story, flow, renders, programming, those are all valid. But don't come in here and criticize over things that are clearly labelled. It makes you look small and petty.
Remember. Valid criticims are welcome.

Yeah that shit is avoidable, this game doesn't give you the chance to win.

 

[grapedog]

game sucks, don't play it.

 

[festerloves]

Yeah that shit is avoidable, this game doesn't give you the chance to win.

You don't win a porn game, you either get off or you don't.

 

[Avaron1974]

Eeew, I got facepalmed by someone that posts links to svscomics .... I feel dirty.

Posting links to that abomination is like taking a digital dump on F95's bandwidth. You are bad and you should feel bad.

 

[Vrijgeest]

I just cant stand macho stories. Why the horse prick? It is about as subtle as running into a brick wall.
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[Q Who]

Is it wrong to shame a developer for reinforcing negative stereotypes? BBC NTR is usually both misogynistic and racist, propagating extremely low opinions of women and black people... This game pretty much boils down to "women are sluts for big dicks and black guys are assholes, feel sorry for the poor white male protag"

Wait, WTF? Almost every game with a male protagonist can be considered misogynistic. Even mentioning misogyny is silly. Again, almost every game here makes women seem like cock-hungry whores. Huge cocks are fairly normal in these games. Why would a black guy having a huge cock makes it waycist? This is a first for me on F95. I have never read an SJW post here before but this is definitely some SJW BS for sure. With all the fucked up shit on this site, I find this post extremely out of place.

 

[commanderkai]

The artwork and renders are fantastic. Really well done.

The story, not so much. Not because of the NTR, because I don't care about that crap. Half of the games usually have the MC banging other guys' girlfriends and wives and whatever, so that's not really going to phase me. It's the writing. Since you're not playing as the "father", but rather some younger guy living with his sister and mom, I don't see why he'd care that they're banging some guy. The husband/father might take a lot more offense. The girlfriend, perhaps, but yeah, there's so little investment into why I should care, it really doesn't stand out story wise.

Not a fan of nipple piercings either, but hey, whatever floats your boat.

 

[JoleenStar]

The themes were hot, but the story is so rushed and everything happens so quickly... it doesn't really hold impact.


I hope your next game has more effort as your renders are nice.

 

[Zar]

Wait, WTF? Almost every game with a male protagonist can be considered misogynistic. Even mentioning misogyny is silly. Again, almost every game here makes women seem like cock-hungry whores. Huge cocks are fairly normal in these games. Why would a black guy having a huge cock makes it waycist? This is a first for me on F95. I have never read an SJW post here before but this is definitely some SJW BS for sure. With all the fucked up shit on this site, I find this post extremely out of place.

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Have you played this turdfest? I mean none of the characters have any personality what so ever, and none of them see much development. They just jump straight on the antagonist boner, because he's an asshole to the narrator. Seriously, a mother going out of her way to seduce a man, because she thinks it's hot he belittles her son, followed by the sister doing the same, then comes the only character development, that the mother and sister start belittling the narrator too. The worst part is that the narrator is depicted as being completely innocent, everyone else are just horrible people, for no fucking reason.

 

[magus448]

How is it cuckholding when it involves mom and sister? Does this imply that having dads and brothers-in-law means you are cucked?

There is also the MC's girlfriend.

 

[Q Who]

Have you played this turdfest? I mean none of the characters have any personality what so ever, and none of them see much development. They just jump straight on the antagonist boner, because he's an asshole to the narrator. Seriously, a mother going out of her way to seduce a man, because she thinks it's hot he belittles her son, followed by the sister doing the same, then comes the only character development, that the mother and sister start belittling the narrator too. The worst part is that the narrator is depicted as being completely innocent, everyone else are just horrible people, for no fucking reason.

So if something is badly written it suddenly becomes
A) waycist
B) Mysonginist
C) Portraying women in an unflattering manner

Asshole characters are a norm. Slutty women are a norm. BBC or BWC cocks are a norm. Are all the games portraying white guys as total asshats waycist as well? Or is waycism exclusively for black characters? When women are total slutags with white characters isn't it also misogyny or does the presence of a black character matter? Tons of games here have the MC fucking his mom, sisters and every other form of a relative. I have not played it but I don't need to in order to respond to your post. Your post is a litany of SJW talking points. Points that should never be brought up when discussing these porn games.

 

[EthanHunt95]

download....skip.....delete.....