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FUCK! I haven't even played the game but FUCK FUCK FUCK! This is basically an idea I had for an adult novel haha
Pure coincidence, btw. I'm not accusing anyone of anything. It's pure chance.

It doesn't appear to be exact (based on the description) but close. I'll try it to see if it's different enough for me to keep making mine.

It sucks as I'm past the scripting and have begun modeling. I'm glad I found this before I went further so I can find another idea.

Damn, I have a long script already done, too. Damnfuuuuuuuck! Hahaha


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Ok, ran through this and my idea is nothing like this. That's not an insult to the creator of this but it's definitely not this.
I have no issue with ntr (or anything) but my story isn't this at all. Haha.
I'll proceed.
 
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mickster101

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FUCK! I haven't even played the game but FUCK FUCK FUCK! This is basically an idea I had for an adult novel haha
Pure coincidence, btw. I'm not accusing anyone of anything. It's pure chance.

It doesn't appear to be exact (based on the description) but close. I'll try it to see if it's different enough for me to keep making mine.

It sucks as I'm past the scripting and have begun modeling. I'm glad I found this before I went further so I can find another idea.

Damn, I have a long script already done, too. Damnfuuuuuuuck! Hahaha
Well, if you are on this path, may I make some suggestions to avoid the pitfalls this game falls into?

1) Try not to have empty scenes that describe events not shown. This game has that quite often.
2) Tone down the bully/disrespect aspect of the antagonist and the women. This game made them so evil it stole any eroticism the author had created. There is no reason the women can't love the cuck but still be powerless in the face of the desired cock.
3) Use actual seduction, not just panties dropping for no reason. I get the whole "young stud entices MILF" angle, but at least make him work for it. Things are so much hotter when there is a descent into corruption, complete with the declarations of who has the best cock or who owns the pussy.
4) Scenes of undressing are also nice, especially from clothes a woman wasn't expecting to get naked from. Those games where the mom wears a black cocktail dress all the time are kinda lame.

Just some thoughts.
 

yihman1

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Hey everyone, been seeing some stuff..just a few things we wanted to clarify :


1)

This is one of the many ongoing stories that we work on from time to time. We do not spend all of our time creating this one particular story and none of our stories contain player choice, because that would mean dedicating our time to only a few projects which is not our goal at the moment. Not all of our stories feature black+white pairings...we do other interracial stuff as well.



2)

At no point in our stories do we use any kind of racial slurs, we don't even know how that came up. There are gals out there who have a thing for X ethnicity or race...just like there are guys out there who have a thing for X ethnicity or race. If you feel like interracial porn is inherently racist, then we cannot help you.



3)

We're a small group that is just getting started with rendering. (As indicated by our dev notes and Patreon goals) We welcome suggestions and feedback, but we do not need you to roast us. We are well aware of the shortcomings that exist in our work. Additionally, not everyone who's just getting into rendering has access to the best machines out there. We do all of our rendering on a single GTX 1060 6GB at the moment.



4)

We don't feel particularly inclined to post anything else here based on what we've seen, neither do we intend to check this thread in the near future. If you have any questions or want to find out more about our work, we urge you to check out our website where we post story intros and teasers every month for free. Our Patreon page also contains a lot of the information that you might be looking for.




We hope this addresses everything. Thanks for taking the time to check out our work.
You will get that in any forum.

DEV's last post is saying he/she is done with this forum and wont be coming back, grats you people on shitting on someones work to the point where they dont even want to share it anymore.

If you dont like NTR then piss off, we dont need to see you post about it on a clearly NTR based game/thread.
Developers have got to be tougher than that. I know so from personal experience. Not all of the comments are hateful. There is a nice blend here. To be fair to your point a lot of people did shit on it. A lot of people shit on a lot of games. Some people shit on my game too. Guess what? I'm still here. As a developer, you must expect a certain number of people to shit on your game no matter how good you think it is.

On that note comments such as "I don't like [insert fetish here]" Are garbage comments. No need to kink shame.

On the other hand, many of the folks who were critical of this game were doing that creator a favor by giving valuable feedback. They are free to ignore any advice.

I basically told them in summary:

NTR games and Kinetic novels rarely mix well because to get the full feel of it NTR it being avoidable is important. (Even if without NTR the game is relatively empty.)

I also explained he needs better character development and storyarcs. Because there is practically no character development or stor arcs. It's 95% sex scenes 5% exposition, character development, and story. Which is actually REALLY BAD for an NTR game. How is a girl your character hasn't fucked yet possibly cheating on you? How does a "Mom" character that only mentions you once and is like "Your that dude that bullys my son? Lets fuck!" anything like a mom?

Much of the criticism of this game is VALID!
 

redprimate

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Just here to point out that some of the most popular games here have NTR, some have interracial. For example, SummerTime Saga has interracial. The Tyrant has both NTR and interracial. So does Acting Lessons. I could go on..
Acting Lessons has Interracial or NTR?are you sure about that?just asking because i have done like 8 playthroughs and didn't notice it once.
 

yihman1

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Acting Lessons has Interracial or NTR?are you sure about that?just asking because i have done like 8 playthroughs and didn't notice it once.
Well... If you count a man cheating on a woman as NTR then TECHNICALLY it has NTR... However, that would be most games.
 

magus448

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Acting Lessons has Interracial or NTR?are you sure about that?just asking because i have done like 8 playthroughs and didn't notice it once.
AL has NTR in the prologue. Finding gf in bed with another guy. Liam possibly going out with the blue haired love interest or nurse would be interracial.
 

Alfius

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I dont really care what all of you Think of NTR as a genre, its totally uninteresting and says nothing about the quality of the game. Its freaking tedious reading pages up and down with the same drivel you seen thousand times Before and it changes nothing.
This is a 100% my point, just saying you don't like NTR for an NTR game is just pointless.
It tells you nothing about the game.

If you say "I like NTR, but I hate it that my MC is so dumb. or the Sis is too naïve or" ...etc etc.
That is your opinion and adds value to the discussion, but stating you don't like NTR in an NTR thread, is pointless.
 
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urdy

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is there another version of these where we're the ones fucking another guys' family?
 

Alfius

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Why doesn't f95 create a separate page for ntr games only. Or at least blackout the game I ignore completely not fate out in the background
Why do you keep on posting in a game that is clearly not targeted towards you?

It would be like me posting in a game with explicit male gay content ... I don't because, I know I'm not going to like it. It's not my thing. So I don't even open up the game thread about it.

Is it wrong to shame a developer for reinforcing negative stereotypes? BBC NTR is usually both misogynistic and racist, propagating extremely low opinions of women and black people... This game pretty much boils down to "women are sluts for big dicks and black guys are assholes, feel sorry for the poor white male protag"

**edit** okay, that came off as quite self righteous, basically what I wanted to say was that the total lack of any character development in this novel leaves me feeling like the developer has a poor view of both women and black people.
I like your self reflection.

Can you see how your first paragraph says nothing about the game , but everything about your personal view on BBC NTR.
This does not add value to the thread.

Your second edit, rightly points out certain aspects of the game that you dislike.
This adds value to the discussion

..simples..
 
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crewfalcons

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You will get that in any forum.



Developers have got to be tougher than that. I know so from personal experience. Not all of the comments are hateful. There is a nice blend here. To be fair to your point a lot of people did shit on it. A lot of people shit on a lot of games. Some people shit on my game too. Guess what? I'm still here. As a developer, you must expect a certain number of people to shit on your game no matter how good you think it is.

On that note comments such as "I don't like [insert fetish here]" Are garbage comments. No need to kink shame.

On the other hand, many of the folks who were critical of this game were doing that creator a favor by giving valuable feedback. They are free to ignore any advice.

I basically told them in summary:

NTR games and Kinetic novels rarely mix well because to get the full feel of it NTR it being avoidable is important. (Even if without NTR the game is relatively empty.)

I also explained he needs better character development and storyarcs. Because there is practically no character development or stor arcs. It's 95% sex scenes 5% exposition, character development, and story. Which is actually REALLY BAD for an NTR game. How is a girl your character hasn't fucked yet possibly cheating on you? How does a "Mom" character that only mentions you once and is like "Your that dude that bullys my son? Lets fuck!" anything like a mom?

Much of the criticism of this game is VALID!
Agree with your points about Dev's being tougher.

If your game is vanilla, cutesy, and wholesome as fuck... then over the top criticisms and rhetoric towards the subject matter (nothing about the gameplay - but just about the genres and preferences involved) it probably would seem a little overboard and out of place. Mainly because... what'd you expect? It's a happy-go-lucky fuckfest where everyone's happy and shits rainbows so of course it's not going to be dark, morbid, or a little twisted.

If your game deals with controversial or darker subject matter... As a dev (or anyone for that matter - supporters and detractors)... don't act surprised or affronted when you're met with backlash or protests.

Doesn't mean it's right (personally I don't like kink shaming) but don't clutch your pearls and act naive that people won't like your subject matter or genres you've included if they're a bit on the periphery of preferences. (Frankly I find it annoying when people complain about things that they don't like especially when there are thousands of other games out there you could find to fulfill your "needs" but meh, people will be people at the end of the day).
 

6DarkRaven9

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Wonder how much popcorn the admin and mods had gone through after checking this thread.

Game was OK but the lack of animation hinders the potential.
 
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HikariNova

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way to fast and feels rushed so i'm guessing from reading some of the comments on the first page is that this is more like a demo because as it is it's basically a loving mom, sister and GF see's the BULLIES BBC they just forgets about the protag and doesn't care if their humiliating him hurts him in some form or another mentally or emotionally which is WAY outside of what a loving mother, sister or girlfriend would do
 
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