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Edit--Figured it all out. I now have a good translation to work with and will finish up the new bandit and medical lab scenes, thanks to Zergling's base.
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Of course, we're all here as fans of Inui. I should have his "official" English done soon. Your previous work was a great influence, thanks again for that!Nice to see other people picking up where I left off. Had fun translating this for a while but got busy with other hobbies and a job to keep this up. Hope you guys don't mind me pitching in with my own take on the translation if I feel like taking my own spin on it again.
Defiled? Only thing I can think of."Polluted"
A lot of H-games use this status screen term for how much sperm is in her...is there a better way to word that?
Descriptive words might help (say, overflowing, creampied, filled to bursting, inflated), not that I can recall how much space you have. I read defiled as more what happens to her in the 'mating' and taint is what is left. But I get you, taint is used more for 'demonic' or 'chaos corruption' than the risk of giving birth to a monstrosity.I may use corrupted. Defiled is good too. Thesaurus suggests desecrated or tainted...not quite prefect, those.
Mine is heavily edited so that it's the least MTL-y (using MTL as a base and then almost completely re-writing it in proper English), so (at the risk of sounding a little biased) if you're looking for minimal MTL-like language use that. Though it is outdated (the last 2 updates haven't been translated).So at the risk of perhaps stepping on some toes, which of the currently available translation patches are the "good" ones, ie, least MTL-y? Is the official one properly translated, or an MTL, or what exactly? And then after all that, where is the best of the lot located?
What I mean is, I have installed the "official" translation, but I notice it is extremely easy to manually translate and replace the untranslated sections. So if no one has any particular objections, I was just going to go ahead and start doing so.
Haha, I'm just about done doing the final portions tonight. You can if you want, but it'll be a bit redundant by tomorrow afternoon after I coordinate with Inui.So at the risk of perhaps stepping on some toes, which of the currently available translation patches are the "good" ones, ie, least MTL-y? Is the official one properly translated, or an MTL, or what exactly? And then after all that, where is the best of the lot located?
What I mean is, I have installed the "official" translation, but I notice it is extremely easy to manually translate and replace the untranslated sections. So if no one has any particular objections, I was just going to go ahead and start doing so.
EDIT - UPDATED TRANSLATION 1-18-2021 IN NEWEST POST BELOW. OLD TRANSLATION DELETED.Aye, sure I'm happy to give it a run through tonight if it'll help.