VN Ren'Py Abandoned How I Got my Friend Pregnant [v0.2] [Zombie Studios]

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Mikey Mike

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I may have a contest and see who guesses the best to this twister.
If you're looking for creativity then I propose that the MC cream-pied his GF who immediately scissored the shit out of his bisexual sister! Since the GF's on the pill and his ovulating sister isn't, perverted minds gonna pervert! ;)
 
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Hi everybody. I want to introduce myself as the new writer of the game. The new reworked intro is now ready for release. We worked tirelessly over the last week to get this to you guys. In the new 0.01 version of the game, we have completely rewrote the game intro plus added some new scenes. The point system is also introduced in the game. There isn't much to do with it just yet. We will explain more in the coming updates. If there is anything you want to see in the game, join the patreon and you can have a say. Also please leave any positive constructive criticism as we are working to get better everyday. We hope you guys like the new intro and please support the project on patreon. Enjoy guys!
Very interesting story! The renders don't annoy me, I only hope all sex scenes are optional, the game doesn't force the MC to have sex with anyone, so the player can choose the girl he prefers.
 
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Not sure if this was meant to be very light hearted or was simply written by a 12 year old. When the 'Aunt' repeated the same lame conversation that the 3 others did, "huehue Big penis, the blond must be a whore, you are Kelly's true love" I had had enough.
 
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Not sure if this was meant to be very light hearted or was simply written by a 12 year old. When the 'Aunt' repeated the same lame conversation that the 3 others did, "huehue Big penis, the blond must be a whore, you are Kelly's true love" I had had enough.
To each his own I guess, I love his writing and it's in line with the movie and characters it's modeled after, "The House of Yes" where the sister is accustomed to getting her way and has an obsession with her twin brother. I love how the fiance took off running when the sister started firing her pistol at the end.
 
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Jhustla

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Or a sister only route! Or a cousin only route! It should be up to the player!
Like Zombie said, we are thinking about how many routes to do. I will say this though. If we do a route where you don't want the sister, it will have consequences on the path or paths you do choose as the sister is obsessed with you. If you look at the relationship stats, you see her stats are at max already for a reason. That is because the way we are writing this, the sister is automatically yours. She just has hangups that need to be addressed. The way they are addressed is through the routes.

Remember all three women have said they will help you out with the sister and her problems. This is where routes come in to play. You pick who's help you want and possibly romance them along the way. Of course harem is one route already planned but we are listening and thinking it through. Hopefully, this helps clear some things up about this topic.
 

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Like Zombie said, we are thinking about how many routes to do. I will say this though. If we do a route where you don't want the sister, it will have consequences on the path or paths you do choose as the sister is obsessed with you. If you look at the relationship stats, you see her stats are at max already for a reason. That is because the way we are writing this, the sister is automatically yours. She just has hangups that need to be addressed. The way they are addressed is through the routes.

Remember all three women have said they will help you out with the sister and her problems. This is where routes come in to play. You pick who's help you want and possibly romance them along the way. Of course harem is one route already planned but we are listening and thinking it through. Hopefully, this helps clear some things up about this topic.
I did lower the sisters stats, I had them set at 100 to line up the stats bur maybe they should be maxed.
I think I lowered them anyway. lol
 
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To each his own I guess, I love his writing and it's in line with the movie and characters it's modeled after, "The House of Yes" where the sister is accustomed to getting her way and has an obsession with her twin brother. I love how the fiance took off running when the sister started firing her pistol at the end.
Havn't seen the movie, just now read the wiki for the synopsis, watched the trailer... Black comedy is a very hard thing to pull off. It definitely did not translate into the game. The sister is not portrayed as that over the top crazy from the start. The other cast seem to share her fantasy / ignore the problem instead of having their own way to work around the crazy. They all feel like the same 1-dimensional character. That includes the MC.

Maybe that gets expanded upon later, but by the time the introductions were done, I was out.

PS: It does not even have the redeeming quality of the brother to NTR the fiance :p
 
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Havn't seen the movie, just now read the wiki for the synopsis, watched the trailer... Black comedy is a very hard thing to pull off. It definitely did not translate into the game. The sister is not portrayed as that over the top crazy from the start. The other cast seem to share her fantasy / ignore the problem instead of having their own way to work around the crazy. They all feel like the same 1-dimensional character. That includes the MC.

Maybe that gets expanded upon later, but by the time the introductions were done, I was out.

PS: It does not even have the redeeming quality of the brother to NTR the fiance :p
It is okay if this is not your cup of tea. As was said earlier to each his own. Since it seems you won't watch the movie the reason the sister is not over the top crazy is because this is a porn game. I am not trying to have her kill the mc like the sister did in the movie. We also did not want full on black comedy either for the same reason of this being a porn game. Also in the movie the mother ignores the sister's problem and the brother looks the other way. But again if you don't like it then you have the choice of not playing it. I am sorry you don't like it but there are other people who do.
Plus, who said that the mc ntr the fiancee? The fiancee will have her own fun. Just not with the mc.
 

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Like Zombie said, we are thinking about how many routes to do. I will say this though. If we do a route where you don't want the sister, it will have consequences on the path or paths you do choose as the sister is obsessed with you. If you look at the relationship stats, you see her stats are at max already for a reason. That is because the way we are writing this, the sister is automatically yours. She just has hangups that need to be addressed. The way they are addressed is through the routes.

Remember all three women have said they will help you out with the sister and her problems. This is where routes come in to play. You pick who's help you want and possibly romance them along the way. Of course harem is one route already planned but we are listening and thinking it through. Hopefully, this helps clear some things up about this topic.
It makes sense, it is a game premise the sister is obsessed with the MC, I like that! When we have to deal with a situation presented by the game from the beginning. What I dislike is when the MC is forced to have sex with a character. It is great to have the option to have sex with all female characters, but none is mandatory. For instance: I decided to stay with the sister, but in order to progress in this route my MC will have to bang his aunt (!)
 
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It is okay if this is not your cup of tea. As was said earlier to each his own. Since it seems you won't watch the movie the reason the sister is not over the top crazy is because this is a porn game. I am not trying to have her kill the mc like the sister did in the movie. We also did not want full on black comedy either for the same reason of this being a porn game. Also in the movie the mother ignores the sister's problem and the brother looks the other way. But again if you don't like it then you have the choice of not playing it. I am sorry you don't like it but there are other people who do.
Plus, who said that the mc ntr the fiancee? The fiancee will have her own fun. Just not with the mc.
It could be my cup of tea if written well though.

I've watched the movie now. I must have gotten a very different read on the plot and characters.

The movie plot hinges on the sister being over the top crazy. The mother doesn't "ignore" it. She accepts that it can't be fixed, so she is vigilant and over-protective. She tries to drive the fiance away for her own protection, and tries to convince Marty to stay once she realises Jackie is (going to be) majorly hurt again and will do something extreme.

In the game she is exactly the same as the crazy Sister. She jumps straight away to the irrational hatred, mistrust and name calling. As does the Cousin and the Aunt. There is no attempt at manipulation for the sake of 'preserving true-love', to drive away the fiance for her protection. Probably because it's never established how destructive the obsession actually is. There is some weird exposition where the Mother has big cock lust and tries to justify to herself that it's for her daughter's benefit. But it show's her motivation is not genuine and reduces her character back to a horny one dimension.

The brother in the movie was not fleshed out. Seemed like a simpleton to exposition to and to serve as a tension builder. I brought him up because he actually seduced the fiance. As a porn game you could actually do something very similar very naturally, have his potential NTR be a tension builder.

You have the protagonist from the movie trying to move on and find a new normal and wants his families acceptance. Which seems to be the motivation for bringing the fiance to the family in the game too. But then he straight turns in a horn-dog like every other porn game MC, lusting after everyone including the family. If he was kept 'normal' you could have the women trying to seduce him, and the game being a balance between being faithful, and not getting everyone killed.

Of course, if you just wanted to make a shallow smut-fest, have at it.
 

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It could be my cup of tea if written well though.

I've watched the movie now. I must have gotten a very different read on the plot and characters.

The movie plot hinges on the sister being over the top crazy. The mother doesn't "ignore" it. She accepts that it can't be fixed, so she is vigilant and over-protective. She tries to drive the fiance away for her own protection, and tries to convince Marty to stay once she realises Jackie is (going to be) majorly hurt again and will do something extreme.

In the game she is exactly the same as the crazy Sister. She jumps straight away to the irrational hatred, mistrust and name calling. As does the Cousin and the Aunt. There is no attempt at manipulation for the sake of 'preserving true-love', to drive away the fiance for her protection. Probably because it's never established how destructive the obsession actually is. There is some weird exposition where the Mother has big cock lust and tries to justify to herself that it's for her daughter's benefit. But it show's her motivation is not genuine and reduces her character back to a horny one dimension.

The brother in the movie was not fleshed out. Seemed like a simpleton to exposition to and to serve as a tension builder. I brought him up because he actually seduced the fiance. As a porn game you could actually do something very similar very naturally, have his potential NTR be a tension builder.

You have the protagonist from the movie trying to move on and find a new normal and wants his families acceptance. Which seems to be the motivation for bringing the fiance to the family in the game too. But then he straight turns in a horn-dog like every other porn game MC, lusting after everyone including the family. If he was kept 'normal' you could have the women trying to seduce him, and the game being a balance between being faithful, and not getting everyone killed.

Of course, if you just wanted to make a shallow smut-fest, have at it.

The story of the game is the way it is for a reason. The game is suppose to be nonsensical. The whole family is supposed to be over the top crazy when it comes to him. We never said the game was directly based off the movie. The reason the mc is a horn dog and the reason the rest of the family acts like they do will be explained later as the game goes. I guess you were expecting a full exposition of backstory for the characters at the beginning. Also there will be ntr with the fiancee but I guess you didn't read my last post fully.

So I will say this. I understand you do not like my writing but I am hoping you are also aware that this is supposed to be an intro. The beginning. The start. If it hurts you to play the game that much then I will say again just don't play it. If you feel that you can do better, then by all means, please go make your own game. I hate saying these things but now it feels as if you are attacking our game just to be a troll. So I will now kindly ask this of you.

If you want to give our game a chance then, please by all means, play the game. If you have positive constructive criticism, then please add it. But do keep in mind that the game does not take itself seriously. If after reading all of this, you still feel the way you do, then I kindly ask you no longer come to our "shallow smut fest" game page. Because as we have said to you before, to each his own. Thank you.
 
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