- Nov 10, 2017
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In all porn games the black guy is always the master race(except My new life and Life of your dreams) because he has 12inch between his legs.
Imagine being triggered by a damn porn game OMEGALULanother incel doing the big black man wins all thing?
Time to brutally honest. The writing is awful. Grammar aside , the dialogue interactions between characters has no substance and have very short sentencing. It's almost as if two people interacting face to face were actually just texting their conversation to each other and not actually talking.
The renders are fairly well done but appear a bit too grainy.
The MC seems to be as smart as a bag of rocks the way she acts (you're just going to scrap cum off someones chest and taste it? Technically then do it again). Something is off with the MC, and I cannot put the blame on being naive just poor writing. However there is potential here. Just needs some areas of improvement.
If this was my game and as a dev myself comment like yours at first look would have broken my confidence...
BUT the "However there is potential here" is probably the biggest compliment for any dev starting off.
What you've said here all helps or at least that is how i would take it. Of course i've yet to play the game so my opinions are limited.
Let's hope the dev takes it in good faith.
I mean no disrespect to the devs when writing a mini review. I like to be 100% honest when writing one. I know my review my come off a little strong at first but it's all in good intentions. Sometimes things need to be brought out into the open in order to give a creator an extra push in the right direction. I am looking forward to see where this game goes!If this was my game and as a dev myself comment like yours at first look would have broken my confidence...
BUT the "However there is potential here" is probably the biggest compliment for any dev starting off.
What you've said here all helps or at least that is how i would take it. Of course i've yet to play the game so my opinions are limited.
Let's hope the dev takes it in good faith.
I mean no disrespect to the devs when writing a mini review. I like to be 100% honest when writing one. I know my review my come off a little strong at first but it's all in good intentions. Sometimes things need to be brought out into the open in order to give a creator an extra push in the right direction. I am looking forward to see where this game goes!
Comments like his, and the review by @yihman1 make it quite clear this game isn't for me...another incel doing the big black man wins all thing?