VN Ren'Py I am developing a game with hijab women. Give me some ideas, please!

[DonOps]

I hate freepass because it's NOT a female's game. A female's game in which no man wants, does not court, does not want a woman, does not fight for a woman? But EVERY woman in the game is a lesbian. I'm sorry, but this doesn't happen in real life. It's more like a prepuberty boy's fantasy.

I think you might be delusional. This is a game and not real life, nor it's based on real life events. Liking something or not is subjective. Each have their own taste, and that's a good thing.

 

[Golomolo]

Also for the female lead, I think Grace is not really a fitting name as its not really a Asian muslim name. You can use a common name like Fatima, Sarah, Amber, (it is common in both cultures) Maryam or any other of your choice.

 

[Losersriot]

I think you might be delusional. This is a game and not real life, nor it's based on real life events. Liking something or not is subjective. Each have their own taste, and that's a good thing.

Its REALISTIC SETTING, DUDE !
I saw tegs and i wont see 'fantasy'.
World, where all girls are lesbian is... some prepuberty crap.

 

[Vreek]

Hi After Choices, I did not have the pleasure of having played one of your games (yet). But just looking over the changelogs I noticed the insanely high amount of renders you put out - big respect to that! As a rule of thumb I considered about 300 renders per release every 2-3 months to be good. Are you Skynet? Is your father Jensen Huang of Nvidia? Are your kids called 'Ampere' and '3090'?

Jokes aside here is what I picked up on this forum if you want to make bank: Consider joining team 'loli' or 'straight shota'! For sure a controversial topic. But it might go well with Islamic stereotypes like virgins and horny milfs and such. If you manage the balance between young looking characters (which are of course 100% over the age of consent) and not getting your game banned by F95 mods (which are doing a superb job btw. ) you will attract numbers before long. Don't let my unwanted advice offend you - despite everything I am a big fan of artistic freedom. You tell the story you have in mind with the characters you create. Peace.

 

[Deleted member 247635]

Okay, but why?

Make the MC a Fem so that she can be bred like a bitch.
"impregnation, pregnancy, lactation, and breastfeeding?"

 

[Banality]

Hi After Choices, I did not have the pleasure of having played one of your games (yet). But just looking over the changelogs I noticed the insanely high amount of renders you put out - big respect to that! As a rule of thumb I considered about 300 renders per release every 2-3 months to be good. Are you Skynet? Is your father Jensen Huang of Nvidia? Are your kids called 'Ampere' and '3090'?

Jokes aside here is what I picked up on this forum if you want to make bank: Consider joining team 'loli' or 'straight shota'! For sure a controversial topic. But it might go well with Islamic stereotypes like virgins and horny milfs and such. If you manage the balance between young looking characters (which are of course 100% over the age of consent) and not getting your game banned by F95 mods (which are doing a superb job btw. ) you will attract numbers before long. Don't let my unwanted advice offend you - despite everything I am a big fan of artistic freedom. You tell the story you have in mind with the characters you create. Peace.

please change your Avatar to a Dirty Van with "Free Candy" written on it.... don't pull the poor dog into that ^^

 

[fitgirlbestgirl]

I don't really get it. Like, the extreme focus on the hijab stuff. I wouldn't mind playing a game with Arab/Muslim women, but I don't have a headscarf fetish and the way they're wearing it even while naked is kind of fucking weird.

My biggest concern with this would be your English, no offense, I hope you get some help with proofreading/editing.
Also, Grace looks way cuter without the make-up.

 

[sanaalam]

As a woman who was born and raised in a Muslim household, I can see the appeal of such a game, especially from a Female perspective. I appreciate your efforts, however there are a few considerations I personally would recommend.

- Halala is not that common in the Muslim world, as most people reject it, but I have known few people from Iran who have done this as It is more popular among Shia sect.
- One bad thing about Nikkah Halala as the wife cannot chose the man to do Halala with before remarrying her husband. Its the husband (or girl's father) that chooses the man for his ex-wife (typical patriarchy in a nutshell).
- The man she does Nikkah Halala with, can change his mind and ignore the deal made, and can choose not to divorce the woman, keeping her as his wife (or among his multiple wives). Of course, wife can demand divorce, but if the man is influential, he can delay making it legal.
- The man can also set conditions for the woman to get out of Halala deal, like number of days or times to have sex with, or for her to perform certain acts etc. Like I said, its very patriarchal, so basically the man has all the power.
- Also, sometimes the wife changes her mind (especially if previous husband was not good in sex), and can lie to say that no Halala (sexual relations) took place with the man, essentially blocking her husband to remarry her. Of course the new man has to keep up the lie.

So take it as you will, and may be you have a better story arc. I like the models, the graphics look good. If possibility to add some Middle eastern Jewelry like bracelets/necklaces to give it more unique feeling. I like your other games, and I wish you all the best in making this one.

 

[Zohan4201]

As a woman who was born and raised in a Muslim household, I can see the appeal of such a game, especially from a Female perspective. I appreciate your efforts, however there are a few considerations I personally would recommend.

- Halala is not that common in the Muslim world, as most people reject it, but I have known few people from Iran who have done this as It is more popular among Shia sect.
- One bad thing about Nikkah Halala as the wife cannot chose the man to do Halala with before remarrying her husband. Its the husband (or girl's father) that chooses the man for his ex-wife (typical patriarchy in a nutshell).
- The man she does Nikkah Halala with, can change his mind and ignore the deal made, and can choose not to divorce the woman, keeping her as his wife (or among his multiple wives). Of course, wife can demand divorce, but if the man is influential, he can delay making it legal.
- The man can also set conditions for the woman to get out of Halala deal, like number of days or times to have sex with, or for her to perform certain acts etc. Like I said, its very patriarchal, so basically the man has all the power.
- Also, sometimes the wife changes her mind (especially if previous husband was not good in sex), and can lie to say that no Halala (sexual relations) took place with the man, essentially blocking her husband to remarry her. Of course the new man has to keep up the lie.

So take it as you will, and may be you have a better story arc. I like the models, the graphics look good. If possibility to add some Middle eastern Jewelry like bracelets/necklaces to give it more unique feeling. I like your other games, and I wish you all the best in making this one.

1. The rule of thumb is that the further you are away from the Mecca the more rare Halala nikkah as I've only heard of them happening in middle eastern countries.

2. Didn't know that as no one bothers to go through it anyway over here.

3. That could be useful as in the FMC falls prey to some evil chad/tyrone bent on corrupting her while she tries to get out of it.

4. Same as number 3. Could be useful for both the corruption and romance path whether you are trying to get into it or out of it.

5. That'll definitely make for some funny situations.

 

[scorch13]

I think the main girl grace should have tits that are bigger and a little saggy to reflect that she's had a kid. Also more pregnancy content would be great, especially birthing stuff. Other than that good luck with your game

 

[azel1]

Sure, but with proper cheating/NTR instead of the free pass/hall pass stuff, if possible.

 

[krak0n]

As a woman who was born and raised in a Muslim household, I can see the appeal of such a game, especially from a Female perspective. I appreciate your efforts, however there are a few considerations I personally would recommend.

- Halala is not that common in the Muslim world, as most people reject it, but I have known few people from Iran who have done this as It is more popular among Shia sect.
- One bad thing about Nikkah Halala as the wife cannot chose the man to do Halala with before remarrying her husband. Its the husband (or girl's father) that chooses the man for his ex-wife (typical patriarchy in a nutshell).
- The man she does Nikkah Halala with, can change his mind and ignore the deal made, and can choose not to divorce the woman, keeping her as his wife (or among his multiple wives). Of course, wife can demand divorce, but if the man is influential, he can delay making it legal.
- The man can also set conditions for the woman to get out of Halala deal, like number of days or times to have sex with, or for her to perform certain acts etc. Like I said, its very patriarchal, so basically the man has all the power.
- Also, sometimes the wife changes her mind (especially if previous husband was not good in sex), and can lie to say that no Halala (sexual relations) took place with the man, essentially blocking her husband to remarry her. Of course the new man has to keep up the lie.

So take it as you will, and may be you have a better story arc. I like the models, the graphics look good. If possibility to add some Middle eastern Jewelry like bracelets/necklaces to give it more unique feeling. I like your other games, and I wish you all the best in making this one.

I'm a Muslim male. And I've never heard about Halala before . lol

 

[Rafster]

And should the game be a female protagonist(I preferred.) or a male protagonist?

If you feel more comfortable with female protagonist, go for it. Your perspective as a girl surely make your games special. I know how you feel, because I wouldn't be able to do anything other than a male MC on my game even if I wanted. Go with your gut, my dear.

I must be honest, the arab/muslim setting repels me, a lot, but if that's what you want to do, go for it and don't look back.

 

[SeeHooLim]

Maybe adding a caning segment in the game? If i'm not wrong, it is a punishment given to muslim women and men that commit crimes relating to Islam in some south east asian countries, it's probably a substitue for the heavy punishment of stoning. Considering that Grace is an Asian muslim i think it's suitable to put this in the game as a scene or maybe an alternate route for BDSM fetishists

 

[claus001]

Okay, but why?

The problem with Female MC in porn game is the difficulty of pulling it off with good taste. With Male MC every interaction can potentially lead to sex, when you reverse this as female you either will be harassed constantly or you are prostituting yourself in every encounter (not so much problem in lesbian games). You need either heavily to invest in plot and worldbuilding in order to make it work, I have not yet encountered any good Female MC games that does not degenerate into prostitution.

 

[reptar01]

vWomen tend to judge themselves more harshly than men do, your english is fine, not engrish at all, especially compared to most games here. Do what you want, have you read the dialog and storylines that these guys write for women characters? There's no way you can possibly do worse, a dog having a stroke can write female characters better than them so you writing a male protag is nothing. I personally don't play female protag games. A story like this probably has tons of trainer/corruption possibilities and I'm definitely into corruption and trainer themes but not unavoidable ntr, but I do like cheating games so theres a fine line there.

 

[Aysha Tamanna]

They can get merried again but she will cheating with him regularly. Please dont make it cuckold..

 

[remy1205]

Young Again [Ch.12 Public] [Zargon_games]
https://f95zone.to/threads/young-again-ch-12-public-zargon_games.56677/

just my opinion really :
-first off my generic opinion of 3DCG game is EVERY single "female" ALWAYS slightly the same as if all of them related or something, is like everyone of them Miss Universe picture perfect model looks (almost like a robot)
-so its better if you make each them different like some are flat, some are busty, some are chubby or something like that.
-another thing bugging me is every single clothing is like skin tight even a thick winter sweater, its like it can show EVERY FKING CURVE, HOW a LOOSE sweater can SHOW mc BREAST PERFECTLY even the nipple. Like i get its sexy but its like it just a bodypaint
-the game above is the best one i ever play, why? because its diverse. There's no mom daughters who like a twin, there's no big tit bimbo, there's no generic robot face, there's chubby girl, the mom looks ACTUAL old milf unlike other game that make MILF having cosmetic surgery to look young again
-if you design the ex-husband like that, obviously 95% will choose MC to cheat. You might as well make this game linear

"Will they get married again, happily for the sake of their son and reputation at least? Or will she become a more open, and free slut?"
-if you REALLY want give us that multi choice playthrough, make the ex-husband at least decently good looking. Not the husbando perfect model looks but above average Joe looks
-combine it with interesting "good path" storyline it will make the game replay able
-most VN Renpy 3dcg game are technically linear, other "path" or "choices" aren't interesting, short and underdeveloped as most game Dev do

other than that the setting and the character look great. My advice is take time and don't rush because "rush game forever bad - Hideo Kojima". Best of luck and cant wait to play the game

 

[remy1205]

Thanks. Um... she's not 22 years old though. People from Myanmar/Thailand look so youthful. Especially, Myanmarese, they do not do plastic surgery.

agree, Asian female just build different especially the ladyboys

 

[SunDogSun]

IMO try to follow your own taste instead of suiting everybody. The story could be only good
if the writer enjoys it. I don't like the new trend where the developer making polls and asking
everybody "what do you want to see...?!"
You will never be able to understand fully a fetish if it's not your own. So listening to your gut
and good luck