My honest reaction
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I'll nitpick some things though as I am an ass man:
I'd personally make her badonkadonks a tad wider in the left image
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ok, maybe not just "a tad"
and this skirt thing is really annoying, I've looked for some
solid references and 99% of artists are using so many tricks and bullshit angle just to hide/not draw this particular skirt rolling part. Excuse me my poor excuse of mouse "drawing" but I have something like this in mind
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Anyway those are just my nitpicks so whatever, your art is already good enough to put it in inusuku's game