VN Ren'Py Abandoned In It Together [v0.1] [Reaper Entertainment]

[E_nigma]

Well, it was short and sweet. Enough for an intro, I've seen worse bodies in skyrim and fallout but can see why it's a big point of contention, better to catch it early. Locations are nice looking, I figure renders are kinda placeholder atm but they aren't too bad, esp for a 0.1.

Looking forward to seeing this developed.

 

[drfronkonstinmd]

My overall thoughts:

- I'm perfectly ok with the exaggerated proportions. I'm a big fan of the bimbo look and, while more than half of the games in this forum feature something between very big and giant in terms of boobs, very few go for the "obviously fake" look. That being said, I just read you modified the female models for the next version after commenting that you too thought it was a bit too much, so I guess the main female character will get a (hopefully slight) reduction. Too bad, but that's always up to the dev team and their vision.

- I know you state it on the very first screen and there're a couple of comments confirming that this is just a quick test to see what people thinks of the concept, but still the whole thing feels a bit rushed. Not just the renders, but the pacing and the dialogue as well. Like a lot of things happen in just a few screens and the dialogue is a bit clunky. It's important to take your time during the intro, so the player can familiarise with the characters and the initial plot.

- Other than that, I'm definitely interested. Let's see what changes in the next update.

By the way, I got an exception when the female character sits on the sofa and MC is about to ask her about her boobs. I'm attaching it.

 

[Lokitox8]

Don't change her model. Is good to see a different type of model and not the same use of models you tend to see in most of the games in this forum. Wish you the best of luck. I'll keep an eye on this game as it goes.

 

[Sterkh90]

The ones who love her current model will also be happy as well.

The female main characters are going to have lives of their own and not just serve to be there for the mc.

I just hope they don't show us footage of their "own life" (if you know what I mean). Or it will be possible to skip them.

 

[javikaston]

Another thing. I keep seeing people bitching about the tit size. but DEV could you give the mc a normal size dick for once? I've seen enough super cocks to last me a few life times.

 

[javikaston]

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indeedly BOOBAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. BOOBA IS GOOD!

 

[javikaston]

For all the whiners complaining about Athena's tit size here something for ya.





Heres what breasts should look like below....

 

[drfronkonstinmd]

For all the whiners complaining about Athena's tit size here something for ya.


Heres what breasts should look like below....

I honestly think Athena’s stand out more than others because, as the dev said, this is a quick test to see how it goes, so the models are not exactly “polished”. Any model from Battle of the Bulges or Cockham is bigger and goes for the same implant look. The difference is that those models have an intense work behind. It’s not the size. It’s the overall visual quality which, again, comes from being a quick test.

I’m sure that, even if they keep the size, the next update will look much better and won’t get as many complaints.

 

[javikaston]

I honestly think Athena’s stand out more than others because, as the dev said, this is a quick test to see how it goes, so the models are not exactly “polished”. Any model from Battle of the Bulges or Cockham is bigger and goes for the same implant look. The difference is that those models have an intense work behind. It’s not the size. It’s the overall visual quality which, again, comes from being a quick test.

I’m sure that, even if they keep the size, the next update will look much better and won’t get as many complaints.

the biggest complaint i have seen is they don't like her tits. I really didn't see anything else. But I also find it funny that no one mentioned the busted chick in the beginning. She looked like she fell from a ugly tree and hit every branch on the way down.
If anything I hope the Dev does a complete make over on her.


ps

maybe. but I've seen the same complaint sometimes by the same people on different games. So whiners are going to be whiners and they are just as useless as their comments are. Its understandable that they don't like it. That's fine. Then find something that is more to your taste. Don't be a whineass and say I don't like this. There's rule 34 all over this site. Another thing that's great about this site is. It will have a game that the whine asses will like they just need to put the tags in the search bar and hit enter. Use that energy that they had in complaining about the tits. In the search bar and they might be happy. But I doubt it some people seem to have been born to complain.

pss

 

[tr12345]

To everyone. As this is only a demo the content is subject to change. I wanted to put this out there to get people's general thoughts. I agree the balloon tits are a bit much. But it's a good basis to start off with. With that said. Both Gina and Athena models have already been updated and they will be in the official release.

Some of the tags that will be added are Male mc. Blackmail, Incest, Choices, Corruption, Anal, missionary, for right now. Other sexual kinks will be added in future updates. As more content is added more tags will be added as well.

As for the overview that will be updated as well.

If anyone has any questions. suggestions, etc.
Feel free to drop by.

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I like balloon tits, but it's your choice to go smaller for the mainstream.

I'm just always surprised how much hate people can bring up for plastic surgery proportions. I wonder where it comes from, would be interesting to know what goes on in the head of someone who can create so much hate out of no where for something that doesn't affect them at all, if it's not their body.

 

[javikaston]

I like balloon tits, but it's your choice to go smaller for the mainstream.

I'm just always surprised how much hate people can bring up for plastic surgery proportions. I wonder where it comes from, would be interesting to know what goes on in the head of someone who can create so much hate out of no where for something that doesn't affect them at all, if it's not their body.

You and me both.

 

[drfronkonstinmd]

I like balloon tits, but it's your choice to go smaller for the mainstream.

I'm just always surprised how much hate people can bring up for plastic surgery proportions. I wonder where it comes from, would be interesting to know what goes on in the head of someone who can create so much hate out of no where for something that doesn't affect them at all, if it's not their body.

I think there’s a difference there.

It’s true that people love to complain about plastic surgery. Many of them because they consider it “cheating” (we all have things we don’t like about our bodies and we have to accept them, so how dare you change your appearance to look more attractive and get the attention you didn’t have before). Others simply don’t like the look, and that’s fine. Just look the other way and move on. Plenty of natural looking bodies everywhere.The problem is that people in general like to complain. Mostly because we feel safe when we can validate our own opinions in any way.

But here we’re talking about “simulated” plastic surgery. And while some people may complain about it for the same reasons as real plastic surgery, I think a large number of those complaints here come from the fact that a huge amount of games in this forum feature girls with enormous proportions as a standard. Like having big tits is a must for almost all porn games. So when people who don’t particularly enjoy that look see another new game featuring a female character with boobs the size of her head, it’s time to complain again.

 

[FutabaSakura8]

Personally I love the exaggerated proportions, not sure why some people just can't accept that not every game will appeal to them.

 

[Trasher2018]

Ok - really just a demo.

It is way to fast paced.

The dialog and thoughts are as cliché as it can be. "Oh - I have sexy thoughts about my (whatever she is).. bla bla."
Give it some time.

And dont forget about the girl in MCs bed - that should be references in some way ... at least in the MCs mind - especially when he offers her to show her around. But I would expect a scene when he is dressing up and returns into his bedroom.

"Hey lady, nice meeting you, but we got a problem ..." - something.

And what happend to the cool dude in the first scene? Who is that? Why cant we play him instead of that ugly kid?

From this


to this?

 

[javikaston]

Ok - really just a demo.

It is way to fast paced.

The dialog and thoughts are as cliché as it can be. "Oh - I have sexy thoughts about my (whatever she is).. bla bla."
Give it some time.

And dont forget about the girl in MCs bed - that should be references in some way ... at least in the MCs mind - especially when he offers her to show her around. But I would expect a scene when he is dressing up and returns into his bedroom.

"Hey lady, nice meeting you, but we got a problem ..." - something.

And what happend to the cool dude in the first scene? Who is that? Why cant we play him instead of that ugly kid?

From this
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to this?
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Cool story bro. can I see the masterpiece that you are working on?

send me the link i would love to check it out.

 

[Trasher2018]

Cool story bro. can I see the masterpiece that you are working on?

send me the link i would love to check it out.

You dont have to be Dev to have (valid) criticism.

The current "demo" is just a collection of renders and some "random" dialog. Not enough to really get a feeling for the characters or anything. We just have the "generic" rich MC (doesnt really matter how he got rich) and some girl coming to visit him after several years.

Your comment is just toxic for no reason. I haven't insulted anyone. I just pointed out missed opportunities (girl in bed) or the changed look of the MC. First I thought the story is told as a flash back (because in the first image of the MC with beard he looks older), but that makes no sense in the context how the story is told so far.

So it is a valid thing to point that out - and to say that in my opinion the "young" MC looks ugly.

Oh - and I think I could produce a decent game/story, but I dont have the time to commit to such a project. But I can state my opinion and give feedback, because I have played enough games (of this genre) and in general to have a solid understanding of them.

Instead of lashing out to me you could have comment on my criticism to start a conversation on how and or why my points are flawed or wrong.

PS: I am not a native speaker, so if something is unclear or badly worded ... - I am sorry.

 

[dudedudester4vrvr4]

Would be nice to have a tag for "normal proportions" which excludes 95% of the games available, and one day we will get more games with models that look like real people.

You want normal looking people go outside. This place is for fantasies.

 

[Sennistrasz]

You want normal looking people go outside. This place is for fantasies.

Fantasy situations with normal people.

 

[javikaston]

You dont have to be Dev to have (valid) criticism.

The current "demo" is just a collection of renders and some "random" dialog. Not enough to really get a feeling for the characters or anything. We just have the "generic" rich MC (doesnt really matter how he got rich) and some girl coming to visit him after several years.

Your comment is just toxic for no reason. I haven't insulted anyone. I just pointed out missed opportunities (girl in bed) or the changed look of the MC. First I thought the story is told as a flash back (because in the first image of the MC with beard he looks older), but that makes no sense in the context how the story is told so far.

So it is a valid thing to point that out - and to say that in my opinion the "young" MC looks ugly.

Oh - and I think I could produce a decent game/story, but I dont have the time to commit to such a project. But I can state my opinion and give feedback, because I have played enough games (of this genre) and in general to have a solid understanding of them.

Instead of lashing out to me you could have comment on my criticism to start a conversation on how and or why my points are flawed or wrong.

PS: I am not a native speaker, so if something is unclear or badly worded ... - I am sorry.

If you thought that was toxic you are such a snowflake. You make laugh. If you ever played call of duty on the Xbox 360 and went into their chatroom now that's toxic.

 

[javikaston]

I'm guessing with the trash that surrounded his room was meant to show all the mc cared about was getting his game done. As far as the chick in his bed. Did it ever occur to you that this is just a demo. And with the mc saying quite clearly I might add. "I will deal with your hot ass later."
And it looks like it's still In morning. And furthermore they both went parting and the mc had a hangover so she probably does too and is sleeping it off. If any of this true . The dev will probably take care of it in the offical release. I would think someone that has played as many games as you claim to have played would know about this.
And of course you have the time to make one. But you are too busy doing other things. Also 95 percent of all male mc are ugly. If you wanted to play a game with a "hot male mc" pick another one. Don't be leaving stupid comments like that.