Ren'Py Inanna Revenge [Ep.2] [AtemX Games]

[Dessolos]

haha finished adding the screenshots I wanted to save and I made this folder as a joke cause of this game

 

[ChubbyFatBoy]

It's a pretty tough balance to strike, because too much exposition early on would have ended up feeling tedious or repetitive for some players, especially right at the start of the story. That's why I chose to handle it through an ellipsis and focus more on the length of his ordeal rather than detailing every moment. It was a dilemma that stayed in my mind a lot during the early stages of writing.

Well looking at other responses. It looks like more people actually had a bone to pick with her. So maybe it was sufficient enough as is and I'm the odd man out. But just an idea or few.

1st thing that popped up in my head. Were those WW2 flashback memes. Show quick snippets of the horrible bits he went through. Have accompanying screams or something with them. Or maybe the few times where he goes to sleep. Have him have nightmares. Which could double as lovey moments with the girls being there to comfort him. Could go the psychological route where certain things or people trigger memories. Like they suddenly appear as someone else from back then, just to go back once he snaps out of it. All decently quick showings of trauma to help push the idea of punishment.

.....or just leave as is. Either way is fine from where I'm standing. As shown with my other comment. I had a choice between angry or horny.

Thanks to the outfit and dat ass, horny won out.

 

[Kekekerkek]

will there be an update before the end of the year?

 

[dolfe67]

will there be an update before the end of the year?

Probably not. In january most likely.

 

[OnlyNeverNow]

Well looking at other responses. It looks like more people actually had a bone to pick with her. So maybe it was sufficient enough as is and I'm the odd man out. But just an idea or few.

1st thing that popped up in my head. Were those WW2 flashback memes. Show quick snippets of the horrible bits he went through. Have accompanying screams or something with them. Or maybe the few times where he goes to sleep. Have him have nightmares. Which could double as lovey moments with the girls being there to comfort him. Could go the psychological route where certain things or people trigger memories. Like they suddenly appear as someone else from back then, just to go back once he snaps out of it. All decently quick showings of trauma to help push the idea of punishment.

.....or just leave as is. Either way is fine from where I'm standing. As shown with my other comment. I had a choice between angry or horny.

Thanks to the outfit and dat ass, horny won out.
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Maybe I'm misremembering, but isnt that how it is in the game atm? You get a quick series of montage slides showing MC getting electrocuted and tortured.

I think you're just horny my man, nothing wrong with that

 

[Eternamite]