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VN Ren'Py Abandoned Inevitable Relations [v0.1b] [KinneyX23]

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Does OnlyFans have games? I just though it was a site for people to post pics of themselves
They can post there protected links to MEGA, or perhaps they can upload .rar files there I'm sure! You can post GB videos so why not archive files?
 
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Thanks for the info babar. The devs last release on this thread was on 2019-07-20, and has no Patron account it seems. If it turns up then that would be good as the story has potential, so lets hope that he is re-activating from the Abandoned status. Also the ver 0.15 FINAL tag is confusing as the story had only just begun with none of the storylines anywhere near complete in ver 0.1b.
 

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Thanks for the info babar. The devs last release on this thread was on 2019-07-20, and has no Patron account it seems. If it turns up then that would be good as the story has potential, so lets hope that he is re-activating from the Abandoned status. Also the ver 0.15 FINAL tag is confusing as the story had only just begun with none of the storylines anywhere near complete in ver 0.1b.
Just to make this clear IR was and never will be abandoned. But I'm only going to release an update if I'm happy with it and I'm only working on it if time permits and I want to.

This is just a small selection of what's gonna come with the final of Chapter 1: 1627059465880.png

120 will be rerendered and better quality though. Just haven't rendered the image yet.
 

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I like the renders and I think you do a good job on the game mechanics - just having problems buying into the plot.
She sent her son away (for a year) for 'inappropriate' feelings towards his sister and then she kids him about joining her and her gf in the bedroom as soon as he walks in the door? Seems like an odd option.
And the son seems way too forgiving. If it were me, I wouldn't have have called her once after she sent me away. And she would be getting full attitude once I got back.
 

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She sent her son away (for a year) for 'inappropriate' feelings towards his sister and then she kids him about joining her and her gf in the bedroom as soon as he walks in the door? Seems like an odd option.
She acted too impulsive and admits it. Plus, as I it, she had a similar feeling toward her own brother (or sister) and that's why she was scared by her son's behavior. We cannot see these things yet as the game is at very early stage of development, but the plot is about MC accapting her feeling toward her kids. She understands it's wrong, she did what she did trying to "save" her son from the same past she might have (or not -we don't know yet).
And the son seems way too forgiving
Maybe because he loves his mom very much? It's not like she locked him in dungeon, lol. He was with uncle, c'mon.
 

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She acted too impulsive and admits it. Plus, as I it, she had a similar feeling toward her own brother (or sister) and that's why she was scared by her son's behavior. We cannot see these things yet as the game is at very early stage of development, but the plot is about MC accapting her feeling toward her kids. She understands it's wrong, she did what she did trying to "save" her son from the same past she might have (or not -we don't know yet).

Maybe because he loves his mom very much? It's not like she locked him in dungeon, lol. He was with uncle, c'mon.
- Realizing she acted too impulsively after a few days or even a few weeks - maybe. A whole year?
- He stopped calling. Did they explain why she or his sister never called him? As you said, it wasn't like he was in a dungeon. I assume the mom's brother was taking their calls. Maybe that should have been explained more?
- A teenager being exiled from his home, his family, and his friends for a whole year? I would categorize that as a major life event.
- Sending your kid away for a whole year because you're worried about his incestuous feelings - and then pranking him with the prospect of joining her and her lover in the bedroom minutes after he walks in the door - after not talking to him for months? I see that as over the top messed up. LOL
FYI - this is based on my own experiences and how I took this. Appreciate the conversation. :)
FYI2 - I like the concept. These are just things I think could be improved upon / better explained.
 
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If I remember correctly you had a choice to either prank him or not. I chose not to and only paid attention to the daughter and other girls.
 
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- Realizing she acted too impulsively after a few days or even a few weeks - maybe. A whole year?
Fair enough I guess. Thing is I planned on addind the explanation to the story later on. But since I had to change and rerender images anyway I'm currently also rewriting the story a bit. So in the upcoming version there will be an explanation for the longevity of his stay. Also please don't ask me when that version will be available. I quite simply don't know yet.

- He stopped calling. Did they explain why she or his sister never called him? As you said, it wasn't like he was in a dungeon. I assume the mom's brother was taking their calls. Maybe that should have been explained more?
Okay I think there's a misunderstanding. Charlie called and spoke to Beth on a regular basis. He didn't however call Eva the last few weeks he was in California. But again the new version will change that and hopefully make it clearer.

- A teenager being exiled from his home, his family, and his friends for a whole year? I would categorize that as a major life event.
Indeed, but who said Beth wanted to send him away for a year. ;)


- Sending your kid away for a whole year because you're worried about his incestuous feelings - and then pranking him with the prospect of joining her and her lover in the bedroom minutes after he walks in the door - after not talking to him for months? I see that as over the top messed up. LOL
Like I said I think there's a misunderstanding. Beth and Charlie talked a lot during the year he was away. The dialogue only said that he didn't call Eva, it doesn't say that he never called anyone or that he didn't take calls.
 
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Fair enough I guess. Thing is I planned on addind the explanation to the story later on. But since I had to change and rerender images anyway I'm currently also rewriting the story a bit. So in the upcoming version there will be an explanation for the longevity of his stay. Also please don't ask me when that version will be available. I quite simply don't know yet.


Okay I think there's a misunderstanding. Charlie called and spoke to Beth on a regular basis. He didn't however call Eva the last few weeks he was in California. But again the new version will change that and hopefully make it clearer.



Indeed, but who said Beth wanted to send him away for a year. ;)




Like I said I think there's a misunderstanding. Beth and Charlie talked a lot during the year he was away. The dialogue only said that he didn't call Eva, it doesn't say that he never called anyone or that he didn't take calls.
Appreciate your response. Hope my critique wasn't too harsh. :)
And for the record, I do plan on following your progress - however long that takes.
 

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If I remember correctly you had a choice to either prank him or not. I chose not to and only paid attention to the daughter and other girls.
I tend to go through all the options - especially when it's new like this.
 

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The game's premise is something I'm interested in especially its a milf protagonist. But anyone knows how many content there is in the game so far?

I want to play it but if youre going to get blueballed then I'd rather wait a bit.
 

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Might be better to wait for when the next update comes out before trying it as they're rewriting the story a bit and I think some renders are being redone as well if I remember correctly and before you ask no they don't know when the next update will be available.
 
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How much content is there in the game so far?
If you're just looking for porn, this probably isn't the game for you. There's a fair amount of story here, but not a lot of smut. Development is, for all intents and purposes, stalled at this point, so just keep an eye on it and travel on!
 

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First time for me, some annoyances.

Both Beth and Eva version
- The dialogue background makes it near impossible to see the quick menu choices.

Just the Eva version.
- Annoying black screens between each render...

EDIT: Playing the Beth route... there's several times a mention of a CI... assuming since Beth's a cop CI in this case means a Confidential Informer ?
English not being my native language, and not familiar with cop speak I actually had to google that... so might be an idea to at least hint at the meaning the first time it's used...

EDIT2: Something doesn't add up, either the coroner (Sara) is a major amateur or the dev slipped up...
In the beginning Beth's murder victim is supposed to be strangled, but then when Sara calls Beth in the very early morning, the murder victim suddenly is killed by a heroin overdose and shot afterwards to cover up the OD...

So which is it? I mean, traces of strangulation or a gunshot wound are two very different causes of death... even a first years med student can tell the difference and as far as I gathered there's only one murder investigation in progress...

EDIT3: Day4 night scene story flow is erratic...
Beth is lying in bed with Alex coding on her laptop, suddenly we're seeing Beth visiting Eve playing some game while nude, and the next moment we're back in bed with a now sleeping Alex and Beth going to talk with Izzy about her dream where she's tryin to kiss Eve and about to muff dive on her...
 
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Yeah, those are flaws that are on my list to be fixed in the next version, plus a lot of re-renders of existing scenes.

The Eva route will be separated from the main game and probably released as some kind of DLC after the release of the first IR Chapter. Once I'm ready to do that, the black screens between the renders will be gone.

As for the murder Beth is investigating, yeah I'm aware of that and that will be fixed in Chapter 1. And the scene on Day 4 will be changed as well, so that it's less weird if it comes to pacing. :)


That said though, thanks for the feedback :)
 
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