Okay, I do not have the current version, but I'm waiting for the final version and I think I will not have to judge. One thing I'll love to see is who Bethany will end up with at the end of the game, ruin her marriage and career as a cop, become a lover of one of her children, or be alone. I think it's in your plans for your Visual Novel to have multiple endings. I'm already thinking about what really can happen during the story:
Will Bethany become Charlie's lover?
Will Bethany become Eva's lover?
Will Bethany end her marriage and "give" her ex-wife to Charlie?
Will Bethany end her marriage and "give" her ex-wife to Eva?
Will Bethany and Jessica be partners at work and in bed?
Will Bethany sleep with Cpt. Barrett to get a promotion?
Will Bethany lose her job and be alone? (bad ending)
Will Bethany have Jessica, Eva and Alex in their personal harem? (I exaggerated, but I thought about it)
Okay, that's all. I do not know if you thought about it or it is programmed and like I said, I'm waiting for the final version. Keep up the great work!