- Aug 15, 2017
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@KinneyX23 First time player. Great development so far, I love the protagonist. I'm disappointed you won't be able to corrupt the daughter and keep your wife however, but c'est la vie. I definitely love when you incorporate a job into it, and a female badass cop sounds like it would be really fun to play.
It also creates danger for her family, and kids and allows you to be heroic which is something I think other novels lack. Definitely deepen the depth of field of the children and incorporate what their likes/dislikes are right now they're sort of one dimensional horny young adults would be nice to get to know what they're into.
I also think there's a rare opportunity for the mother to tell her lesbian exploits (past girlfriends, college experiences, etc.) to her daughter, torridly, and detailed You should consider doing that.
I must say also that the wife is my favorite so hope to see her more.
It also creates danger for her family, and kids and allows you to be heroic which is something I think other novels lack. Definitely deepen the depth of field of the children and incorporate what their likes/dislikes are right now they're sort of one dimensional horny young adults would be nice to get to know what they're into.
I also think there's a rare opportunity for the mother to tell her lesbian exploits (past girlfriends, college experiences, etc.) to her daughter, torridly, and detailed You should consider doing that.
I must say also that the wife is my favorite so hope to see her more.