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New Patreon build has a lot of big changes, unlocking almost all of the scenes in the game so they are easier to find. For those of you who have been on the fence about whether or not to take a look at the game, A21 is a really good place to start.

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This game features:
-A sand box environment.
-Dynamic relationship building.
-At present, 4 slaves with many more planned for the future.
-More than 80 interactive scenes.
-Many interactive functions that allow you to interact with your environment in meaningful ways.
-You can assign work schedules, tell them what they are allowed to eat, where they have to sleep, manage as much or as little of their life choices as you want.
-A system that tracks minutes, hours, days, weeks, months, and even years.
-More than 100 images.
-A massive estate spanning 50 locations that you can explore.

What we have planned:
-NPCs who interact with one another, building friendships or rivalries over time.
-A fully customizable clothing system.
-Merchants where you can buy new items.
-Buy, sell, and train your slaves as you see fit
-Put your slaves to work cleaning, tending the yard, working in town, or pimp them out for a few extra bucks on the side.
-Pregnancy, sire and raise children.
-A weather system that will allow for the weather, and even the seasons to change naturally.
-And so very much more, . . .

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I encourage everyone to take a look at the Free version of the game linked below. If you enjoy the Free version, please consider a small pledge. With a small pledge, you gain early access to the latest build as well as other perks while helping ensure I can continue doing this full time! Every little bit helps.

Inheritance is a text based game with art. A portion of all earnings goes toward new art for the game.

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What's new in the latest Supporter Build?

A21:
-Wrote and added a new Sponsored Scene that can take place at night related to the Sleep function. Requires that you have mid to high relationship with Eve, Anna must be sleeping with you and Eve is not. 4.9k words of content. Generously sponsored by Matty.
-Wrote one new set of ending scenes for the St Andrew's Cross since there's a gap in the scenes for certain stat ranges. This one should act as a catch all to prevent that. .4k words of content.
-Wrote one new Hide and Seek event. .4k words of content.
-Wrote and added two new Apple scenes for Gaia at fairly high relationship stats. .9k words of content.
-Wrote and added two new small scenes for the Shower for when you choose to wash yourself. .2k words of content.
-Wrote and added two new "Drive to town" scenes. .2k words of content.
-Wrote and added two new "Drive home" scenes. .2k words of content.
-Improved the Cheat Menu by adding return functions which should make it easier to navigate.
-Rebuilt the code for nearly all of the events involving Anna and/or Eve within the mansion (About 15 per location, across nearly forty locations. The mansion is going to feel pretty busy now.). Scenes involving Mitsuko and scenes outside the mansion will behave normally. You're still going to need to summon girls to various places to use some of the functions though (Sex, Dungeon stuff, talk with them, etc.)
-Fixed a bug with Mitsuko's Ballroom content that was throwing a trinary of errors when you tried to comfort her.
-Made some small adjustments to the Billiards code.
-One of our coders was finally able to run down the bug in the Billiards code. That should be working correctly now
-Other small adjustments and fixes.
-Added two images to the Kitchens.
-Added two images to the Laundry area.
-Added four images to the Lounge.
-Added two images to the Servant's Area.
-Added two images to the Storage area.
-Updated the Special Thanks area 10/23/18

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What's new in the latest free build?

A20:
-Added The Blowjob and Fingering branches to Eve's Sauna Scene. 1.9k words of content added in total. Contest entry from AbyssalEros. NOTE: I have NOT written additional relationship variants for this yet but hope to do so soon. The content is fairly cruel. You have been warned.
-Added a new bed time scene for Anna. This scene can appear at any relationship level and plays out late at night. Submitted by LFN Park. 1.6k words of content.
-Added a new Laundry Room scene for Anna and Eve. This one appears at mid to high relationship values and is a unique scene. Submitted by Nynx. 2.3k words of content.
-Hide and Seek with Eve. Three Intros written. Which ones play can depend on time of day. These scenes can be found in any of the "hall" locations. .5k words of content. Sponsored by Matty.
-Hide and Seek with Eve. Four Rejections written. Which ones play depend on time of day. .4k words of content. Sponsored by Matty.
-Hide and Seek with Eve. Eight Core scenes. 1.9k words of content. Sponsored by Matty.
-Hide and Seek with Eve. Four Endings written. .8k words of content. Sponsored by Matty.
-Wrote an interactive scene for Eve, it actually triggers during the Hide and Seek content that was just added. .7k words of content. Sponsored by Matty.
-Wrote fourteen early scenes for Gaia. There is a new function in the back yard of the estate that allows you to access these early interactions with her for the sake of relationship building. One of them is an interactive scene. 4.2k words of content.
-Added the St Andrew's Cross function to the Dungeon location.
-Added five Start scenes related to the St Andrew's Cross. 1.5k words of content.
-Added three Whipping start scenes related to the St Andrew's Cross. .4k words of content.
-Added eleven Whipping core scenes related to the St Andrew's Cross. 1.6k words of content.
-Wrote the first round of End scenes for the St Andrew's Cross. Twentyfour scenes in total reflecting a range of relationship values and health. 2.4k words of content.
-Added a new interactive scene to the ballroom for Mitsuko. Takes place at high relationship levels in the evening hours. .9k words of content. Submitted by Irish Major Tom.
-Added two new conversations for Mitsuko through her "Casual Talk" option. .3k words of content between them. Submitted by Irish Major Tom.
-Added two new ambient scenes to "Wet Willy's". .2k words of content between them.
-Added "Freakshow" Season 1, Episode 1 to the game. 1.3k words of content. Submitted by Pervy Sage.
-Added "Freakshow" Season 1, Episode 2 to the game. 1.5k words of content. Submitted by Pervy Sage.
-Added "Freakshow" Season 1, Episode 3 to the game. 1.5k words of content. Submitted by Pervy Sage.
-Added "Freakshow" Season 1, Episode 4 to the game. 1.7k words of content. Submitted by Pervy Sage.
-Added one new location to Pendleton. The Drinking donkey. This location includes six ambient scenes. .7k words of content.
-Added a new scene to the Bar in Pendleton that introduces a new NPC. 2.1k words of content. Only plays out late at night. Submitted by Irish Major Tom.
-Added a Theater Mode to the CHEAT Menu. This will be used to display short stories and other content related to the game that happens off screen so to speak. This will also act as an incentive for pledges.
-Added "Fight" to Theater Mode. 2.2k words of content. Submitted by LFN Park.
-Added "Wounds" to Theater Mode. 2.5k words of content. Submitted by LFN Park.
-Added "Recover" to Theater Mode. 1.7k words of content. Submitted by LFN Park.
-Added "One Step" to Theater Mode. 1.7k words of content. Submitted by LFN Park.
-Added "Spar" to Theater Mode. 2.3k words of content. Submitted by LFN Park.
-Added "Discovery" to Theater Mode. 5.1k words of content. Submitted by LFN Park.
-Added "Peril" to Theater Mode. 2.6k words of content. Submitted by LFN Park.
-Added "Respite" to Theater Mode. 2.9k words of content. Submitted by LFN Park.
-Added "Cleanup" to Theater Mode. 1.4k words of content. Submitted by LFN Park.
-Added "Song" to Theater Mode. 2.3k words of content. Submitted by LFN Park.
-Added "Eve and the Candy Store" to Theater Mode. 2.2k words of content.
-Added "Interrogation" to Theater Mode. 2.3k words of content. Submitted by LFN Park.
-Added "Scarred" to Theater Mode. 1.7k words of content. Submitted by LFN Park.
-Added "Epilogue" to Theater Mode. .5k words of content. Submitted by LFN Park.
-There was a missing link leading to the bed time sex scenes for Eve. Has been plugged in so those two scenes can be reached now.
-Rebuilt the guest rooms. All six rooms have been been rewritten and now have unique descriptions for each room. This amounts to about 4k words of rewritten text and an overall growth of about 200 words across all six locations.
-Added new art to the guest bedrooms, 25 new images across those locations.
-Updated the last B&W image in the intro with the newly completed colored version.
-Added exits to several more scenes that didn't have proper exits as well as made several small improvements to the game's code. Thanks to Nynx.
-Updated the Special Thanks area for the project with Patrons who are pledged at appropriate levels. Also updated with writers, and others who have helped out along the way. Last updated 9/16/18




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Patreon Links:
A21 CHEAT Build (CHEAT Build with early access):


A21 Supporter Build (Supporters Only Build. Early Access.):


A20 Public Build: (Free):


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Enjoy the game? Consider a small pledge for early access! It's support from all the fans who enjoy this game that help me pay for new art for these projects and pays my bills so I can continue doing this full time!
 

UnDeaD_CyBorG

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For those of you who have been on the fence about whether or not to take a look at the game, A21 is a really good place to start.
Isn't "taking a look" something you do with a free version? :p
 

GateKeeper

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"After the passing of your estranged Great Uncle, you're surprised to find yourself listed as the sole heir to his estate. With all the legal unpleasantness out of the way, you're now on your way to your new home.

Not sure what to expect when you arrive, you don't know if you're going to sell the mansion or live there, but once you step inside your entire world changes when you are suddenly faced with the fact that you now own two slave girls.

What do you do with them? Do you follow in your Great Uncle's footsteps and use them for your own pleasure? Do you treat them like servants? Or do you nurture a relationship with them that just might blossom into something more, . . ."

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This game features:
-A sand box environment.
-Dynamic relationship building.
-At present, 5 slaves with many more planned for the future.
-More than 90 interactive scenes.
-Many interactive functions that allow you to interact with your environment in meaningful ways.
-You can assign work schedules, tell them what they are allowed to eat, where they have to sleep, manage as much or as little of their life choices as you want.
-A system that tracks minutes, hours, days, weeks, months, and even years.
-More than 140 images.
-A massive estate spanning 50 locations that you can explore.

What we have planned:
-NPCs who interact with one another, building friendships or rivalries over time.
-A fully customizable clothing system.
-Merchants where you can buy new items.
-Buy, sell, and train your slaves as you see fit
-Put your slaves to work cleaning, tending the yard, working in town, or pimp them out for a few extra bucks on the side.
-Pregnancy, sire and raise children.
-A weather system that will allow for the weather, and even the seasons to change naturally.
-And so very much more, . . .

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I encourage everyone to take a look at the Free version of the game linked below. If you enjoy the Free version, please consider a small pledge. With a small pledge, you gain early access to the latest build as well as other perks while helping ensure I can continue doing this full time! Every little bit helps.

Inheritance is a text based game with art. A portion of all earnings goes toward new art for the game.

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Player reviews:

"Fantastic start, really immersive.
I tried to go the cruel path and can't continue, the girls' reactions are just too strong
Time to be a carebear for a little while I guess."
-kalifianto

"I gotta say, I absolutely loved that intro. It has all the things that make me interested in a game. Specifically, the focus on writing and character building, the "emotional porn" I guess some call it, and yet still the arousal you get from a game like this."
-Treestump

"Man this game is awesome.

I want to be bad, but i end up feeling bad about being and then i'm good."
-nicktrocado

"Hm...I am conflicted ...the writer is good at making me question what the best path is ...I mean of the two choices here (I will never be a total abusive asshole, not even in a game so for me there's only two choices here, not 3 (abusing her is out of the question!)...no, I can't even roleplay that! I can roleplay a greedy person, a person driven by revenge, hell even someone who's a racist should I really need to etc. etc. but not someone who's just an evil asshole!):

- stop Anna from having sex with you (either by saying you aren't even remotely intersted in her, which would in my case be a lie, not to mention totally uncalled for! Or by saying that if there's going to be sex then it will be consensual (which more or less means she has to initiate it without thinking that she has to, but because she wants it!))

- have sex with her but make it special for her (the absolute opposite to the uncle who basically used her as a living sex-doll!)

The first choice seems to be the better one at face value, but on the other hand: She's enjoying herself in choice two (she clamps down on the protagonist's head when he's eating her out because she has an orgasm and she seems to like kissing, too) and it seems to establish a better connection between the protagonist and her (not to mention that giving someone who's had very few good things happen to them a very good one seems like something you really should do)

I really don't know which is the morally superior choice...:(

ps: I love it when games challange me like that, sadly most AAA-Developers have stopped making games that really challenge you like this :("
-DarthLAX

"Oh shit, this is by the guy who is writing The Allure of Wanton Cove. "An emotionally damaged woman who is haunted by the horrors she has experienced" huh? Considering it's this guy, those horrors might be pretty harsh. Looks awesome."
-TheImage



What's new in the latest Supporter Build?

A22:
-Fixed a host of typos in existing scenes as well as fixed a broken bed time scene.
-Added a scene for Eve in the bathing room in the evenings. Only appears 8pm-10pm in the evenings, at any relationship level. 3k words of content.
-Rebuilt the way some events work (Thank you HiEv for all the help. All credit for the rebuild goes to you!). Initially this will affect the karaoke content, but this same mechanic will be featured in the upcoming meal time rebuild, pregnancy, and had a lot of implications for other things as well.
-Added Cheat Menu options for Gaia, Mitsuko, and Rey.
-Wrote an intro scene for introducing a Karaoke machine to the lounge in the mansion. 1.4k words of content. Sponsored by Matty.
-Added karaoke option to the sidebar in the lounge. Have to trigger the intro event before it becomes available, and you'll want the girls present so their content can play. Sponsored by Matty.
-Wrote "Achy Breaky" for Anna singing karaoke. .5k words of content. Sponsored by Matty.
-Wrote "I will survive" for Anna singing karaoke. .8k words of content. Sponsored by Matty.
-Wrote "Like a Virgin" for Eve singing karaoke. .5k words of content. Sponsored by Matty.
-Wrote "Lollypop" for Eve singing karaoke. .7k words of content. Sponsored by Matty.
-Wrote "Wild Thing" for Eve singing karaoke. .4k words of content. Sponsored by Matty.
-Wrote "My Way" for the protagonist singing karaoke. .4k words of content. Sponsored by Matty.
-Wrote "My Girl" for the protagonist singing karaoke. .4k words of content. Sponsored by Matty.
-Wrote twenty four mini scenes for use with the karaoke system. .9k words of content. Sponsored by Matty.
-Updated saves information to hopefully avoid conflicts with old saves.
-Added a new diary from the Great Uncle. First two entries. 1.3k words of content.
-Added one interactive scene for Gaia in the forest. 1.1k words of content.
-Added three ambient scenes related to Gaia. 1.1k words of content.
-Added four more apple scenes for Gaia. Available at low relationship values. 1.2k words of content.
-Added Cheap Computer interface. .3k words of content.
-Added local advertisements to Computers. Includes six sections. .3k words of content.
-Added personals to Computers. Includes four ads. .2k words of content.
-Added help wanted ads to Computers. Includes one ad. .1k words of content.
-Added for sale ads to Computers. Includes four ads. .1k words of content.
-Added business advertisements to Computers. Includes four ads. .2k words of content.
-Added "Other" section to advertisements to Computers. Includes one ad. .1k words of content.
-Added new NPC to the game named Rey. NPC code in game.
-Added intro scene chain to game for Rey character. 2.7k words of content. Submitted by FaetheMaid
-Added a scene for Rey on the grounds. Can play out in several locations at any relationship level. .5k words of content. Submitted by FaetheMaid.
-Added a intro/followup scene for Rey in the entry hall. Can play out at any relationship level. 1k words of content. Submitted by FaetheMaid.
-Added cheat menu option to allow you to acquire Mitsuko and Rey for your home.
-Added two new images for the Attic.
-Added four new images for the hallway bathrooms.
-Added four new images to the gym.
-Added four new images to all of the servant's bedrooms.
-Added core cheat menu interface for Gaia and Rey.
-Updated the Special Thanks area 11/09/18

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What's new in the latest free build?

A21:
-Wrote and added a new Sponsored Scene that can take place at night related to the Sleep function. Requires that you have mid to high relationship with Eve, Anna must be sleeping with you and Eve is not. 4.9k words of content. Generously sponsored by Matty.
-Wrote one new set of ending scenes for the St Andrew's Cross since there's a gap in the scenes for certain stat ranges. This one should act as a catch all to prevent that. .4k words of content.
-Wrote one new Hide and Seek event. .4k words of content.
-Wrote and added two new Apple scenes for Gaia at fairly high relationship stats. .9k words of content.
-Wrote and added two new small scenes for the Shower for when you choose to wash yourself. .2k words of content.
-Wrote and added two new "Drive to town" scenes. .2k words of content.
-Wrote and added two new "Drive home" scenes. .2k words of content.
-Improved the Cheat Menu by adding return functions which should make it easier to navigate.
-Rebuilt the code for nearly all of the events involving Anna and/or Eve within the mansion (About 15 per location, across nearly forty locations. The mansion is going to feel pretty busy now.). Scenes involving Mitsuko and scenes outside the mansion will behave normally. You're still going to need to summon girls to various places to use some of the functions though (Sex, Dungeon stuff, talk with them, etc.)
-Fixed a bug with Mitsuko's Ballroom content that was throwing a trinary of errors when you tried to comfort her.
-Made some small adjustments to the Billiards code.
-One of our coders was finally able to run down the bug in the Billiards code. That should be working correctly now
-Other small adjustments and fixes.
-Added two images to the Kitchens.
-Added two images to the Laundry area.
-Added four images to the Lounge.
-Added two images to the Servant's Area.
-Added two images to the Storage area.
-Updated the Special Thanks area 10/23/18


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Patreon Links:
A22 CHEAT Build (CHEAT Build with early access):


A22 Supporter Build (Supporters Only Build. Early Access.):


A21 Public Build: (Free):
 

UnDeaD_CyBorG

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So I still get the
Error: cannot find a closing tag for macro <<if>>

...

Error: child tag <<elseif>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<if>>

in the Saune Events. Start, scene with both.
Oh, and a list of numbers that I assume were supposed to be stat modifiers on the Anna scolding Eve for playing scene, if taking responsibility.

Also, at high relationship levels, steadying Anna has a sentence using "me" instead of you.

Edit:
If I read that changelog above correctly, you had a fix for the St.Andrews Cross in 21, which is the free version I'm supposedly playing.
I currently have
Affection: 1120
Fear: 28
Trust: 1162
and when I free Anna, it says "No Event Was Available". Figured that might somehow be interesting.
 
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GateKeeper

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So I still get the
Error: cannot find a closing tag for macro <<if>>

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Error: child tag <<elseif>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<if>>

in the Saune Events. Start, scene with both.
Oh, and a list of numbers that I assume were supposed to be stat modifiers on the Anna scolding Eve for playing scene, if taking responsibility.
Alright, thanks for reporting it again. I've started a list for things to look into in the morning. This is the second item on it.
 

GateKeeper

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Error: child tag <<elseif>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<if>>
Any chance you have a location where this is happening? Or better yet a bit of text to go with it so I know exactly where it should be?
 

UnDeaD_CyBorG

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Sure.
...if>>You sit naked in the sauna next to each other for a while, and you ...
Happens when I invite Anna and Eve in while sitting in the sauna, in this case with low relationship to anna.
The scene can go on fine as long as I don't pick the blowjob option, which also goes on, but the text ends with
"Error: <<set>>: bad evaluation: expected expression, got '<<' "
I hope it's not from an old versions save or something.

Edit: Maybe of note, pulling Anna down to her knees doesn't end the scene, it gets there and then there's 2 red options. In one case, it also ends with a closing bracket: face.]
Missing scenes 2xx, those being ac, ad, ba, bb. I guess that content is simply yet missing, but I wonder if maybe the option to get to the point where only missing options are available should be blocked already?
Edit2: Further, there might also be a few faulty pictures, at least in A21. In the last version, I could fix that by, f.Ex., renaming "Daylight.png" to "BedroomDay.png". I seem to remember this was the case for at least two of the upper bedrooms.

Edit3: In the same room, there's a scene following a massage that seems to lack a definition:
"You’re oblivious to everything except the Error: <<print>>: bad evaluation: npcs is not defined girl clinging to you "
 
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GateKeeper

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Sure.

Happens when I invite Anna and Eve in while sitting in the sauna, in this case with low relationship to anna.
The scene can go on fine as long as I don't pick the blowjob option, which also goes on, but the text ends with
"Error: <<set>>: bad evaluation: expected expression, got '<<' "
I hope it's not from an old versions save or something.

Edit: Maybe of note, pulling Anna down to her knees doesn't end the scene, it gets there and then there's 2 red options. In one case, it also ends with a closing bracket: face.]
Missing scenes 2xx, those being ac, ad, ba, bb. I guess that content is simply yet missing, but I wonder if maybe the option to get to the point where only missing options are available should be blocked already?
Edit2: Further, there might also be a few faulty pictures, at least in A21. In the last version, I could fix that by, f.Ex., renaming "Daylight.png" to "BedroomDay.png". I seem to remember this was the case for at least two of the upper bedrooms.

Edit3: In the same room, there's a scene following a massage that seems to lack a definition:
"You’re oblivious to everything except the Error: <<print>>: bad evaluation: npcs is not defined girl clinging to you "
This is all very helpful. Thank you very much.

Will work through these (I think the sauna "<<" issue was fixed for A22) in just a little bit and roll out updates for the A22 build with the fixes.
 

GateKeeper

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Being in the Living room and clicking on Freakshow also leads to a No Event Was Available.
Just sent you a private message with a little thank you for all the help. Much appreciated.

Thank you for the TV bug report. I'll to look into that as soon as I post this message. (y)
 

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Am I missing something? This game is grind to the extreme where the only way I see to get them to like you is to hunt down literally hundreds of random events that just pop up with no rime or reason.
 

GateKeeper

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The "A" in the build number indicates that the game is in an "Alpha" status. That means we're still working on a lot of elements, including the NPC scheduling that will eventually add some reason to the chaos.

Those hundreds of random events however, close to a hundred of them have meaningful interactions that include multiple choices (Often with no right or wrong answers, just different ways to address the same circumstances.) and those choices all impact your relationship with the people involved. Most of those scenes also have variations (Some scenes in the game have over 30 versions of the same scene depending on your relationship stats with the people involved.) that allow those scenes to evolve over time as well. For example, at a poor relationship value, hugging one of the girls might frighten her, while on the opposite end of the spectrum that same action would be a comfort to her.

The game is about building your relationships with the girls, about loving or torturing them as you see fit. Much of the game's content reflects that in the form of scenes where your choices affect their perception of you. That said, if you're just looking for fap material, try summoning either Anna or Eve to the master bedroom and you can fool around with them to your heart's content (Their relationship stats will also affect how much of this content plays out.) or if you just want to slap them around a bit, summon Anna to the Dungeon and strap her into the St Andrew's Cross for a bit.
 

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Just entered the Love Shack (Around 5pm). There is no event going on, and in this playthrough I don't believe I've ever encountered Mitsuko, but I have the regular set of actions on the left (about, talk, assignments, punish) as for other slavegirls.
I'm not sure this isn't a legacy problem caused by using an old save, which I'll test later, but I haven't encountered her anywhere in the mansion.
 
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Just entered the Love Shack (Around 5pm). There is no event going on, and in this playthrough I don't believe I've ever encountered Mitsuko, but I have the regular set of actions on the left (about, talk, assignments, punish) as for other slavegirls.
I'm not sure this isn't a legacy problem caused by using an old save, which I'll test later, but I haven't encountered her anywhere in the mansion.
There should be about a 1/8 chance of her intro scene triggering when you go there.

And coming into A22a (Which I released just a little while ago over on Patreon.) I think that particular issue with her information appearing prematurely will fix itself with the changes made to that build.
 

UnDeaD_CyBorG

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I'll check that, then. Something else, though:
You feel a drop of sweat roll down the back of your neck, unable to make up his mind.
...
He only half asks the question, from the way the man's demeanor changes that your great uncle's opinions held great weight in this man's eyes.
...
If the trade of human flesh really such a casual thing? A few papers and an agreement, The thought weighs heavily on you.
The section following the introduction might need a grammar overhaul, unless that happened, which I suppose I'll see very soon.
 

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I'll check that, then. Something else, though:

The section following the introduction might need a grammar overhaul, unless that happened, which I suppose I'll see very soon.
Looks like that's the next thing for me to look into today.

Thanks for all the reports. Every little thing that can be improved makes the game a little better for everyone.
 

UnDeaD_CyBorG

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Starting the game, there's a "made on" that should probably be "of", and then when eve is introduced and talks about Anna, they are likely mixed up:
Seemingly oblivious to her sister's reaction, Anna forges on, "Are you going to make my sister cry too?"
And later
You can see her out of the corner of my eyes trembling
There was another case of 1st/2nd person near the love shack, I'll try to find that when I get there again.

Also:
I think that particular issue with her information appearing prematurely will fix itself with the changes made to that build.
Well, from what I can tell, it might not. But I'll recheck that tomorrow.
 
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