VN Ren'Py Abandoned Inner Demons [v0.44.0.16] [GrayTShirt]

[popoe22]

stupid game, you seem to be told that the main character is unique, but in the end we have a nonentity who has no personality, he is just meat for these whores, a living phallus of the plot, in fact, there is no

 

[HoshiEx]

stupid game, you seem to be told that the main character is unique, but in the end we have a nonentity who has no personality, he is just meat for these whores, a living phallus of the plot, in fact, there is no

like been told many times before.dont like dont play it.just delete and move on find another game u like to play.maybe this game not your cup of tea.maybe your type syrup and lean and thats fine.

 

[Loxxxthenasty]

stupid game, you seem to be told that the main character is unique, but in the end we have a nonentity who has no personality, he is just meat for these whores, a living phallus of the plot, in fact, there is no

Youthful impatience.... Cute ,dumb, and shitty all at once.... Way to go..... SON!!

 

[Davizera]

APK ANDROID VERSION

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[sam68]

I kinda agree with most people on the futa aspect. It is a little to many hot girls with peckers. but this story is a lot more interesting
And visually better than the pixel/ai stories. And cartoon games.. games like Grandma's house.. inner demons..my best deal etc..are more
Interesting to me. I still say keep up the good work

 

[Loxxxthenasty]

I kinda agree with most people on the futa aspect. It is a little to many hot girls with peckers. but this story is a lot more interesting
And visually better than the pixel/ai stories. And cartoon games.. games like Grandma's house.. inner demons..my best deal etc..are more
Interesting to me. I still say keep up the good work

In this update we get to know why (and how) the futa thing came about

 

[HornyyPussy]

stupid game, you seem to be told that the main character is unique, but in the end we have a nonentity who has no personality, he is just meat for these whores, a living phallus of the plot, in fact, there is no

Sure kid, sure......

 

[HornyyPussy]

don t say honest things or you will get banned

Yepp, that's EXACTLY how it works!

 

[Aramintha]

don t say honest things or you will get banned

So you got banned for breaking the rules and proceeded to make another account with the exact same name smh.

Sigh man this site really needs to implement a filter for new accounts to avoid this.

 

[MikeOG]

Byrn and Shelby scene was 10/10

 

[5mithers]

GrayTShirt

Chapter03:
Conversation between Njal and Bodil shows up as being between Nimue and Bodil. Need the speaker to be `nl` not `n`.

# This block of conversation should be happening between Njal and Bodil.

# Character variable sets extracted from beginning of files as examples:
# define bl = Character ("Bodil", color="#06DCFB")
# define nl = Character ("Njal", color="#CC0000")
# define n = Character ("Nimue", color="#FF0033")



# game/Chapter03part1.rpy: Line 68
    scene 3007
    n "Hey... [bl]."
    n "What do think she means by \"On display\"?"
    scene 3008
    n "What... what are they gonna do to us?"
    scene 3009
    bl "Only the goddess knows."
    bl "But the thing that worries me is... what do they have planned for him?"
    scene 3010

And as long as we are bringing up Njal, several instances of his name being hardcoded rather than pointing to his character variable. Including a misspelling in Chapter04.

Chapter03part1.rpy:    bl "Njal!"
Chapter03part1.rpy:    bl "Shut the fuck up, Njal!"

chapter04.rpy:    bl "Njal!"
chapter04.rpy:    bl "Njal..."
chapter04.rpy:    bl "And Njall... I advise that you would do well to not repeat such stories."

Chapter04:
Unprintable characters in the code base.

game/chapter04.rpy: Line 8683

 nl "If the men suspect this recruit is somehow related to that �mythical� madman..."

Results in the dreaded "empy box" for unprintable characters during the dialog:

 

[hulogh13]

always a pleasure to see a new update from you GrayTShirt i'd love to see the round bellies(pregnant) of the main cast(Hilda/Syke/Fiona/Rhona) one day even if it's not your thing or not planned yet

 

[Zolkane]

Holy shit. Its my favorite game out there. Superior writing, you feel every character hsbe his own personnality and with deep story and vaste world. Side character are epic while MC is awesome and a incoming bomb hes gonna be.
The futa are all sexy and epic. Female are as sexy and his family...cant wait for more bonding.
Everything is good. More then good. Great job as always Gray

 

[The Pointman]

kinetic novel so that means there are zero choices right.

 

[GrayTShirt]

GrayTShirt

Chapter03:
Conversation between Njal and Bodil shows up as being between Nimue and Bodil. Need the speaker to be `nl` not `n`.

# This block of conversation should be happening between Njal and Bodil.

# Character variable sets extracted from beginning of files as examples:
# define bl = Character ("Bodil", color="#06DCFB")
# define nl = Character ("Njal", color="#CC0000")
# define n = Character ("Nimue", color="#FF0033")



# game/Chapter03part1.rpy: Line 68
    scene 3007
    n "Hey... [bl]."
    n "What do think she means by \"On display\"?"
    scene 3008
    n "What... what are they gonna do to us?"
    scene 3009
    bl "Only the goddess knows."
    bl "But the thing that worries me is... what do they have planned for him?"
    scene 3010

And as long as we are bringing up Njal, several instancs of his name being hardcoded rather than pointing to his character variable. Including a misspelling in Chapter04.

Chapter03part1.rpy:    bl "Njal!"
Chapter03part1.rpy:    bl "Shut the fuck up, Njal!"

chapter04.rpy:    bl "Njal!"
chapter04.rpy:    bl "Njal..."
chapter04.rpy:    bl "And Njall... I advise that you would do well to not repeat such stories."

Chapter04:
Unprintable characters in the codebase.

game/chapter04.rpy: Line 8683

 nl "If the men suspect this recruit is somehow related to that �mythical� madman..."

Results in the dreaded "empy box" for unprintable characters during the dialog:
View attachment 3841480

Thank you for finding these! I must have missed them in a rush to get that update out. (It's always a rush though, no excuses for me.)
I've fixed these mistakes, but they won't be published until next update. The whole file size is 1.6gb, didn't want to reupload it and make everyone re-download it. (I don't know how to make update-only... updates, sorry.)
Thank you again!

 

[GrayTShirt]

kinetic novel so that means there are zero choices right.

Correct, but in this update I did include a story-altering choice that will affect MC for the rest of the game. But as a whole, yes, it's a kinetic novel.

 

[The Pointman]

Correct, but in this update I did include a story-altering choice that will affect MC for the rest of the game. But as a whole, yes, it's a kinetic novel.

So the game has just one choice and that is it no routes no choosing nothing.

 

[GrayTShirt]

always a pleasure to see a new update from you GrayTShirt i'd love to see the round bellies(pregnant) of the main cast(Hilda/Syke/Fiona/Rhona) one day even if it's not your thing or not planned yet

Well, Fiona and Rhona won't be pregnant just based on their characters. Hilda is pretty much done with kids, she already has her hands full with the two she has! And Skye, well, who knows what the future holds. (Far, far, far, distant future...) I may do like a one-off pin up of them pregnant, we'll see.

 

[GrayTShirt]

So the game has just one choice and that is it no routes no choosing nothing.

That's right. I wanted to make a straight forward story, more "written novel" and less "game".

 

[GrayTShirt]

Byrn and Shelby scene was 10/10

It took a while to get the scene done right. When it comes to Hilda, Fiona, or Bryn I try not to compromise, and take my time with htme.