Ren'Py Abandoned Innocent [v0.3.1] [SushiGames]

[hunk66]

interesting

 

[V&M]

Looking forward to scenes with the hot Mother.

 

[Koi_]

idk how to access the new content its all the same as 1.5 and dont see any changes.

 

[eades]

i dont know where thouse ,,10 new events,, are, but clearly not in this version, it's the same old one, dont ever bother download it

 

[ron teague]

a little to grindy and no way to check stats

 

[Asuna.]

Old save, I tried changing it on the computer but she still calls me that.

Mind sharing your save? That shouldn't happen, at least it does not happen to me when I start a new game.

Nothing new

eades Koi_

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After the matter, with feedback from the community I too noticed it not to be straightforward. It will be simplified. Sorry for that

Yes, it seems whatever relationship you put in for Yuri also applies to Asuna even after using the relationship changer in the new version.
It seems Sakura is also calling me big cousin, even after relationship changes.

Mind sharing your save? I tested it with a new save and everything went fine. The relationship-changer is intended both for freedom, but also to use if there is an error and since it doesn't work for you, it has to get fixed.

 

[Daruko01]

I just gave it a try, I'm into it, the girls are cute and have nice designs, the red lips on the MC tho look kinda weird tbh. I'll keep an eye on this game with great interest. Some improvements that the dev could make would be to add an event tracker, to see what events are available for which characters, and maybe skip adding animations for non-h events? And then a replay gallery when the game will have a decent amount of h-content. Also, maybe add a "Stats" button to a corner of the screen rather than having to go the phone to see the stats, it may seem small but I think that it would be a QOL improvement. Keep it up, I hope that you'll go far with this project.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

a little to grindy and no way to check stats

I almost downloaded until I saw grindy. Thanks for saving me.

 

[Asuna.]

I just gave it a try, I'm into it, the girls are cute and have nice designs, the red lips on the MC tho look kinda weird tbh. I'll keep an eye on this game with great interest. Some improvements that the dev could make would be to add an event tracker, to see what events are available for which characters, and maybe skip adding animations for non-h events? And then a replay gallery when the game will have a decent amount of h-content. Also, maybe add a "Stats" button to a corner of the screen rather than having to go the phone to see the stats, it may seem small but I think that it would be a QOL improvement. Keep it up, I hope that you'll go far with this project.

Thank you very much for the input! The event-tracker & "Stats" button will be added. The red lips on the MC look slightly pink on my display, but you are not the first one to point out that issue. Thus, I'll try to to get the colors right on a color-accurate display, especially if my 'slightly pink' looks 'reddish' to others

I almost downloaded until I saw grindy. Thanks for saving me.

For all old events, it's stats based but 50% less grindy than my initial release 8 weeks ago. All new Hitomi events (v0.2) are based on if you've seen it or not. Thus, no grinding. I want all the older events also to be like that. Back then, I didn't know how to do it but now I do (I didn't even know how to code back then either ). It'll be without grind then

I hope that then you'll be able to enjoy it ^^

 

[Daruko01]

Thank you very much for the input! The event-tracker & "Stats" button will be added. The red lips on the MC look slightly pink on my display, but you are not the first one to point out that issue. Thus, I'll try to to get the colors right on a color-accurate display, especially if my 'slightly pink' looks 'reddish' to others

Honestly I think making it a colour closer to skin colour would be fitting for the MC, to make it look less feminine. Or maybe just remove the lip colour completely? I think that these more anime-like models kinda suck when applying lip colour on a male model. Well just experiment and see what you think looks best.

Oh and one last suggestion, at the end of an event, just add a line to say if we gained or lost affection points, like "Affection with mom +5" or something like that. It can be a drag to have to check out the Stats screen everytime, and sometimes it's also hard to know if an event actually gave you points or not, or if you've reached the maximum amount of points you can get for an event.

 

[Asuna.]

Honestly I think making it a colour closer to skin colour would be fitting for the MC, to make it look less feminine. Or maybe just remove the lip colour completely? I think that these more anime-like models kinda suck when applying lip colour on a male model. Well just experiment and see what you think looks best.

Oh and one last suggestion, at the end of an event, just add a line to say if we gained or lost affection points, like "Affection with mom +5" or something like that. It can be a drag to have to check out the Stats screen everytime, and sometimes it's also hard to know if an event actually gave you points or not, or if you've reached the maximum amount of points you can get for an event.

Thank you! I'll experiment with it.

In regards to the points, it seems to be drag and in dire need for a change. A different approach is used for all new events after Hitomi visits you during midnight. All new Hitomi-events are based on 'seen' or 'not seen.' It was quite the mile-stone for me to get that working properly, as both event-tracking and gallery's require the same system.

8 weeks ago I knew literally nothing about coding nor story-writing, especially in a foreign language. So, I started studying it and now I am slowly learning and adapting with much thanks to all the feedback I've received. I'm happy with the progress, but there is much more to do, so I'll do just that.

 

[Daruko01]

Thank you! I'll experiment with it.

In regards to the points, it seems to be drag and in dire need for a change. A different approach is used for all new events after Hitomi visits you during midnight. All new Hitomi-events are based on 'seen' or 'not seen.' It was quite the mile-stone for me to get that working properly, as both event-tracking and gallery's require the same system.

8 weeks ago I knew literally nothing about coding nor story-writing, especially in a foreign language. So, I started studying it and now I am slowly learning and adapting with much thanks to all the feedback I've received. I'm happy with the progress, but there is much more to do, so I'll do just that.

Daaamn for someone who's 8 weeks in, you've got a pretty solid base in this game. The structure of this game is a lot better than other games I've seen from people who've been learning renpy for longer. Keep it up, you're on the right path.

 

[fulcrum]

In regards to the points, it seems to be drag and in dire need for a change. A different approach is used for all new events after Hitomi visits you during midnight. All new Hitomi-events are based on 'seen' or 'not seen.' It was quite the mile-stone for me to get that working properly, as both event-tracking and gallery's require the same system.

carefull to keep the events apart, so theres a global save state for the gallery and the current playthrough one. ive seen single savegame games that fuck that up hard.

 

[Asuna.]

carefull to keep the events apart, so theres a global save state for the gallery and the current playthrough one. ive seen single savegame games that fuck that up hard.

Thank you for the reminder! I'll test with older saves too. I will only release that feature when it works properly to prevent causing more issue's. Thanks again!

 

[Hornyfukka]

Cannot access new content. taken all girls shopping and to beach, all girls love very high, seen cousins pussy and had fun with aunt in kitchen. Phone says visit mom at work but done that. What am I missing?

View attachment 40-6-LT1.save

 

[Trollolol]

Mind sharing your save? I tested it with a new save and everything went fine. The relationship-changer is intended both for freedom, but also to use if there is an error and since it doesn't work for you, it has to get fixed.

Its fine I also just created a new save and started it over, only took about 15 minutes of grinding holding fast skip to catch up to the end of last patches content, so it wasn't too bad. New Hitomi content couldn't trigger on an old save as well despite being far beyond requirements to trigger the event. New game fixed everything though.

 

[Asuna.]

Cannot access new content. taken all girls shopping and to beach, all girls love very high, seen cousins pussy and had fun with aunt in kitchen. Phone says visit mom at work but done that. What am I missing?
View attachment 620834

Original save-file.

Its fine I also just created a new save and started it over, only took about 15 minutes of grinding holding fast skip to catch up to the end of last patches content, so it wasn't too bad. New Hitomi content couldn't trigger on an old save as well despite being far beyond requirements to trigger the event. New game fixed everything though.

Thanks to you I also found out why the old save didn't trigger the new event. Thank you for reporting. Sorry for the inconvenience.

 

[fulcrum]

cousin is sister, shower scene

 

[Asuna.]

cousin is sister, shower scene

The reason for why she is called sister is because during the intro, Yuri asked the MC to call her little sister instead of cousin. Sometimes the MC messes up, but Yuri makes a point out of it then.

Also, after sleeping in the bedroom, you can progress to the new content.

Attached is your save-file.

 

[Kellan]

Mind sharing your save? That shouldn't happen, at least it does not happen to me when I start a new game.

eades Koi_

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After the matter, with feedback from the community I too noticed it not to be straightforward. It will be simplified. Sorry for that

Mind sharing your save? I tested it with a new save and everything went fine. The relationship-changer is intended both for freedom, but also to use if there is an error and since it doesn't work for you, it has to get fixed.