Kontralta

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Hey there. I'm the English proofreader for the game. That phrase gave me a small pause when I first read it, but it did make sense to me. It could have been phrased better, perhaps, but I felt that the line fit Jade's character well. Keep in mind that Jade was under pressure to come up with a response, very quickly. Also, while she is a very smart person, she didn't get to finish her primary education, so on a few occasions, I've left some imperfections in her dialogue to reflect that. It wouldn't feel natural if Jade spoke like an English professor, when she was pulled out of school at 16.

I ran the line by one of my old English professors this morning, and she quite liked it. She offered a couple of possible alternatives, including one of yours, but she agreed that the current line works, based on Jade's character. I intend to go over the full script again, once the game is completed, to clean things up. Since I work off of a script file, without being able to see the renders, several mistakes get through, due to lack of visual context clues. The game is still in development, but I intend to give the dialogue a very fine polish when it's ready for release.
Just wondering, did the professor know it was a futanari porn game?
 

johnmnf692

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In short - yes.

But don't worry, if you don't like this kind of content, you won't lose anything. Even though I have big plans for Sam, his girlfriend will be like an integral part of his path.
How are we not losing anything if we can't see scenes with Sam's GF? That certainly seems like losing something to me.
 

LordWanze

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I like this story, but am I the only one that can't stand Ivy and wants the option to ruin her scheming and reveal all her planning behind Mia's back so it all blows up in her face?
No, I hope as well to have the option to get rid of her when we'll finally make the sister cake happen.
Can't stand manipulative people in general but Ivy especially rubs me the wrong way with Jade being her wonderfully character she is.
 

Knight_of_the_lance

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No, I hope as well to have the option to get rid of her when we'll finally make the sister cake happen.
Can't stand manipulative people in general but Ivy especially rubs me the wrong way with Jade being her wonderfully character she is.
Jokes on you she is into that shit.

Seriously while I agree that Ivy is manipulative, she is clearly pushing for Jade to rekindle with her sister. She may not do it in the most upstanding way, but she is doing it. If she is as intelligent as she seems to be she knows that there will be consequences to her actions. She may be a cuckquean or have wet dreams about being the victime of NTR or something. I don't really hate her, I am more curious about her emotional motives. Is she some kind of twisted good person or doing it for some selfish reason. She may also be into emotional BDSM. I was curious about Eve when she was first introduced and I must say I was pleasantly surprised. I am curious about Ivy's deep motivation here. There is definitely more to her.
 

shamtiiomi

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ivy knosw or dont that jade is a futa seems to be the heypart in the game she is playing,i dont think someone with normal or natural behaviour will love to be ntred by the futa sister of her lover,or in the ohter case scenario she knows and have afetish to the same thing,....but at the end isnt matter jade will destroy both pussys ,her sister and lover's sisters so.....kink or not on theend is the same
 
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