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First preview of chapter 9.
Here's the first preview after the PC update.
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First preview of chapter 9.
Here's the first preview after the PC update.
That was a positive surprise so far. Quite like the protagonist; can be domme without the usual "internet edgelord" personality. Sometimes it's a bit too direct for me - the better story arcs are imo the ones that take a bit of time. Though admittedly it does help keeping the pace up, and that in turns keeps things varied and interesting.
... I also kinda like the visuals (is it virt-a-mate?), in a way. DAZ tends to look so plastic-artificial, which is fine if it's a deliberate style you're going for, but when it's just the same generic thing all the time it starts feeling a bit meh. Some scenes do have somewhat annoying hair clipping or something though; not usually the sorta thing I'd expect myself to notice but when it keeps blinking in and out of existence during dialogue that is a bit much ^^#
Writing is unfortunately quite clunky. Obviously that's not going to change 8 chapters into the story, and it's not like it's intolerable. But for me probably the main area that could be improved, hypothetically.
Not sure I care too much about the main plot, but I do look forward to seeing more of the characters and what they get up to
... I also kinda like the visuals (is it virt-a-mate?), in a way. DAZ tends to look so plastic-artificial, which is fine if it's a deliberate style you're going for, but when it's just the same generic thing all the time it starts feeling a bit meh. Some scenes do have somewhat annoying hair clipping or something though; not usually the sorta thing I'd expect myself to notice but when it keeps blinking in and out of existence during dialogue that is a bit much ^^#
Writing is unfortunately quite clunky. Obviously that's not going to change 8 chapters into the story, and it's not like it's intolerable. But for me probably the main area that could be improved, hypothetically.
Not sure I care too much about the main plot, but I do look forward to seeing more of the characters and what they get up to
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I like that very much!
What I really hope though is that the dev keeps all the resources on developing the story further and not starting to rework the older chapters.
It is amazing what he is pumping out and I very much appreciate improvements for the following chapters. But I really think new content should be the Focus.
Very much looking forward for ch. 9. This is a great story and I also very much like the ocasional cameos of Actual Roommates (another great VN with a very hard workind dev btw).
Cheers!
Yeah, like she's written by someone who learned it from practice rather than Pornhub.
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I could be wrong but I think Kind Nightmares is ESL and their first language is Russian. And if they are then the slightly clunky is very forgivable, their writing is better than a lot of people who’s first language is English.
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I adjusted the file for myself, if anyone wants to use it. Should read a little better, but I only touched the sentences where I was sure I didn't change the meaning.
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Nov 26, 2024 03:36 am I'm sure no one will see. Sike.
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Nov 29, 2024 05:23 am Weekly report.
Renders for most of the script are ready. There are about 3(ish) scenes left to do. After that it's the easiest part for me. I'll try to get everything finished before the Christmas holidays so that there will be a public release on New Year's Eve. This is NOT a promise, I'm just saying I'll try to stay within that time frame.
I'm trying something new with this chapter and I VERY much hope you like it, because it hasn't happened before for technical reasons. But right now, I just don't see the point in not using it. Maybe for you, this will be a New Year's gift from me for all the support you've given me this year!
Also a little spoiler, there will be 5 big sex scenes and one small one in this chapter. Don't worry, I didn't sacrifice the plot for them.
Stay safe and may your Nightmares be Kind!
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I prefer a little Ivy personally or stella
Jokes aside, is this Viv's sister?!
No, these are my first steps in mastering Daz. This character has nothing to do with IU.
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Mate,you are doing an amazing job at mastering! This render looks amazing!
But please please pinky promise that you won't rework IU until the story is finished
You can use all your mastery for IU 2
Thanks!Mate,you are doing an amazing job at mastering! This render looks amazing!
But please please pinky promise that you won't rework IU until the story is finished
You can use all your mastery for IU 2
I'm not gonna do anything with Instinct until I finish the game. Pinky promise.
Also the game will stay on the same engine anyway. At most, I'll just redo the renders for the first chapters with the knowledge and capabilities I now have.(If I'm not too lazy
).Be lazy, be happyThanks!
I'm not gonna do anything with Instinct until I finish the game. Pinky promise.
Also the game will stay on the same engine anyway. At most, I'll just redo the renders for the first chapters with the knowledge and capabilities I now have.(If I'm not too lazy
Good to know that IU will stay on this engine. I personally would love it if you didn't switch to daz, since I can't stand the way the faces look in that with their dead eyes.Thanks!
I'm not gonna do anything with Instinct until I finish the game. Pinky promise.
Also the game will stay on the same engine anyway. At most, I'll just redo the renders for the first chapters with the knowledge and capabilities I now have.(If I'm not too lazy
But as far as I know Daz is the only engine for these things where you can publish on steam and I don't begrudge any dev going for the extra incomestream in a small industry like this.