Eh, just wasn't really good honestly. MC is a pretty lazy pathetic wimp. Let's everyone boss him around and is just weak and annoying. I don't know where these decisions/choices are supposed to be, but there is absolutely none. It's a kinetic novel. You just go along for the ride without a say in anything, and listen to everyone belittle the MC and push him around.
All dialogue feels like it is the same person just talking to themselves. No one has any character or uniqueness. It's all robotic and they all sound like the same person. As well, it's written badly to the point that inner thoughts, regular dialogue, and narration are all written the same way. So it gets confusing on what is what. Just jumps around way too much from scene to scene, that you get lost and confused as it rushes along.
Overall, needs a lot of work (and compression). It's just a sort of clustered mess. Either way, best of luck with this and thanks.