VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.12.3] [Nyx]

[ptahn]

I played this game when it first came out, but did not play it again until this update. There are aspects of the story I like, for example being allowed to chose which girls become LI's and those that I don't, like having to stay friends with Zach. Perhaps this has been discussed at length but The Erynn story line is just weak from start to finish. She could have talked to MC after the incident as children. It's not like he left town the day after it happened. She stayed friends with Ethan for a long time even though he was a jerk. I really don't believe that an old sex tape is going to have any more impact on her becoming a teacher than her being a model that had done some at least close to nude photos (remember Melissa said that Erynn had done photos that were more revealing than the transparent bikini.) Certainly, if it became known that she worked as an escort, her abilitiy to become a teacher would be hampered by more than the sex tape. She doesn't appear famous enough for the memory of a sex tape to last long.

As I said, I was kind of enjoying the game despite the flaws. The final update was very disappointing. MC is so worried about what Ethan might do to Erynn that he convinces her to move in with her mom. When he gets back from training game, he doesn't check to see if she is okay. At the modelling show, Ethan and his goons attack MC. MC leaves knowing that Erynn is there and Ethan is there with his goons. Why wouldn't he stay there to make sure Erynn was safe?

Has there ever been a VN where MC has gotten beaten up so often? I do hope that we are not forced to reconcile with Zach in the future.

I'm sorry if I'm just repeating what has already been addressed.

 

[mangutot]

I'm on Mac so i should have downloaded the 0.8 update first, since there isn't a complete 0.9 version for mac yet, so is there a file for the 0.8 update?

 

[MrD812]

The shit that bad men do to women. Makes me sick and furious.

It's not uncommon and is why their are so many dead-set in helping others with no compensation at all.
First victim we helped was actually male.
Some would be shocked to know, it happens to men and as much never reported.

 

[MrD812]

so if you learned to fight to turn your bully into a sissification process... i think you deserved getting bullied!
i to have been involved with models and that was never a problem!

guess what if you show up at their work place and compliment all the creeps she told you about with a strong hand shake never turning your eyes away but staring them right into them they never have issues again... surprise surprise!

If you are as impressive as you claimed before thats never an issue nobody is willing to get hurt over a pussy!

ofc i also taught them how to behave(the girl i mean), girls will flirt and play seduction games to get ahead and when the pendulum comes swinging back they get surprised... weird part, is that they tell you who is doing whom to get ahead! do not wish to victim blame here but... we lost a few great movies/photo sessions and et all because idiotic producers wanted to get their dicks wet and no talent whores want the jobs... but when shit hits the fence its always the same bullshit!

so i teach my friends and girlfriends if you do not want the harassment do net get under them in the bed!
only idiots will pursue a woman who rejects them and have tall and strong boyfriends!

its far worse in some types of offices were i had to break a dudes car window to get the message across
because he was dumber then the rock that broke his windshield!

So i understand what you mean but... those cunt photographers and producers behave like that because a significant amount of women subject themselves to it and they get their vision twisted that all women behave the same way... and they actually think they are all that and not because they got the moneis and the jobs!

I played this game when it first came out, but did not play it again until this update. There are aspects of the story I like, for example being allowed to chose which girls become LI's and those that I don't, like having to stay friends with Zach. Perhaps this has been discussed at length but The Erynn story line is just weak from start to finish. She could have talked to MC after the incident as children. It's not like he left town the day after it happened. She stayed friends with Ethan for a long time even though he was a jerk. I really don't believe that an old sex tape is going to have any more impact on her becoming a teacher than her being a model that had done some at least close to nude photos (remember Melissa said that Erynn had done photos that were more revealing than the transparent bikini.) Certainly, if it became known that she worked as an escort, her abilitiy to become a teacher would be hampered by more than the sex tape. She doesn't appear famous enough for the memory of a sex tape to last long.

As I said, I was kind of enjoying the game despite the flaws. The final update was very disappointing. MC is so worried about what Ethan might do to Erynn that he convinces her to move in with her mom. When he gets back from training game, he doesn't check to see if she is okay. At the modelling show, Ethan and his goons attack MC. MC leaves knowing than Erynn is there and Ethan is there with his goons. Why wouldn't he stay there to make sure Erynn was safe?

Has there ever been a VN where MC has gotten beaten up so often? I do hope that we are not forced to reconcile with Zach in the future.

I'm sorry if I'm just repeating what has already been addressed.

I Hear ya, so many things that are just not..... well, i'll stop there but yeah it's bad in many respects.

 

[RoadWulf]

Honestly I look at the Layla/Elena/Val thing and I keep thinking of that song by Ayron Jones "Hot Friends".

"Oo baby you got hot friends
And I want em in a bad bad way, but
I don't see it as a problem....
Hot friends should not go to waste."

 

[Alpha Beta Omega]

for some reason MS Defender is flagging this game's multi mod is as Trojan!!

plz help.

Just wanted to post this for everyone when & if anyone wanna use the multi mod.

 

[hungneet]

For anyone who wondering, if you choose both layla and alexis, they will dump you in ep8

 

[Adry Lemon]

for some reason MS Defender is flagging this game's multi mod is as Trojan!!

plz help.

Just wanted to post this for everyone when & if anyone wanna use the multi mod.

Yeah, it's a false positive though, Windows Defender has done the same shit before.

 

[Nikki Klein]

It seems that all links in OP are not really v0.9.1 (when i checked the scripts they are identical to v0.9)

Excuse me, what exactly are the bugfixes in the patch v0.9.1?

Are they really so significant?

 

[Dalish]

If I remember correctly, he watches as this guy (the leader of a bullying group of shits) destroys some other kids at the school. And after watching it happen and trying to prevent it, you get into a fight with the bully.

Without getting TOO off-topic here...
The feeling that you get when you see what Ethan is doing... The frustration you feel when Zach betrays the MC... That makes you want to punch him into a bloody mess. Valeria's kick to the groin was absolutely perfectly timed!

So far only did alexis route on the update, seems like I need to do val's also cause I want to see that.

 

[ZagorTeNay]

Well. Valeria is definitely rising through the ranks. Nikki is still N1 though, MC&her have best chemistry together.
Overall good update: except for scene with Ethan/Zach. The whole thing made them look like a bunch of 10 year olds. I'm guessing relationship with him play into at some point ( at bringing him down), but it still could have been done more convincingly.

 

[Dalish]

Yeah just finished the Val run didnt see any Zach ball kick. I did notice that The Val path vs alexis path I got jumped by many dudes vs just being punched only by zach but that was about it. It's prob because on the val path I didnt bother so save Eryn when she got slapped so I never hit Ethan? I can recall Iris's dad stepping in to save you from the ass beating also. I might have missed something.

 

[NewTricks]

For anyone who wondering, if you choose both layla and alexis, they will dump you in ep8

The walkthrough warns you about that several times. You gotta choose and choose wisely.

 

[NewTricks]

This was my favorite update... so much Cara (my treasure). So why am I so fucking pissed off? The ending was just mean. Until the next update, I'm just going to have to embrace the fact that

Spoiler: she was dead as dust and her heart was bust

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That ending assassinated my boner.

 

[Dalish]

This was my favorite update... so much Cara (my treasure). So why am I so fucking pissed off? The ending was just mean. Until the next update, I'm just going to have to embrace the fact that

Spoiler: she was dead as dust and her heart was bust

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That ending assassinated my boner.

I mean.. I didn't save her when I just did Val's path but from what Ethan said sounds like he raped her for sure. I deff need to do the (almost) step-sisters path as well to see what you mean bout the cara bit.

 

[ptahn]

This was my favorite update... so much Cara (my treasure). So why am I so fucking pissed off? The ending was just mean. Until the next update, I'm just going to have to embrace the fact that

Spoiler: she was dead as dust and her heart was bust

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That ending assassinated my boner.

I don't know, I kind of had the opinion that just her phone is in the dumpster and that MC is still going to have to save her. I pay attention to what content sells and doesn't sell. This developer has a decent number of patrons and I believe that the type of player that would tend to support this game is also the type of player that would not like the rape or killing of an LI. AL pulled off the killing off the killing of an LI, but it was original. It's no longer original and comes off as stealing DPC's idea. Another game that had been doing okay tried it and the game was dead a few months later. SS was mentioned earlier in someone's post. That game had an unexpected bad ending added to the game where an LI was raped and murdered. The content was avoidable (although initially it was hard to do so), the discussion thread blew up and the developer told me that he was getting actual death threats. Hopefully this developer makes wiser decisions regarding Erynn's fate.

 

[Dalish]

I don't know, I kind of had the opinion that just her phone is in the dumpster and that MC is still going to have to save her. I pay attention to what content sells and doesn't sell. This developer has a decent number of patrons and I believe that the type of player that would tend to support this game is also the type of player that would not like the rape or killing of an LI. AL pulled off the killing off the killing of an LI, but it was original. It's no longer original and comes off as stealing DPC's idea. Another game that had been doing okay tried it and the game was dead a few months later. SS was mentioned earlier in someone's post. That game had an unexpected bad ending added to the game where an LI was raped and murdered. The content was avoidable (although initially it was hard to do so), the discussion thread blew up and the developer told me that he was getting actual death threats. Hopefully this developer makes wiser decisions regarding Erynn's fate.

I didnt save her during the slap scene though and after zach punched me Ethan was like "btw Erynn was a good lay you dont know what your missing " so either he's boasting or he did something and left her there. Besides I think even now if you dont try to go an Erynn path is there even any content or is it just her flirting and it going nowhere per norm. Erynn might not even be a legit option and used as a plot device at this point.

 

[Da!si]

Hi. Yeah, Windows Defender seems to don't like my Mods anymore...

But you maybe can solve that without using my complete Mod. Here a file where I set the default values, copy it into your /intertwined.../game/ folder

Thank you That worked like a charm.

 

[Canto Forte]

Eyrin as a plot device is not going anywhere. MC heartbroken over Eyrin being with Ethan is how the game started.
NOw we are literally back to that plot line, after we have been going back to it over and over:
MC leaves her flat, Ethan goes inside. MC cannot get a hold of Eyrin, Ethan is with her in a coffee shop chatting.
How many hints does a dude need before he realizes he is being played?
At this time in the game, MC is thinking to himself : what is the point?
She ends up with ethan on every path.
Make up your mind, woman! MC or Ethan! So far, purely on 1 vs 1 , Ethan has been winning big time.
Ethan treating Eyrin as a meat sleeve for his boner is panfully obvious, yet she is still thinking of resisting him.
She has this flair of getting MC into shitty situations, then shuts off on him about no reasons,
then wants to be alone, just up until her next ethan meeting.

 

[Ariostebaldo]

Unfortunately this maybe WAS such a forum. Not anymore. If I have to guess its already >90% complaining / demanding / insulting (or stupid asking something even the answer is one post before...). There is a reason why a lot of developers here "fled" from F95zone recently. Yes, this page can help to make a game popular. But it has also kinda destroyed quite some good game developments too because of bad comments.

Where do you think this games get their support from? This games ain't advertised on mainstream, most if not all their supporters come from sites like this.
I'll tell you why developers leave this site. the thing is, they start making a new game that nobody knows about and they need support, so they "advertise" their game here and interact with users until they get a good fanbase and some decent monetary support. After that, they no longer need to bother promoting the game here because the users themselves will do it for them, so it's easier to just get up and leave to the community to organically promote their work, than to deal with criticism.
That's what's happening now, even though many developers (like Nyx and DPC that were both mentioned here for example) are no longer on this site, they continue to be promoted and reach new supporters through it.
but just as famous and renowned developers leave, other new and unknown developers arrive.

That's just my opinion, I don't claim to own the truth, but I think it's natural for things to happen this way.