giorgyo777

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it would be VERY don't bad to add NTR to this story with the ability to avoid NTR. the game would immediately sparkle with other colors and give a sharpness of sensations and, of course, attracted fans of the NTR genre))) it wouldn't be so critical for those who hate NTR as it could be avoided, but it would exist for those who like this kind of genre))
 
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Ilhares

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Here's the real immersion breaking math:
So Iris was the PC's first gf and they were together for two years. He loses his virginity to Iris at the very beginning of their relationship in a flashback scene from two years in the past (yikes btw). He is single and ready to mingle in another flashback from shortly before moving in with Cara and Nikki. During the truth or dare game a few months later (or even less) he claims to have had between five and ten partners. He is 18 years old right now.
Don't even know where to begin calculating all this tbh.
Fortunately Warscared took up the banner on that, though I didn't recognize a couple names he used (I recall no Diana in my playthrough), but I guess this didn't really affect my immersion as it did yours because this actually sounded a lot like my youth, minus being the beefcake sportsy guy (I never was). My first was at 16, she was 19. Over the next 2-3 years I had numerous flings, and a couple longer-lasting involvements. None with soon-to-be-sisters or long-lost childhood friends, though. And I'm fairly confident that none of the older women were ever school teachers. I'm not saying that there were no attractive teachers when I was young, but they didn't appear in my schools. You'd get a Rosie O'Donnel every time rather than a Rose McGowan.

At my present age, I'd have to sit down with a pen and notebook and spend some time really thinking back to try and gauge an accurate number and get them in he right order, but MC's number range is perfectly sensible, at least when contrasted against my pre-social media/cellphone era of schooling - and I'm quite certain that there were other guys (and a few girls) who put my count to shame.

Honestly the PC being an 18yo kid is the first and biggest hurdle for immersion imo. Him being so young doesn't add anything to the story, unless the flashback scene where he's underage is specifically something people want to fap to. I don't get why he has to be a tattooed hunk giving off daddy vibes and a kid who has his mother sign school documents for him at the same time.
The PC is obviously supposed to be attractive, because he always gets the girl without even trying. But realistically him being a highschool kid would be pretty unattractive for like half the cast of characters.
I'll grant you the point on the super-tattoo factor here, that is really unusual, but I was 18 the first month of my senior year, so while I could get away with a fair bit, I still had the need for parental signature on a number of forms. I had a falling out with my old man at one point in the year and faked the signature, which admissions wouldn't accept so they made me visit the principal. "Did you forge this signature?" "Yes, I did." "Why?" "The source of my problems was at home, couldn't exactly ask him to sign." "Understood. Hope your day gets better, tell admissions I said to accept the form." "Thank you."

If I'd been even half as good looking as the MC I never would have had time to be in class, I'd have been drowning in the women throwing themselves at me. Rotten SOB doesn't even have to work for it. I hate that. ;)
 
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Ilhares

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There isn't NTR in this visual novel. There's not even incest so I wouldn't worry about that.
Which is such a shame. I mean, it doesn't have to be part of the story, but why make Emily so damned appealing? Couldn't he have made somebody less nice looking the mother figure? I wanna tap that woman.
 

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Which is such a shame. I mean, it doesn't have to be part of the story, but why make Emily so damned appealing? Couldn't he have made somebody less nice looking the mother figure? I wanna tap that woman.
emily is the blonde woman who lives with MC
the hot one you wanna bang is erynn's mom, her name is melissa :BootyTime:
 
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Which is such a shame. I mean, it doesn't have to be part of the story, but why make Emily so damned appealing? Couldn't he have made somebody less nice looking the mother figure? I wanna tap that woman.
We all want to bang Emily. She has one of the best, if not the best, models in the game, but she's a dream that cannot be. Have been looking for another AVN that uses Emily's model but there hasn't been any luck. The closest I saw was Ashley from Being a DIK and... she definitely doesn't appeal to me. Ash doesn't have enough boobs and ass, especially ass haha.
 
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We all want to bang Emily. She has one of the best, if not the best, models in the game, but she's a dream that cannot be. Have been looking for another AVN that uses Emily's model but there hasn't been any luck. The closest I saw was Ashley from Being a DIK and... she definitely doesn't appeal to me. Ash doesn't have enough boobs and ass, especially ass haha.
Maybe check PhillyGames' VNs if you haven't already, I'm not good to identify if he uses Emily's model, but clearly Alexis is Carla in Depraved Awakening (his first VN). It's a good game but I prefer his latest one City of Broken Dreamers. Highly recommend it just for the cyberpunk feel if that's your thing.
 

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break my heart, but I can't stop myself from going that route, since I'm an
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these days...but it sucks ass that the only way is by breaking
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since she is pretty cool as well.


...but hey, if everything goes to shit I'll still have my Buff Josy and OG blind Alexis runs ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
 

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There isn't NTR in this visual novel. There's not even incest so I wouldn't worry about that.
actually it's a pity that there is no NTR, even avoidable, because at the end of chapter 9, itan mentions that he is ready to take advantage of one of the MC's girlfriends, namely the blowjob from Alexis (who is in a relationship with the MC) so that Erin would not be in danger, it would be VERY COOL if the developer continued this thread and added NTR content to it. I'm even willing to buy the most expensive patronage on Patreon to order these renders!)
 

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break my heart, but I can't stop myself from going that route, since I'm an
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these days...but it sucks ass that the only way is by breaking
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since she is pretty cool as well.


...but hey, if everything goes to shit I'll still have my Buff Josy and OG blind Alexis runs ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
I like Layla. But I like Elena too.

I am hoping that the threesomes announced several pages back will happen with Layla and Elena.

I am also curious about the future Elena path.
 

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Okay, okay. Let's borrow the developers own words in English:
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On a different point, in case I missed it somewhere: Layla, Alexis, and their mother. Why is it Principal Moore, Layla Moore, but Alexis Monroe?
Its just a guess but according some vivid minds it could happen that Layla and Alexis are half sisters and that the current husband of Principal Moore is the real father of MC and Layla. Since the Dev already stated there will be no incest in game it could work out this way since there is currently no real sexual encounter between MC and Layla but with Alexis possible....But the Dev has many possibillities for surprising twists implemented in game...could also turn ozt differently...
 

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Okay, okay. Let's borrow the developers own words in English:
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On a different point, in case I missed it somewhere: Layla, Alexis, and their mother. Why is it Principal Moore, Layla Moore, but Alexis Monroe?
Either it's poor proofreading or she has a different dad?

Hey, Just noticed that Monroe and Moreno are anagrams of each other
 

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Either it's poor proofreading or she has a different dad?

Hey, Just noticed that Monroe and Moreno are anagrams of each other
I hope I am not being rude by joining this conversation.

Your observations make sense.

Lexie, Layla are possibly half-sisters with different dads.
 

nyrek

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Okay, okay. Let's borrow the developers own words in English:
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On a different point, in case I missed it somewhere: Layla, Alexis, and their mother. Why is it Principal Moore, Layla Moore, but Alexis Monroe?
pretty sure I remember lexi being monroe as well
but if that's correct, that brings us to one of those badik questions (with sage and tybalt being burke) - how blissfully stupid is the MC? if adriana and layla are moore and lexi is monroe and you're dating her... at least ask?
 
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