VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13.1] [Nyx]

[Deleted member 5644832]

Sorry if this is too long don't got alot of time so tried to give you a summary reply quickly as she is one of my all time favorite AVN stories and characters. Because of that I probably didn't properly edit them down to shorter points. I also probably missed a few piece's here and there due to me rushing or forgetting things..

MC confesses to her Ethan shows everyone else something on the phone they laugh at so MC thinks they were laughing at them. After getting in trouble at school he is sent away to live with his dad. Erynn sends him letters but never reads them because of the miss understanding.

Fast forward to when he comes back to town he tries his best to ignore Erynn because he is afraid of how ackward it would be. Erynn is the one that forces them to reconnect and they start to act like old childhood friends again from time time. She even acts like a second mother at times giving him rides to school etc.

During one of their hangouts together Erynn uses his phone to call Alexis. She then finds out Alexis lied and tried to keep the MC to herself despite knowing how Erynn always loved the MC. I might be forgetting on scene in between. But They make plans to talk or hangout she breaks those plans. MC comes across her hanging out with Ethan she notices and runs after him. They clear up the misunderstanding that cause the MC to leave after the MC yells at her.

MC comes across her again with Ethan later but he is being violent towards her. After saving her she tells the MC how Ethan pretended to be nice and friendly for a time after he left then when she refused to go out with him time and time again he went back to being the old Ethan. Ethan somehow records Erynn having sex with her boyfriend at the time blackmails her to go to prom with him. Erynn starts to model when she goes to college because of Ethans dad he becomes her agent and blackmails her again and starts to make do escort jobs tho none of them involved having sex yet.

After all this basically the rest of the scenes with her are about how the MC and get start to get closer to one another slowly. The MC does run into someone her trust in the middle of this to try to find away to help her. He also goes to and takes place in a photoshoot with her as after Ethan attacked her she starts to feel scared.

I would like to point out something that gives a little more info on her story . " MC thinks they are laughing at them" , Alexis notices that MC is sad and decides to talk with him , they end up bonding and she kisses MC . I think that part is a bit important . In present time Erynn gets mad thinking Alexis stole MC from her , knowing really well her feelings for him , but Alexis also developed such feelings when they were kids and she even was MC first kiss.

 

[Dessolos]

I would like to point out something that gives a little more info on her story . " MC thinks they are laughing at them" , Alexis notices that MC is sad and decides to talk with him , they end up bonding and she kisses MC . I think that part is a bit important . In present time Erynn gets mad thinking Alexis stole MC from her , knowing really well her feelings for him , but Alexis also developed such feelings when they were kids and she even was MC first kiss.

ah thank you yeah I knew that bit was important to Alexis but I always forget it does have some impact on Erynn cause that is when Alexis got feeling for him too.

 

[dolfe67]

The problem with the Erynn storyline is that there was not only meant to be a vanilla relationship route but also a corruption option with her where you joined forces with Ethan to corrupt her and turn her into a whore but Nyx dropped that storyline and only gave the option of helping or ignoring her. Which means that Zach is automatically betraying MC by bringing him to Ethan, instead of potentially setting up an alliance. Given there won't be a corruption option for Erynn also means there won't be an NTR route either, we either won't see what happens to her if you choose not to help her or you'll help her get Ethan out of the way and her out of the escort game before she becomes a whore.

Do you have a message from the dev or is it just your feeling? I don't think a corruption route was planned, though I don't know why the thread is tagged as corruption.

 

[balazar]

When the MC questioned "do you want me there?" and Erynn said "nah i'll be ok" it did ring bells on my head, let's see what will come out of it.
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I would like to point out something that gives a little more info on her story . " MC thinks they are laughing at them" , Alexis notices that MC is sad and decides to talk with him , they end up bonding and she kisses MC . I think that part is a bit important . In present time Erynn gets mad thinking Alexis stole MC from her , knowing really well her feelings for him , but Alexis also developed such feelings when they were kids and she even was MC first kiss.

It is also possible he was Alexis first kiss as she said how sweet she thought he was and she didn't seem as popular as Erynn.

 

[Bombmaster]

So it was planned a corruption route with Zach or not, maybe this explains his character being hollow Atm.
He is just there to canon betray the reader.

I did felt lame having to choose between helping Erynn or ignore to earn just bad karma. That choice is egregious sad.
I'm all into ignoring her for some juicy development, this is where the darker Erynn path should started but nah. Vanilla ice-cream is the dev favorite.

 

[BenMeiffert]

I finally played the "Alexis Secret Path", so i could fuck Iris... But having Alexis developpe feelings for MC because of Erynn will get us to choose between Lexi and Laila, or Elena if we choose to heartbreak Laila. Some big dramas to come with the next episodes. And If MC is still with Cara or Nikki, there's a moment when all of this will come back like a boomerang...
We will know about Zack when Spring break will be finished.
When John will take Emily on a date, maybe he will see Melissa again too and we will have the answer about Erynn and Iris...
My favorite path is Laila but it's hard (almost impossible) to stay respectful... i have to make some decisions to make other girls not loving MC (Elena, Valeria, Erynn, Cara/Nikki...).
And for now, i will wait 10 months or a year to know what's next... Good luck to make the next episodes being believable with all those different girls.

 

[Tinklesan]

Who is Miguel?
Just asking 'cause i wanted to name my MC this name and saw there was another character with that name mentioned here
Does he play a big role in the game?

 

[balazar]

Who is Miguel?
Just asking 'cause i wanted to name my MC this name and saw there was another character with that name mentioned here
Does he play a big role in the game?

not a huge role he is a fellow student that has a thing for Elena.

 

[Dessolos]

Who is Miguel?
Just asking 'cause i wanted to name my MC this name and saw there was another character with that name mentioned here
Does he play a big role in the game?

honestly I cant remember off the top of my head but that just means not in many scenes if I cant recall

 

[Tinklesan]

Thank you!

 

[valbitterb]

 

[balazar]

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I am still thinking incest will be between Erynn and Iris and then they find out they are sisters afterwords

 

[SerHawkes]

All I want and care about is becoming Erynns step dad and have Melissa have another kid of ours. Simple as that. Everyone else, with the slight expection of Val, don't matter. Their trash.

 

[NewTricks]

Who is Miguel?
Just asking 'cause i wanted to name my MC this name and saw there was another character with that name mentioned here
Does he play a big role in the game?

With so many characters to keep track of it is easy to have a couple of them slip through the cracks. Miguel is best known as Zach's chum who is the reason why Valeria sat next to MC on the bus because Miggy wanted to sit closer to Elena.



Edit: I forgot that he also drew a dick on Zach's face so he ain't all bad.

Spoiler: Made him lick it too.

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[Tremonia]

I am still thinking incest will be between Erynn and Iris and then they find out they are sisters afterwords

There'll never be incest in this game. Patreon is strict in this and Nyx made it very clear she has no intentions to mess with them.

 

[dolfe67]

There'll never be incest in this game. Patreon is strict in this and Nyx made it very clear she has no intentions to mess with them.

Patreon is "strict" but there is a lot of incest games on it... with an additional patch of course (or defining relationship at the start). Though if Nyx doesn't want to add it it's her choice, but stop involving patreon as a reason.

 

[anonnyscouse]

Patreon is "strict" but there is a lot of incest games on it... with an additional patch of course (or defining relationship at the start). Though if Nyx doesn't want to add it it's her choice, but stop involving patreon as a reason.

But as all relationships are clearly defined and there is no patch for this game it's clear that any incest at this stage would breach patreon tos so it's a fair point to make.

 

[dolfe67]

But as all relationships are clearly defined and there is no patch for this game it's clear that any incest at this stage would breach patreon tos so it's a fair point to make.

What I'm saying is there'll never be incest because she doesn't want it, not because of patreon's tos. She could make a patch at any time.

 

[Tremonia]

Patreon is "strict" but there is a lot of incest games on it...

Snitch them and they'll disappear.

with an additional patch of course

If the dev distributes them on Patreon they'll shut the account.

(or defining relationship at the start)

Not allowed by Patreon. As long as no one snitches there's no problem. On Patreon you can find many sick or weird games, like the one with incest and rape of a kid. It's a gamble of the dev and clearly not our problem.

Though if Nyx doesn't want to add it it's her choice, but stop involving patreon as a reason.

Hey, don't shoot the messenger. Sure, it's her choice. But the reason for this choice is Patreon. You don't have to like it but it is what it is. BTW the problem isn't Patreon. It's Mastercard and VISA. Both companies forbid their clients to use their payment system to sell "inappropriate" products. Patreon could use another payment system but no user could pay with Mastercard and VISA anymore. You see, the problem isn't Patreon but these two companies from a country with strange backward moral standards that they have unfortunately made part of their corporate philosophy.

 

[Nurikabe]

What I'm saying is there'll never be incest because she doesn't want it, not because of patreon's tos. She could make a patch at any time.

That is an accurate statement. She does not want any incest in the game. That is the reason it is not in the game, thankfully.

It is also accurate to say that Patreon will drop any developer that puts it in their game. That is why you see unofficial patches in so many games. If you see an "official" patch and that dev is accepting payments for that game on Patreon, two things will happen: some jackass will report it; Patreon will drop them at even a hint of breach of TOS.