VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13.2] [Nyx]

[mike12013]

She loves to tease things, mess with people, she won't put incest, but keeps showing Emily topless(or more) and creating awkward situations with her son.
And she decided to tease NTR guys too, with the fake Erynn.
Emily-John also made various groups of people furious.

She's a top tier troll honestly

Zach and Ethan are caricatures of evil guys

That was my main complaint with the game tbh. I like how everything progresses, I made a comment in another thread that playing that game from the perspective of a new player offers a complete different perspective to waiting six months or whatever for an update.

Zach is deep enough to be somewhat compelling (A deeply insecure immature idiot but hides behind fake confidence, Ethan prayed on that and offered him a bunch of stuff he wanted and cause he's not that smart he fell right for it) , but Ethan is just pure evil, and that's a bit.. flat. The only motivation that's shown is he wants to fuck Erynn, nothing about having Erynn wrapped around his finger would do well for his career or making money, nothing that even slightly redeems him or offers depth, he's just an evil dude for the sake of being evil.

 

[gymnopedies]

A week has passed and no one has had the courtesy to upload the game? And they just spoil the party for everyone else with their spoilers? What bad people they are.

 

[Dessolos]

A week has passed and no one has had the courtesy to upload the game? And they just spoil the party for everyone else with their spoilers? What bad people they are.

hasn't even been a week I think only 4 or 5 days at most

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

hasn't even been a week I think only 4 or 5 days at most

It has been 3 days; it just hit the $10 tier just a few short hours ago.

 

[Dessolos]

lmfao got a disagree over saying something that is an actual fact. time to use the list

 

[valbitterb]

Emily fans or as i like to call them, "the motherfuckers".

Any daddy fuckers? We got some strapping older gentlemen in the game.

(Except for ape man Coach Mike, Mr. Coleman and the Madison Springs Old Perv .)

Zach is deep enough to be somewhat compelling (A deeply insecure immature idiot but hides behind fake confidence, Ethan prayed on that and offered him a bunch of stuff he wanted and cause he's not that smart he fell right for it) ,

Based on the latest redo scenes, it seems Nyx will try to show Zach in a way that's in line with your analysis of him.

Ethan is just pure evil,

Ethan's orgasm face looks like (and probably sounds like) an ugly baby seal having an aneurysm.

 

[miyaa1306]

Do you still have to start over every update?

 

[Dessolos]

Do you still have to start over every update?

not this update ( ch 14) but when Ch 15 you will unless Nyx comes up with another solution

 

[Jarulf]

Zach is deep enough to be somewhat compelling (A deeply insecure immature idiot but hides behind fake confidence, Ethan prayed on that and offered him a bunch of stuff he wanted and cause he's not that smart he fell right for it) , but Ethan is just pure evil, and that's a bit.. flat. The only motivation that's shown is he wants to fuck Erynn, nothing about having Erynn wrapped around his finger would do well for his career or making money, nothing that even slightly redeems him or offers depth, he's just an evil dude for the sake of being evil.

Very good points and analysis there. While I don't find Zach at all interesting, that may be more to do with how Nyx has written him. She has clearly given some thought to his character, how to write him and progress his story, but it's not really working for me. I disliked him from the start. But I was so tired at that point of the 'friend who can't be a rival', either because he is just too weird and goofy, or gay, so that may have predjudiced me a bit. He's in a lot of games. While Nyx may be trying to play with that and make him something else, or taking it to a logical conclusion, I don't think she succeeded very well.
Completely agree about Ethan. Pure evil is just boring.

Completely unrelated - I'd be fun to have a girl who is really interesting, hot and nice in one of these games who is also gay and thus will never be a LI (as long as you play as a guy). That game thread would be almost as much fun to watch.

Based on the latest redo scenes, it seems Nyx will try to show Zach in a way that's in line with your analysis of him.

That sounds interesting, maybe she isn't entirely happy with how she has presented him.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

She's a top tier troll honestly



That was my main complaint with the game tbh. I like how everything progresses, I made a comment in another thread that playing that game from the perspective of a new player offers a complete different perspective to waiting six months or whatever for an update.

Zach is deep enough to be somewhat compelling (A deeply insecure immature idiot but hides behind fake confidence, Ethan prayed on that and offered him a bunch of stuff he wanted and cause he's not that smart he fell right for it) , but Ethan is just pure evil, and that's a bit.. flat. The only motivation that's shown is he wants to fuck Erynn, nothing about having Erynn wrapped around his finger would do well for his career or making money, nothing that even slightly redeems him or offers depth, he's just an evil dude for the sake of being evil.

My critique would be it's not just that they're evil, but they're written as so cartoonishly bumbling and impotent, like watching a an uncoordinated angry guy blinding flailing around trying to hit people. I think they'd be much more compelling antagonists if the mc ever had to worry about them one-upping him; right now they just feel like idiots who try and do their nefarious things and fail.

They're basically like Disney bad guys; evil, but ugly and feeble.

 

[Babli]

I think Emily and John's Relationship will not work longterm as it will Make Eryn MC's stepsister. I know how much NYX love to Tease, i don't think she will do incest finally.
Its gonna be Hayley Andres situation again. I mean things not working out. John is a good guy he not gonna date his daughter's boyfriend's mother after knowing .

 

[LSC82]

I think Emily and John's Relationship will not work longterm as it will Make Eryn MC's stepsister. I know how much NYX love to Tease, i don't think she will do incest finally.
Its gonna be Hayley Andres situation again. I mean things not working out. John is a good guy he not gonna date his daughter's boyfriend's mother after knowing .

I think this will be it for them too.
Just too much trouble, they'll stop.

Even though Melissa says she has no issues with them dating, i think they'll stop and keep things friendly, Emily will take a step back and prioritize her friend(despite the go ahead).
It's just too much weirdness, dating the guy who is the father of the neighbor girl who is (possibly) dating my son.
And he's also the father of my son's ex GF.

And like you said it's a repeated plot point.

Any daddy fuckers? We got some strapping older gentlemen in the game.

(Except for ape man Coach Mike, Mr. Coleman and the Madison Springs Old Perv .)

Emily, momma has ran the gauntlet, she's been with John, Santi, Andres... hopefully not Zo cause her former roomate wouldn't like that lol.
And now even the old perv is making passes at her.

And she'll probably hook up with one of them again before the endgame.

 

[TonyMurray]

I think Emily and John's Relationship will not work longterm as it will Make Eryn MC's stepsister. I know how much NYX love to Tease, i don't think she will do incest finally.
Its gonna be Hayley Andres situation again. I mean things not working out. John is a good guy he not gonna date his daughter's boyfriend's mother after knowing .

Theoretically, if that were to happen it would be outside the bounds of the game. Unless Emily and John were to get married within a couple of months of meeting, the game would be over before Erynn could become MC's step-sister, so not so much problem solved as problem not there.

Or alternatively, there'd be a trigger that has Emily (or John) break it off because they don't want to get in the way of MC and Erynn's relationship (also bearing in mind that Emily+John is not canon, as there's a choice involved... actually, I always allowed Emily to date John, because I want her to be happy, but if you say "no" to that choice, is it respected, or does she go on the date with him regardless?)

 

[valbitterb]

Emily, momma has ran the gauntlet,

And will probably hook up with one of them again before the endgame.

Like mother, like son.

The MC certainly had the finest player training from Daddy Santi's genes and Emily's practices.

 

[Dessolos]

My critique would be it's not just that they're evil, but they're written as so cartoonishly bumbling and impotent, like watching a an uncoordinated angry guy blinding flailing around trying to hit people. I think they'd be much more compelling antagonists if the mc ever had to worry about them one-upping him; right now they just feel like idiots who try and do their nefarious things and fail.

They're basically like Disney bad guys; evil, but ugly and feeble.

if it wasn't for the fact Nyx had said 2 people will die I would agree with you. But with that third party knowledge im in constant fear of the Villains even if as villains they arent compelling.

 

[Babli]

if it wasn't for the fact Nyx had said 2 people will die I would agree with you. But with that third party knowledge im in constant fear of the Villains even if as villains they arent compelling.

Idiots are more dangerous than calculated villain

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

if it wasn't for the fact Nyx had said 2 people will die I would agree with you. But with that third party knowledge im in constant fear of the Villains even if as villains they arent compelling.

What's the worst they can do though? Ethan doesn't look like he commands enough power to cause any real suffering to Erynn in a way he could get away with it, and he's too spineless to do something knowing he couldnt get away with it.

I mean what's Zach gonna do, spread more bad rumors? Both of them seem so harmless - mostly because they're written as no one around them likes them.

 

[valbitterb]

Idiots are more dangerous than calculated villain

Very true.

 

[Dessolos]

What's the worst they can do though? Ethan doesn't look like he commands enough power to cause any real suffering to Erynn in a way he could get away with it, and he's too spineless to do something knowing he couldnt get away with it.

I mean what's Zach gonna do, spread more bad rumors? Both of them seem so harmless - mostly because they're written as no one around them likes them.

I don't disagree with you but im just saying because of what Nyx said what is going to happen I am in constant fear of them even if they aren't someone to fear. Now if I didn't have that third party knowledge I wouldn't bat an eye at them.

However after the last update I'm a little bit more scared of Ethan now because of what Nyx said and how crazy obsessed Ethan is. That phone call at the end he made me think he is either gonna get a gun and try to kill the MC and someone else is gonna get that bullet or whoever was on the other end of the phone call.

 

[Justaphase]

What's the worst they can do though? Ethan doesn't look like he commands enough power to cause any real suffering to Erynn in a way he could get away with it, and he's too spineless to do something knowing he couldnt get away with it.

I mean what's Zach gonna do, spread more bad rumors? Both of them seem so harmless - mostly because they're written as no one around them likes them.

One thing that does worry me is if Ethan were to directly threaten the MC, she may ultimately give in in some way. The MC is her achilles heel, she loves him and would do anything to keep him safe.
When the MC tells her that he ran into Ethan who roughed him up and showed him the video, her first thought was "Maybe I should just do what he wants" because he was directly going after the MC now.

Zach however is just a jealous horny idiot. But how far will this jealousy, especially on the Valeria path drive him to go?