VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13] [Nyx]

[Bombmaster]

funny thing is I didn't realize I liked the damsel in distress type of character until Charlotte from Hillside

She is nice(milf done right), Still going for Emma on Hilside, yeah got shamed by kinkmob about pseudo incest.

 

[Nurikabe]

I don't hate her
she was my first AVN bang and for a long time my favourite LI in intertwined
(not counting mel, she's just a level above any other LI)
and she's definitely better than erynn so if you gotta pick between two, you made the right choice if you ask me

I am pretty sure Mel is not an LI. I know that breaks a lot of hearts with breasts like that. I think Gabi is the only "older" woman we can get involved with. Maybe the tattoo artist Lakyn, who I believe is Lexi's cousin.

She is nice(milf done right), Still going for Emma on Hilside, yeah got shamed by kinkmob about pseudo incest.

Coincidentally, I thought Emma was not an option. Sorry to go off-topic.

 

[LSC82]

Layla path I doubt it, there is no jealousy between those... Lexi path it's possible, so I just didn't do it

That's exactly why i did it .
Kissed her afterwards too... and kept annoying Alexis at the beach, i wanna see what it takes for the bitch to call it quits lol.

I can't understand why people hate Alexis, yeah she made some poor choices to erynn but she had her rights... Honestly my favourite

She stinks of writers pet and everything that was innitially interesting about her gets white washed trying to "save" her reputation, so no i don't like her.

 

[Raziel_8]

I know most people prefer Nikki to Cara, but I just can't with Nikki... and honestly, the moment she throws away the shirt Erynn got you kinda sealed it for me... That shows she's not only jealous but also a control freak, and I'll give you this one for free: if anyone ever breaks/destroys/throws away your property, even if it's just an old t-shirt, get them the fuck out of your life immediatly!!!

yeah that's the thing for me as well even tho I still like Nikki over Cara cause she gives off more of a girlfriend feel than Cara and just a bit more of a interesting character to me. throwing away the shirt is really disrespectable to me even if was from a ex or w/e could be a keepsake or a fond memory. Like you said control freak and over something small like that well the future doesn't look good between them 2 imo.

Eh, that shirt looks better on her anyway



Also Jealous, Control freak ??
She doesn't even know it was a present from Erynn iirc, the MC just gave it to her to cover up, bevor he runs away like a drama queen.

And throwing away something like a shirt from an ex you had a bad break up with is relativly normal imo.
Again MC's fault for being a bad break up, as he just runs away without explaining anything...

IIRC if you on her path the shirt get's ripped and she buys a new one.

 

[XSOEGX]

On my Elena playtrough, i miss some scene. The second Chem Class i always got shortcut and have to sit with Torri.( Well, in all my playtroughs) Is there a way to avoid that? and geht this:

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And i totaly turned Torri down, everytime.
It is a bit importend for me, because Elena is my second one, after Alexis

On my Elena playtrough, i miss some scene. The second Chem Class i always got shortcut and have to sit with Torri.( Well, in all my playtroughs) Is there a way to avoid that? and geht this:

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And i totaly turned Torri down, everytime.
It is a bit importend for me, because Elena is my second one, after Alexis

Man.... get Laya route.

 

[Jacowboy]

Eh, that shirt looks better on her anyway
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Also Jealous, Control freak ??
She doesn't even know it was a present from Erynn iirc, the MC just gave it to her to cover up, bevor he runs away like a drama queen.

And throwing away something like a shirt from an ex you had a bad break up with is relativly normal imo.
Again MC's fault for being a bad break up, as he just runs away without explaining anything...

IIRC if you on her path the shirt get's ripped and she buys a new one.

That's not the shirt I'm talking about, it's the ugly blue one with stripes:

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She's told it was a present and doesn't care... And no dude, there's nothing "normal" about destroying someone else's shit, under ANY circumstance... and buying you a new one is not an excuse either, it's still symptomatic of a classic control freak... SHE decides which shirt you're gonna wear and which you won't.

 

[Jericho85]

That's not the shirt I'm talking about, it's the ugly blue one with stripes:

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She's told it was a present and doesn't care... And no dude, there's nothing "normal" about destroying someone else's shit, under ANY circumstance...

I had forgotten about that. I've never cared much for Nikki. She's one of the three LIs that were originally meant to be a one and done side fuck but then got "promoted" (The other two being Cara and Alexis). All three characters practically disappear if you're not on their routes so I usually just ignore them.

The shirt ripping thing was pretty shitty. I kind of wish there was an option to throw her ass out of the house when she did that. Though now that you bring it up, I think it's funny how the MC literally loses his shit at Alexis, cancels their date and makes her cry when she says his backward hat looked douchey, but he seems perfectly cool with Nikki ripping up Erynn's gift.

 

[Jacowboy]

I had forgotten about that. I've never cared much for Nikki. She's one of the three LIs that were originally meant to be a one and done side fuck but then got "promoted" (The other two being Cara and Alexis). All three characters practically disappear if you're not on their routes so I usually just ignore them.

The shirt ripping thing was pretty shitty. I kind of wish there was an option to throw her ass out of the house when she did that. Though now that you bring it up, I think it's funny how the MC literally loses his shit at Alexis, cancels their date and makes her cry when she says his backward hat looked douchey, but he seems perfectly cool with Nikki ripping up Erynn's gift.

Yeah that backwards hat scene is soooooo badly written it's not even funny...

 

[Crowangel]

@NyxVN WOW!! just WOW!! as someone who has followed this since very early on and only just saw the .11 update i'm blown away by the changes that have been added.. I didnt even realise it had been till tried loading my end of episode 10 saves and getting an error screen so just restarted to stop the abundance of error messages and was amazed to find the totally reworked opening and so on.. truly.. well done.. wjile there wasnt much wrong to begin with, the story now flows so much better, character consistency is much better and scenes look FAR better with the new locations and location intros.. congrats

 

[Dalish]

@NyxVN WOW!! just WOW!! as someone who has followed this since very early on and only just saw the .11 update i'm blown away by the changes that have been added.. I didnt even realise it had been till tried loading my end of episode 10 saves and getting an error screen so just restarted to stop the abundance of error messages and was amazed to find the totally reworked opening and so on.. truly.. well done.. wjile there wasnt much wrong to begin with, the story now flows so much better, character consistency is much better and scenes look FAR better with the new locations and location intros.. congrats

You must have been an update behind. Yeah I agree with you I really like the changes. They are subtle and effective.

 

[JesterAI]

This game is so weird

It doesn't let me do anything I want to do, but I still like it

All the girls I don't want are super easy, and all the girls I want are sex avoidant in the extreme.

It's almost like they ranked all their girls 1-10, and all the lowest ranked girls are the ones you get to have sex with.

So many sex scenes are a total waste of time, presented in flashbacks, that have zero stakes, so are not erotic at all. Hold CTRL and skip through all that dumb shit.

But I still want to see all the updates, and I replay the game multiple times to tweak my playthroughs.

Weird.

 

[mrdhrrflu]

old saves don't work anymore?

 

[Jericho85]

This game is so weird

It doesn't let me do anything I want to do, but I still like it

All the girls I don't want are super easy, and all the girls I want are sex avoidant in the extreme.

It's almost like they ranked all their girls 1-10, and all the lowest ranked girls are the ones you get to have sex with.

So many sex scenes are a total waste of time, presented in flashbacks, that have zero stakes, so are not erotic at all. Hold CTRL and skip through all that dumb shit.

But I still want to see all the updates, and I replay the game multiple times to tweak my playthroughs.

Weird.

The sex scenes are definitely not the emphasis of this VN. They're all old stock Daz sex animations that show up in 80% of the low effort VNs and they even get recycled several times over in Intertwined.

My three least favorite LIs make up almost all of those sex scenes anyway. So at this point I'm really just following this VN for two reasons. 1) Valeria and 2) the possibility of seeing Zach get the piss kicked out of him.

 

[Capt. Fubar]

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Well, developer is a female; like a sister you never wanted.

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[valbitterb]

Again MC's fault for being a bad break up, as he just runs away without explaining anything...

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Good catch. It really shows his generational, life and behavioral patterns in the game, which connects back to his running away from Erryn when he was younger and his biological father running away from his mother.

 

[LSC82]

I had forgotten about that. I've never cared much for Nikki. She's one of the three LIs that were originally meant to be a one and done side fuck but then got "promoted" (The other two being Cara and Alexis). All three characters practically disappear if you're not on their routes so I usually just ignore them.

The shirt ripping thing was pretty shitty. I kind of wish there was an option to throw her ass out of the house when she did that. Though now that you bring it up, I think it's funny how the MC literally loses his shit at Alexis, cancels their date and makes her cry when she says his backward hat looked douchey, but he seems perfectly cool with Nikki ripping up Erynn's gift.

Yeah that backwards hat scene is soooooo badly written it's not even funny...

You know, i'm on record about how much i like to piss off Alexis, i still didn't take the hat choice because it made me feel stupid doing that...
Let's piss her off but for good reasons, reasons like wanting to fuck her friend, her mom and her roommate

 

[Jacowboy]

exactly... also, wearing a hat like it's 2005? Alexis would be right to tear him a new asshole for that... Fuck you and your backwards hat you limp bizkit wannabe douchebag!!!

But that's kind of the problem with the scene... the MC is wrong and there's no wiggle room there... his reaction is also waaay too disproportionate and childish... it just seems like a forced drama button to break up with Alexis in the most unorganic way ever. It's just bad writting, no more, no less.

Oh also, the hat looks like it was pasted on top of the render, on top of it all... it just looks bad AND stupid...

 

[valbitterb]

You know, i'm on record about how much i like to piss off Alexis, i still didn't take the hat choice because it made me feel stupid doing that...
Let's piss her off but for good reasons, reasons like wanting to fuck her friend, her mom and her roommate

Hhahahahaaha. There must be standards when it comes to Alexis trolling. I agree.

I picked the hat option and that was the worst thing ever in this game's history.

Basically, if you're on the Lexi-Val, but keep Erynn and Iris close run, you go to the club with Lexi and Iris.

But you don't end up going to the club if you get angry at her saying you look like a douchebag because you're wearing this stupid hat.

This was the only time I've agreed with Lexi on anything.

So you really "overreact" and blow up at Lexi, leaving her in tears wondering why you blew up. You even ask your mom if you look like a douchebag. She says you do. And then you look at yourself in the mirror with the stupid hat on. It's cringe-worthy.

No club scene or night out, no Lexi and Iris club fun, you don't drive Lexi home, Adriana doesn't bring you home, no morning after conversation with Zo and Lexi.

WORSE, Nyx tries to force a parallel at the beach where Darryl puts a hat on Valeria like she's his "baby doll" then asks her to spit bars. Nyx's writing of the black characters is atrocious if not cliche.

Nyx is good at parallels but this was her worst one ever.

This was the laziest writing from Nyx to make MC and a lady fight. I understand that the hat comment can be a trigger point for a couple's fight because of other reasons building up for months or weeks or days between them, but it was terribly done here. There was no build up at all. The fight should have been Lexi confronting the MC about his behavior at the beach favoring Erynn and/or Iris.

It doesn't work also as some kind of bad metaphor connecting MC and Val as the female version of the MC, and yes both of them douchebagging being players.

 

[LSC82]

exactly... also, wearing a hat like it's 2005? Alexis would be right to tear him a new asshole for that... Fuck you and your backwards hat you limp bizkit wannabe douchebag!!!

But that's kind of the problem with the scene... the MC is wrong and there's no wiggle room there... his reaction is also waaay too disproportionate and childish... it just seems like a forced drama button to break up with Alexis in the most unorganic way ever. It's just bad writting, no more, no less.

Oh also, the hat looks like it was pasted on top of the render, on top of it all... it just looks bad AND stupid...

Hhahahahaaha. There must be standards when it comes to Alexis trolling. I agree.

I picked the hat option and that was the worst thing ever in this game's history.

Basically, if you're on the Lexi-Val, but keep Erynn and Iris close run, you go to the club with Lexi and Iris.

But you don't end up going to the club if you get angry at her saying you look like a douchebag because you're wearing this stupid hat.

This was the only time I've agreed with Lexi on anything.

So you really "overreact" and blow up at Lexi, leaving her in tears wondering why you blew up. You even ask your mom if you look like a douchebag. She says you do. And then you look at yourself in the mirror with the stupid hat on. It's cringe-worthy.

No club scene or night out, no Lexi and Iris club fun, you don't drive Lexi home, Adriana doesn't bring you home, no morning after conversation with Zo and Lexi.

WORSE, Nyx tries to force a parallel at the beach where Darryl puts a hat on Valeria like she's his "baby doll" then asks her to spit bars. Nyx's writing of the black characters is atrocious if not cliche.

Nyx is good at parallels but this was her worst one ever.

This was the laziest writing from Nyx to make MC and a lady fight. I understand that the hat comment can be a trigger point for a couple's fight because of other reasons building up for months or weeks or days between them, but it was terribly done here. There was no build up at all. The fight should have been Lexi confronting the MC about his behavior at the beach favoring Erynn and/or Iris.

It doesn't work also as some kind of bad metaphor connecting MC and Val as the female version of the MC, and yes both of them douchebagging being players.

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100% to both of you guys, i have "strict morals" on my Alexis trolling , let's not go into uber stupid territory to do it...

If we are going to have a fight why not be about the fact that i kept hitting on her friend right in front of her at the beach? Why fight about a stupid hat? I finish the beach scene with a negative score and despite that everything is peachy...
Only to fight over a hat, one that i'm clearly in the wrong and overreacting... it's so inorganic and forced.

And then we get compared to Darryl to close it off...

 

[NebulousShooter]

John will get Melissa and Emily threesome in this game before MC gets Melissa solo