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haha What a great update and that was my favorite part! Love how jealous Layla gets any time the MC is having fun with Elenayeah
she was like: oh hell no missy, get off my man right now
and mc is like: mmmm life is goooooood
Amazing number of renders for a monthly update! I am enjoying the characters, the story and dialogue are fun too. This is quickly rising up the list of my favorite games, just pledged on patreon, hope next update as entertaining as this last one.
- Jan 24, 2018
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Nice game but start of the story feels so weird to me. Your divorced mother sends you away like a pet to your father and after 5 years of not seeing her you are happy to ask to live with her? Main character have zero bitterness towards it and mother doesnt even say sorry? If bitterness/guilt is not a plot point then I wish flashback would make it seem that because of conflicts with his mother about his studies/other stuff main character was eager to live with his Father since he was around as a sunday dad and mc thought living with him would be better and it wasnt the case of mother just sending mc away like an unwanted dog. I guess I am too proud and thats why it annoys me.
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I know, it feels weird because the MC then holds onto the bitterness he feels about being rejected by Erynn. Even though he was 13 and she was 15? 16? Just seems odd that he can let go of the fact that his mother sent him away but can't forget that the girl next door rejected him.Nice game but start of the story feels so weird to me. Your divorced mother sends you away like a pet to your father and after 5 years of not seeing her you are happy to ask to live with her? Main character have zero bitterness towards it and mother doesnt even say sorry? If bitterness/guilt is not a plot point then I wish flashback would make it seem that because of conflicts with his mother about his studies/other stuff main character was eager to live with his Father since he was around as a sunday dad and mc thought living with him would be better and it wasnt the case of mother just sending mc away like an unwanted dog. I guess I am too proud and thats why it annoys me.
Anyway I will try to faze it out of my memory because I cant wait for content with Melissa.
I would like to see the MC feeling like his mother never had time for him then or now, she is busy running her restaurant (which it is odd that the MC doesn't go eat at when he is looking for food instead of the bar - he doesn't even consider it) and soon also her club. It would be nice to see the MC at least text his father that he arrived safe at his mom's house or some mention made to that fact. I mean even with whatever happened I hope that his dad still gives a damn about him.
Also would like to see the MC work for his mom so he can earn some money, not to "help out" but so he has some spending cash.
Overall the MC feels like he is rather easygoing which is why the whole situation with Erynn feels weird.
He started constantly doing crazy retarded shit in school bcz his crush Erynn didn't reciprocate his feelings after a very "romantic" confession. His mom had enough of his sorry ass and sent him to live with his dad where he probably fucked his stepmom or stepsisters and then he came back. He said it himself to Alexis he wasn't son of the year material, some moms are pretty strict like that, u know ??
It's not like she never contacted him again, she even asked him to visit her on holidays but he was to butthurt to accept. Also, she sent him to live with his dad, she didn't throw him out on the street with no money or shit like that. You should understand that a parent isn't supposed to be your best friend, a good parent should support u when u need emotional or financial support and kick your ass if you an asshole, a junkie or too stupid to do something positive with your life.
Not a good way to do business. It will do more harm than good for u in the long run. Not only it will drastically slow down the dev process but patrons could stop supporting u. Fans want to pay for content they can enjoy ... NTR fans want just NTR content and vanilla fans want to see just the MC with the ladies, they abhor NTR. Look how many ppl want to avoid Erynn, an important character to the story, bcz it's strongly implied that she's an escort/prostitute or at least did some crazy shit.
It's not worth the headache. Just look at the Culture Shock and especially Lord of Imagination threads ... ppl always complain about the lack of NTR or vanilla content (depending on what they prefer) and just read how many complain about the NTR situations. Again, stick to just one, NTR or non NTR, mixing them together won't be good and flame wars don't do anything constructive. Just sayin'.
If u want to bring other dicks in the pic, make each choice have repercussions. Like, if the MC cheats on some girl he dates let her cheat on him too. And consider giving poor Zac some love too ... dude is a bro', but he always ends up being the third wheel in the group or the 4th+.
You should also give us the option to save Erynn from doing something stupid.
The Erynn parts have already been changed in the unofficial 0.3a release I posted in the forum.
About his mother. She didn't just send him away for no reason. MC was "out of control". Not listening to her, getting in trouble, ... She tried her best, but he didn't change.. So she basically asked for help and the solution was to send him to his father..
As MC grew up with his father, he came to realise that it wasn't his mother's fault that he lives with his father but his own doing.. He feels bad for not contacting her and mostly even ignoring her when she tried to contact him or asked him to come live with her during vacations.. That's why there is no bitterness between them..
You were quicker to write the actual facts..He started constantly doing crazy retarded shit in school bcz his crush Erynn didn't reciprocate his feelings after a very "romantic" confession. His mom had enough of his sorry ass and sent him to live with his dad where he probably fucked his stepmom or stepsisters and then he came back. He said it himself to Alexis he wasn't son of the year material, some moms are pretty strict like that, u know ??
It's not like she never contacted him again, she even asked him to visit her on holidays but he was to butthurt to accept. Also, she sent him to live with his dad, she didn't throw him out on the street with no money or shit like that. You should understand that a parent isn't supposed to be your best friend, a good parent should support u when u need emotional or financial support and kick your ass if you an asshole, a junkie or too stupid to do something positive with your life.
Not a good way to do business. It will do more harm than good for u in the long run. Not only it will drastically slow down the dev process but patrons could stop supporting u. Fans want to pay for content they can enjoy ... NTR fans want just NTR content and vanilla fans want to see just the MC with the ladies, they abhor NTR. Look how many ppl want to avoid Erynn, an important character to the story, bcz it's strongly implied that she's an escort/prostitute or at least did some crazy shit.
It's not worth the headache. Just look at the Culture Shock and especially Lord of Imagination threads ... ppl always complain about the lack of NTR or vanilla content (depending on what they prefer) and just read how many complain about the NTR situations. Again, stick to just one, NTR or non NTR, mixing them together won't be good and flame wars don't do anything constructive. Just sayin'.
If u want to bring other dicks in the pic, make each choice have repercussions. Like, if the MC cheats on some girl he dates let her cheat on him too. And consider giving poor Zac some love too ... dude is a bro', but he always ends up being the third wheel in the group or the 4th+.
This story won't have NTR --> That's final
- Jan 24, 2018
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Weirdest thing about Erynn is stuff she said when mc fell asleep. Like she needs him and wants him to watch over her. As if previously they had some kind of romantic relationship as adult people but they were 13 and 16? Like what girl will say these type of things to a guy she only knew as 13 years old boy. Especially considering she laughed at his love confession so its not like she took him seriously.
Worst thing flashback tells us about mc actions is bad grades and detentions. What kind of garbage human being one needs to be to send your only child, 13 years old child to someone else over this shit? And never even visiting him after that only making some lame ass phone calls. I dont know how you can justify this shit.
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Well IIRC Nyx has said that the MC's version isn't necessary the "correct" version. Instead each of them see it differently. Only time will tell.
Going by what Nyx has said I am just going to go with she was justified. And if he doesn't want to talk to her on the phone or visit her why should she fly to her ex-husband's house to be rejected by her snotty nosed brat of a son?
- Jan 24, 2018
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I can only guess that we have some serious cultural differences here because this whole mc-mother stuff is just wild to me and there is no point to discuss it further.
The thing about Erynn and MC is, they grew up together.. Their parents are best friends.. So they did everything together.. They grew a really strong bond and that bond was severed by the "rejection" and him "leaving".
It's the same as if you have a sibling and one day he/she is gone..
Okay, as I don't know what culture you are from or what is expected of parents in your culture I will have to agree. However, I would suggest that you give the game and Nyx the same courtesy as to understand that you have cultural differences with the MC and Nyx.
Agreed. Too soon to say for sure who's right and who blows shit out of proportion. Let's not forget that Erynn was 16 and he was still a damn kid, this ain't a shota hentai vid were kids fuck women and make them go crazy over their dicks. Her or her friends' reaction shouldn't surprise anyone.
NyxValeria thank u for clearing that up for us. Consider adding those important details to the script. Also, I'm kinda concerned about her relationship with that Ethan, who kept kissing her ass. Maybe he made her do some shit she really regrets now ?? Not like the dev knows anything about it ...
So I am assuming all the characters who have points assigned are love interests? Is Melissa a love interest?
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Which is why she said she made a lot of mistakes so I don't know if that has anything to do with it and besides she did say she owes him an explanation on why she did it.
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