VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[byaaahh]

Next is the entire John reveal, while expected I am still unsure if I understood this correctly: so first he had Erynn with Melissa but abandoned them and went on to meet Iris mom until she died of Leukemia, is that it? Because if it is, it kinda paints him at the same level of someone like Santiago or Andres if this is what happened I was expecting a much worse reaction from everyone.

John had a ONS with Mel and she didn't tell him, unsure if it was by choice or if she had no way to contact him. Santi was the victim of his parents duplicity (offering to pay to terminate Emilys pregnancy) which ended up alienating him from Emily, which was further exacerbated by Andres ultimatum.

The only father figure who has truly been portrayed as an asshole is the one who essentially blackmailed Emily (a girl he was only with to get revenge on Santi) into raising her and Santi's child as his, where he then proceeded to assault said child for confronting him with the truth about his parentage and Andres' infidelity.

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

is layla cute enough that she could make a cute baby with zach?

 

[jadepaladin]

is layla cute enough that she could make a cute baby with zach?

Aww, little Zayla.

Also, wow you didn't call her McKayla.

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

Aww, little Zayla.

Also, wow you didn't call her McKayla.

Theres a whole page with her name on it, calling her mckayla here would be trying too hard.

But yea Laylas face zach's hair, chef's kiss

 

[Dessolos]

Ok, caught up with everything, in the end I am leaning towards Erynn, but I have a feeling it will be hard to choose when I have to replay again next chapter.

From what I heard she is speeding with the blackmail plot, although there are interesting subplots from this that have potential if developed more: John, Zach, Valerie and Ethan's own blackmail... I am honestly glad its ending sooner because I fear something bad is going to happen everytime Erynn disappears for a bit and also I don't think our relationship with her will ever be normal until we move on from that.

Next is the entire John reveal, while expected I am still unsure if I understood this correctly: so first he had Erynn with Melissa but abandoned them and went on to meet Iris mom until she died of Leukemia, is that it? Because if it is, it kinda paints him at the same level of someone like Santiago or Andres if this is what happened I was expecting a much worse reaction from everyone.

And lastly Zach, I couldn't punch him at school because I was smelling that trap and decided to damage control here, but I hope we will get to meet him outside of school in an alley with no cameras.

Playing this AV telenovela was totally an experience I enjoyed quite a lot.

Yeah this game is hard to choose at times even tho I like Erynn the most. If I play a save and don't pick Erynn I always want to play Erynn content sometimes the same thing goes for Alexis too.

 

[Justaphase]

Ok, caught up with everything, in the end I am leaning towards Erynn, but I have a feeling it will be hard to choose when I have to replay again next chapter.

From what I heard she is speeding with the blackmail plot, although there are interesting subplots from this that have potential if developed more: John, Zach, Valerie and Ethan's own blackmail... I am honestly glad its ending sooner because I fear something bad is going to happen everytime Erynn disappears for a bit and also I don't think our relationship with her will ever be normal until we move on from that.

Next is the entire John reveal, while expected I am still unsure if I understood this correctly: so first he had Erynn with Melissa but abandoned them and went on to meet Iris mom until she died of Leukemia, is that it? Because if it is, it kinda paints him at the same level of someone like Santiago or Andres if this is what happened I was expecting a much worse reaction from everyone.

And lastly Zach, I couldn't punch him at school because I was smelling that trap and decided to damage control here, but I hope we will get to meet him outside of school in an alley with no cameras.

Playing this AV telenovela was totally an experience I enjoyed quite a lot.

Erynn is awesome and yes we need Ethan out of her life for the relationship between her and the MC to truly take off.
As far as John is concerned, Melissa and John were never in a relationship so there was no abandonment. He was simply a one night stand and she got pregnant from it.

 

[Meiri]

Erynn is awesome and yes we need Ethan out of her life for the relationship between her and the MC to truly take off.
As far as John is concerned, Melissa and John were never in a relationship so there was no abandonment. He was simply a one night stand and she got pregnant from it.

Still, I guess I will need the full context from both in future chapters, but either Mel or John will have to take the responsibility here, not being there for a child either because you left or because you didn't tell your partner is a big no from me.

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

Nyx already sneakily put up the next roadblock in the erynn MC relationship. When Erynn finds out that MC knew who her father was but sat on the info (regardless of the reason), I imagine she's gonna be pissed

 

[jadepaladin]

Still, I guess I will need the full context from both in future chapters, but either Mel or John will have to take the responsibility here, not being there for a child either because you left or because you didn't tell your partner is a big no from me.

John already gets a pass because he didn't know.

Mel will get a pass from being hot.

I don't make the rules but that's how it will go.

 

[Meiri]

Nyx already sneakily put up the next roadblock in the erynn MC relationship. When Erynn finds out that MC knew who her father was but sat on the info (regardless of the reason), I imagine she's gonna be pissed

5 more chapters without sex

 

[Justaphase]

Still, I guess I will need the full context from both in future chapters, but either Mel or John will have to take the responsibility here, not being there for a child either because you left or because you didn't tell your partner is a big no from me.

John was a casual hook up, other than his name she knew very little about him. She also spent years trying to find him but given the fact that she seemingly only knew his first name and that he had tattoos, she didn't have any success.
We can judge her harshly for that, but it does happen. Melissa would never say that she made a mistake, because what happened resulted in Erynn.

Nyx already sneakily put up the next roadblock in the erynn MC relationship. When Erynn finds out that MC knew who her father was but sat on the info (regardless of the reason), I imagine she's gonna be pissed

The MC only just found out. He's been asked to let Melissa and John tell her, which I think is more than reasonable.

 

[Dessolos]

The MC only just found out. He's been asked to let Melissa and John tell her, which I think is more than reasonable.

I want to be a selfish bastard and Tell Erynn anyways , I don't want to keep a big secret like that from her even if it's a reasonable request. Even if it means Mel gets upset or at least I would like the MC to be there when they tell her at least. Tho if I do decide to listen to Mel At the very least id tell Erynn I know a big secret and she needs to talk to Mel asap cause I don't want to keep the secret for very long.

 

[Justaphase]

I want to be a selfish bastard and Tell Erynn anyways , I don't want to keep a big secret like that from her even if it's a reasonable request. Even if it means Mel gets upset or at least I would like the MC to be there when they tell her at least. Tho if I do decide to listen to Mel At the very least id tell Erynn I know a big secret and she needs to talk to Mel asap cause I don't want to keep the secret for very long.

I think that the MC telling Erynn ahead of Melissa and John could hurt her more than it helps. She would understandably have alot of questions that the MC wouldn't know the answers to. The MC would remove that important moment for Melissa and John and more importantly Erynn.
I agree that if they were to drag it on for days then he should try and speed things up for Erynn's sake.

 

[Meiri]

I want to be a selfish bastard and Tell Erynn anyways , I don't want to keep a big secret like that from her even if it's a reasonable request. Even if it means Mel gets upset or at least I would like the MC to be there when they tell her at least. Tho if I do decide to listen to Mel At the very least id tell Erynn I know a big secret and she needs to talk to Mel asap cause I don't want to keep the secret for very long.

If we get the chance to tell her I am honestly not gonna delay it specially now that Ethan also knows, but it may be him that moves first with how manipulative he is.

 

[Dr.TSoni]

Santi was the victim of his parents duplicity (offering to pay to terminate Emilys pregnancy) which ended up alienating him from Emily, which was further exacerbated by Andres ultimatum.

He washed his hands of it, letting Mom and Dad sort it out for him. I wouldn't absolve him.

Melissa would never say that she made a mistake, because what happened resulted in Erynn.

So.... she made a mistake

 

[Elduriel]

I think that the MC telling Erynn ahead of Melissa and John could hurt her more than it helps. She would understandably have alot of questions that the MC wouldn't know the answers to. The MC would remove that important moment for Melissa and John and more importantly Erynn.
I agree that if they were to drag it on for days then he should try and speed things up for Erynn's sake.

what plot line wasn't dragged out to infinity in this game?

 

[Dessolos]

I think that the MC telling Erynn ahead of Melissa and John could hurt her more than it helps. She would understandably have alot of questions that the MC wouldn't know the answers to. The MC would remove that important moment for Melissa and John and more importantly Erynn.
I agree that if they were to drag it on for days then he should try and speed things up for Erynn's sake.

yeah kind of why I label myself as being a selfish bastard for wanting to do that. Just because I don't want to keep it a secret for very long. Tho at the end of the day id try to get her and Mel to talk soon ( with in a few days) most likely before I just spill the secret cause they do deserve the chance to tell her but im kind of selfish when it comes to Erynn so wouldn't want to keep it a secret for more than a week at the most.

 

[Acsuka]

yeah kind of why I label myself as being a selfish bastard for wanting to do that. Just because I don't want to keep it a secret for very long. Tho at the end of the day id try to get her and Mel to talk soon ( with in a few days) most likely before I just spill the secret cause they do deserve the chance to tell her but im kind of selfish when it comes to Erynn so wouldn't want to keep it a secret for more than a week at the most.

A week? Des, do you know how many plans Ethan makes in a week? He has to tell Eryn right away, and that's Mel and John's duty... If MC tells Eryn, it'll only cause more trouble because Erynn will be angry with her parents for keeping it a secret and having to find out from someone else... But I can't blame you because you're madly in love with Erynn and you're only guided by your emotions, not common sense...

 

[byaaahh]

He washed his hands of it, letting Mom and Dad sort it out for him. I wouldn't absolve him.

Except he didn't, he took a few days then approached her at the beach to talk about things and seemed to have no idea why she was mad at him.

Leads me to believe he had no idea his parents offered to pay for a termination.

 

[Meiri]

Except he didn't, he took a few days then approached her at the beach to talk about things and seemed to have no idea why she was mad at him.

Leads me to believe he had no idea his parents offered to pay for a termination.

And he is still to blame, it's his son he should have done more in those 18 years if he actually cared about him.

I will say we are still missing his side of things as well, but he is partly responsible, tbf neither of them are parent of the year material.