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I started working on the first training scene. MC decided to go train at the pier this time, since mostly it's in the park, and I wanted to switch it up. He'll meet a certain character there. Whether it's a good or bad meeting depends on the choices you made.
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I also restarted working on the rerendering of episode 4. I call it rerendering, but I should call it a complete remake at this point. I'm still working on the Riverside flashback, and it already has twice the number of renders and twice the amount of script. Lots of scenes have been extended, and new scenes have been added.
MORe MORgans ...

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Cara's personality has changed a little. She isn't as shy anymore as she used to be, and I think she's more fun this way. The script has been rewritten/improved.
YES! Nyx listened to the feedback! LSC82 We'll have to wait and see if it works.

here is definitely a lot of new stuff to discover. Also, a big change in the script is the scene between MC and Nikki at the gym, where, in the old script, they have sex for the first time. I never liked it. That scene will still be there, but it won't be their first time.
Uh-oh. Muscle Mommy fans won't be happy here. I hope Nyx keeps the harmless trick the MC pulls on Nikki in this scene.
 
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Their first time not being in the game feels like a bold move. I hope Cara is more appealing as a result of her changes, but it's also her look that failed to suck me in like the other girls did, so I feel she'll always be towards the bottom of my list.
yeah I personally don't like it and in my mind id probably still see and consider the Gym scene as their first time till I see mention it wasn't in the game it's self. Only because I see the first sometime as a milestone and something you look forward to with most LI. Now not a big deal to me even less so cause Muscle Mommy not my favorite.
 

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PLEASE!

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YES! Nyx listened to the feedback! LSC82 We'll have to wait and see if it works.



Uh-oh. Muscle Mommy fans won't be happy here. I hope Nyx keeps the harmless trick the MC pulls on Nikki in this scene.
Oh damn, I didn’t even think about that girl. Hmm… if she sees us with the muscle mommy, that probably won’t be a pleasant encounter. A date with Val would be similar — since they have each other’s phone numbers, that could definitely make things awkward. Meeting Shakari (I still can’t spell her name properly ) might also go badly. The rest of the girls don’t really seem to affect her that much.:unsure:
 
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yeah I personally don't like it and in my mind id probably still see and consider the Gym scene as their first time till I see mention it wasn't in the game it's self. Only because I see the first sometime as a milestone and something you look forward to with most LI. Now not a big deal to me even less so cause Muscle Mommy not my favorite.
That's exactly it though, it will still be the first time, even if there's an actual first time before it that we don't see! It doesn't make sense to me from a story perspective. It would basically have to be them saying to someone, or referencing in conversation with each other or something, that they have had sex and we just haven't seen it. Or they have sex for the first time and when they're done they say something like "that was better/worse/different" than the first time, and we as the audience are left confused. As usual, I trust Nyx to make her story work, but I'm not sure in advance how this one will play out.
 
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Their first time not being in the game feels like a bold move. I hope Cara is more appealing as a result of her changes, but it's also her look that failed to suck me in like the other girls did, so I feel she'll always be towards the bottom of my list.
I hope Nyx can add section that shows who MC banged. Sometimes it's hard to keep up with your scumbag saves. It's hard work.

The Nikki flashback doesn't seem like a good idea.
That's exactly it though, it will still be the first time, even if there's an actual first time before it that we don't see! It doesn't make sense to me from a story perspective. It would basically have to be them saying to someone, or referencing in conversation with each other or something, that they have had sex and we just haven't seen it. Or they have sex for the first time and when they're done they say something like "that was better/worse/different" than the first time, and we as the audience are left confused. As usual, I trust Nyx to make her story work, but I'm not sure in advance how this one will play out.
Uh-oh. Muscle Mommy fans won't be happy here. I hope Nyx keeps the harmless trick the MC pulls on Nikki in this scene.
Not including the first time the MC and a LI have sex is a peculiar choice.
This isn't a Mira type character where implying that they fucked at some point is enough.

It's an important milestone with a main character... and that's what you cut?:WaitWhat:
This is specially weird given how long Nyx is says this new version is, you include so much stuff but not their first time?

As for Cara, she will always have a tough time getting out of her sisters shadow... the game wants to select which one goes through here and it's always Nikki.
It's just the structure of the game, only one sister "survives" the flashback, and it's Nikki... Cara gets knocked out before we can get attached to her.
Nyx is trying very hard to give her a fighting chance... but it's swimming against the tide.

I think Cara's original design was cute(her more recent look with the old lady haircut is :poop:) but when i had to pick between the cute girl and her uber hot sister... yeah she's gonna be left behind.

Oh damn, I didn’t even think about that girl. Hmm… if she sees us with the muscle mommy, that probably won’t be a pleasant encounter. A date with Val would be similar — since they have each other’s phone numbers, that could definitely make things awkward. Meeting Shakari (I still can’t spell her name properly ) might also go badly. The rest of the girls don’t really seem to affect her that much.:unsure:
It could be her during the training session... her coach allowed her to train alone.
Val, Layla should be in school during the morning(and we also just had the Val date, it would Val scene>Val scene, some of my friends would like that though valbitterb Justaphase ;)).
Iris, Alexis, Erynn don't go running unless asked... and even then.

It's gotta be a character outside the box, Sha'carri or maybe Brooke.
Sha'carri does go well with what Nyx said that the choice that leads to a happy ending has already been made...
I still think that locking players in on a harmless choice you made years ago fucking sucks, but Nyx seems to have fallen in love with this concept...
 

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Not including the first time the MC and a LI have sex is a peculiar choice.
This isn't a Mira type character where implying that they fucked at some point is enough.

It's an important milestone with a main character... and that's what you cut?:WaitWhat:
This is specially weird given how long Nyx is says this new version is, you include so much stuff but not their first time?

As for Cara, she will always have a tough time getting out of her sisters shadow... the game wants to select which one goes through here and it's always Nikki.
It's just the structure of the game, only one sister "survives" the flashback, and it's Nikki... Cara gets knocked out before we can get attached to her.
Nyx is trying very hard to give her a fighting chance... but it's swimming against the tide.

I think Cara's original design was cute(her more recent look with the old lady haircut is :poop:) but when i had to pick between the cute girl and her uber hot sister... yeah she's gonna be left behind.



It could be her during the training session... her coach allowed her to train alone.
Val, Layla should be in school during the morning(and we also just had the Val date, it would Val scene>Val scene, some of my friends would like that though valbitterb Justaphase ;)).
Iris, Alexis, Erynn don't go running unless asked... and even then.

It's gotta be a character outside the box, Sha'carri or maybe Brooke.
Sha'carri does go well with what Nyx said that the choice that leads to a happy ending has already been made...
I still think that locking players in on a harmless choice you made years ago fucking sucks, but Nyx seems to have fallen in love with this concept...
After giving it some thought — screw Sha’Carri. Let it be Dylan and his dog. And we’re officially starting Dylan’s route. :LOL:
 

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I think Cara's original design was cute(her more recent look with the old lady haircut is :poop:) but when i had to pick between the cute girl and her uber hot sister... yeah she's gonna be left behind.
I agree, Cara originally had the best hairstyle, now she looks like a teacher at one of the schools our MC went to. But that becomes an advantage for Nikki, who has such a significant advantage compared to her sister.
 

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I agree, Cara originally had the best hairstyle, now she looks like a teacher at one of the schools our MC went to. But that becomes an advantage for Nikki, who has such a significant advantage compared to her sister.
Did Cara’s first or second hairstyle actually have any real impact? From the very start there hasn’t really been any hype around Cara in this thread. If I had to guess, most people will just check out her “change” and then forget about her existence again.
 
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I agree, Cara originally had the best hairstyle, now she looks like a teacher at one of the schools our MC went to. But that becomes an advantage for Nikki, who has such a significant advantage compared to her sister.
Did Cara’s first or second hairstyle actually have any real impact? From the very start there hasn’t really been any hype around Cara in this thread. If I had to guess, most people will just check out her “change” and then forget about her existence again.
It's like she was already losing then she scored an own goal...
Me and others already had a strong tendency of picking Nikki over her coming out of the flashback.
And then her hair changed making her worst...

Everyone seems to agree that it wasn't a good redesign, but because she's "nobody" main girl we don't get "riots" over this.
 
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Did Cara’s first or second hairstyle actually have any real impact? From the very start there hasn’t really been any hype around Cara in this thread. If I had to guess, most people will just check out her “change” and then forget about her existence again.
The biggest impact was Cara's second hairstyle, although it didn't look like it at first, but after MC left Riverside, the more we saw her out later, the more she reminded me of an elderly lady. Maybe she wanted to look a little older with the new hairstyle, but later in the game she started to look much older than before.
 

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I'm not really sure why Nyx is fixing things that honestly don't need fixing. :WaitWhat: Makes me nervous for what else may get changed...

I disagree about Nikki and the gym sex scene being their first time feeling out of place. If anything it suits her character IMO, she's playful and fun. The MC made the effort to come and see her at work and be silly, then couldn't keep their hands off each other, one thing led to another.
They are also trying to keep their relationship a secret at that point for now, so that entails some sneaking around. So at work most likely feels safer than at home.
Also not everything needs to be romantic and candle lit. Sometimes sex is spontaneous, besides it's not like either of them are virgins.
 

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I'm not really sure why Nyx is fixing things that honestly don't need fixing. :WaitWhat: Makes me nervous for what else may get changed...

I disagree about Nikki and the gym sex scene being their first time feeling out of place. If anything it suits her character IMO, she's playful and fun. The MC made the effort to come and see her at work and be silly, then couldn't keep their hands off each other, one thing led to another.
They are also trying to keep their relationship a secret at that point for now, so that entails some sneaking around. So at work most likely feels safer than at home.
Also not everything needs to be romantic and candle lit. Sometimes sex is spontaneous, besides it's not like either of them are virgins.
I agree, it feels perfectly suited to them that he goes to her job and they end up banging.
A romantic dinner followed by a luxurious motel suite, doesn't sound very "Nikki".
Banging in the gym sounds like something that can only happen with Nikki...

Not to mention coming home late might lead to Andres and Haley asking questions.
And i didn't even touch on skipping the actual first time... we don't get to see the first time with a main girl o_O

Nyx loves to overthink things.
 
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Do you guys just skip all the scenes where it's girls that you're not on their path/not interested in, but you still have to hang out with them/bit of forced drama?

I find it difficult not to. How do you do it?
i skipped "common" scenes which were same on all girls like lexi driving her sister somewhere (not sure where).
 
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