VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[TonyMurray]

The idea of the main girls going evil is a very interesting one... i've long wanted something like this.

I don't think that's what was said. The way I read it at least, the "evil" at the end is telling you that Nyx is being evil, hence the italics. Maybe she doesn't like using emojis or something. Try it like this:

Some characters are only there to ruin relationships. (Maybe even some main interests )

So either some main interests are only there to ruin relationships (doesn't feel right, because why would they be main interests is that's all they're there for?) or some characters are there to ruin relationships with the main interests (more likely, thinking of Miri and Julia as good examples).

 

[Jarulf]

Well she also said in the Q & A she also identifies with Alexis too not fully but just in part and she has the most sex granted it's not a total self insert like Valeria. But still I think if she sees part of herself in Alexis sex scene probably not a big deal for her with Valeria.

Unless Val looks like her, perhaps and that's part of what makes it awkward. But I'm not going to beat a dead horse, it was just a random thought that popped up in my sleep-deprived brain. I just want the (possibly) doomed girl to survive long enough to join my mini harem with Layla and Elena. Because that constellation is canon, right? Right...

 

[Dessolos]

I don't think that's what was said. The way I read it at least, the "evil" at the end is telling you that Nyx is being evil, hence the italics. Maybe she doesn't like using emojis or something. Try it like this:

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So either some main interests are only there to ruin relationships (doesn't feel right, because why would they be main interests is that's all they're there for?) or some characters are there to ruin relationships with the main interests (more likely, thinking of Miri and Julia as good examples).

I read that as characters that are not Main Love Interest may or may not be there to ruin relationships.

Unless Val looks like her, perhaps and that's part of what makes it awkward. But I'm not going to beat a dead horse, it was just a random thought that popped up in my sleep-deprived brain. I just want the (possibly) doomed girl to survive long enough to join my mini harem with Layla and Elena. Because that constellation is canon, right? Right...

Yeah I get you I just only even brought it up as I was surprised to Learn Alexis is also a self insert in some shape or form still not a full one like Valeria

 

[TonyMurray]

I read that as characters that are not Main Love Interest may or may not be there to ruin relationships.

That's how I read it, too. It makes sense for it to be that way as well, since we've already interacted with two characters who most of us suspect of being danger fucks.

 

[LSC82]

I don't think that's what was said. The way I read it at least, the "evil" at the end is telling you that Nyx is being evil, hence the italics. Maybe she doesn't like using emojis or something. Try it like this:

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So either some main interests are only there to ruin relationships (doesn't feel right, because why would they be main interests is that's all they're there for?) or some characters are there to ruin relationships with the main interests (more likely, thinking of Miri and Julia as good examples).

That makes sense... i think the wishful thinking on my part made me read that wrong.

I still think it would be a good idea if not outright evil they got into "morally dubious" territory and less squeaky clean.

Yeah I get you I just only even brought it up as I was surprised to Learn Alexis is also a self insert in some shape or form still not a full one like Valeria

In early interviews(years ago), she said Alexis was a character that she related a lot but came up short of saying self insert.
And then we got Valeria and everyone left that behind...

 

[JorgeÚnico]

I don't think that's what was said. The way I read it at least, the "evil" at the end is telling you that Nyx is being evil, hence the italics. Maybe she doesn't like using emojis or something. Try it like this:

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So either some main interests are only there to ruin relationships (doesn't feel right, because why would they be main interests is that's all they're there for?) or some characters are there to ruin relationships with the main interests (more likely, thinking of Miri and Julia as good examples).

Evil?

 

[JorgeÚnico]

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I've download the full 0.13.2 zip file instead of using the patches, and try to get through this part and it still timesout and becomes unresponsive. please help

Play on mobile, sometimes crashes happened even with the higher espectations.

 

[JorgeÚnico]

Thank you both for your work guys

Compressed file

 

[JorgeÚnico]

Walkthrough Update

I've updated my walkthrough on my post

Or here is a direct link: Intertwined-0.13.2_walkthrough-rev-1.5.pdf

Visit my thread to post suggestions for my next work.

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Cheers,
Mr Bubu

Guide of the episodes.

 

[TonyMurray]

Evil?

In the answer Nyx gave on Discord, she said "evil" at the end of the line. I included the screenshot in the post you replied to.

(Also, please try to use the multi-quote function, instead of posting multiple replies in a row!)

 

[valbitterb]

Perhaps. Making sex scenes with a character you identify with on some level for a bunch of horny randos on the Internet might give you pause too.

Touché

That's awkward too, yes.

And most of us horny randos don't look like the MC or have his magic penis wand. (Random user reply to that: Speak for yourself valbitterb!)

 

[JorgeÚnico]

For those who wants to get the compressed version without searching through countless pages... Here it is.

Not enough...

 

[Justaphase]

If Nyx does have an issue with her self-insert being an LI, then why put a self-insert in the game or make her even an option?
She made that decision, noone else. Given all of the content we already got at the beach with Val, giving her a full lewd scene isn't that much of a stretch.
I believe that the two "characters" who are going to die will be Ethan and Zach.

 

[Dessolos]

I believe that the two "characters" who are going to die will be Ethan and Zach.

Honestly that's a pretty good guess because Nyx said you can't prevent it , it will always happen no matter what. So no choice will matter for the deaths.

 

[JorgeÚnico]

Updated my Android port to v0.13

Omg yes! after 126 Pages there's a Port. (v1.3 but It full size are 4,28 GB)
P.D: Really unestable (not sure if all phones works with the animation)

 

[Elduriel]

I believe that the two "characters" who are going to die will be Ethan and Zach.

way too easy imo, and not enough drama... Ethan is a maybe, but one of them will be a woman, guaranteed.

 

[Justaphase]

way too easy imo, and not enough drama... Ethan is a maybe, but one of them will be a woman, guaranteed.

Guaranteed by who? I think that it makes the most sense, especially because you can't do anything to prevent it. Ethan and Zach are assholes no matter what choices you make in the game.
Maybe not dramatic enough for you but certainly satisfying IMO, to see those fuckers burn to death in a car crash.

 

[Dessolos]

way too easy imo, and not enough drama... Ethan is a maybe, but one of them will be a woman, guaranteed.

Yeah im thinking Iris as she doesn't even feel like a side girl to me. With her listening to the conversation with John she probably will find a way to get involved at some point.

I'm not ruling Val out till I see the next update or 2 but I also kind of don't think she will die either. Not because she will lose subs and fans because of it. I just have a gut feeling also with the character deveolopment we just had it's hard for me to see it personally. Unless Nyx just wants to be the ultimate troll to build something up just to tear it down lol. But to me it would feel weird to build a character up that much and give some damn good character building like we had in the last update just to kill her off unless it happens basically right when the game is over.

 

[MoonMeToTheFly]

Spoiler: Might be spoiler

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[Elduriel]

Guaranteed by who?

me of course, who else, write it down

Yeah im thinking Iris as she doesn't even feel like a side girl to me. With her listening to the conversation with John she probably will find a way to get involved at some point.

yeah Iris is also a real possibility, high on my list next to John and Val